Fat Uncle's Abandoned Book List

Grain- 1. The fancy settings of the plug-in are not impossible, but the result of not being able to keep up with the writing style and trying to write it clearly is that every time the plug-in is played, it is so confusing that people just want to skip it. 2. The plug-in is set to randomly draw talents, but in fact, it is quite speechless to have nothing at all. 3. The feeling of the mysterious side of the wizard is not written out. I have been thinking about it, and I feel that it is not even as interesting as the arcane magic of the enemy force. 4. The protagonist's personality is too kind and too orderly, which fails to highlight the cruel background of the wizard style. 5. It's not enough to be cool. The upgraded official wizard sounds like he's very powerful, but he gets beaten throughout the process. To put it simply, it's tasteless... I still have a dozen chapters to go and I'm too lazy to read them, so I'm going to give up.

Grain- The first 30 chapters were originally recommended, with good writing and good settings, but in the following chapters, the protagonist suddenly became very mother-in-law. He talked all day long, mixed with the love and hate of the kindergarten at eight o'clock in the Potter group. There was no fun and a lot of bad things. The way he came up with to "bewitch" Lily was actually "sincere"... I almost had a stroke when I saw it...

Food and grass-~food and grass The writing is good, and the plot at the beginning is okay, but after entering the school, the plot suddenly takes a turn for the worse and becomes extremely boring. The whole nanny, you are already aboriginal, why do you still take care of the protagonist group like this... Next, there is the character of the protagonist, Lockhart, who can fight, is an older brat, and his speech style is greasy, which is really not likable. All in all, it can be regarded as a decent food. If you can accept the nanny + brat protagonist, it can be eaten by HP fans in the same period.

The food and grass are getting worse and worse, the spiritual energy is lost, and the end of the world has become silent. To be honest, it's understandable that you'll run out of inspiration after playing too many jokes and doing too many things, but why is it that your ability to tell good stories has declined? The story is not even unfolded at the beginning and I just give you three chapters of world geography, and then there is an inexplicable part about a boss recruiting an apprentice. I gritted my teeth and endured the smelly and long old woman's foot bindings. After the first ten chapters, it got a little better. I thought it was going to be interesting, but the more I watched, the more and more something went wrong. The protagonist became more and more green tea, and he was playing green tea between two men... I think you should add a label to this in the male video... Then he started to talk about the setting of the power system in a large section... Where did he learn this rubbish writing method? Wasn't this the author like this before? No wonder he was questioned about selling his account Finally, in the past, I respected this author more because he didn't practice banning or deleting posts, but this time he hired the operator and started to do that. I thought he would still write a self-deprecating diary at the end of each chapter. However, after becoming a master, he became so arrogant that the book was at odds with the opinions of readers, which is very sad.

For example, if the previous book was about boiled beef and this one is about boiled fish fillets, and you want to say that the two dishes are different, then I agree; but I just finished the previous one and the boiled beef was still a bit greasy, and if your next one is about boiled fish fillets, I can only laugh. From the cooking method (theme), auxiliary materials (accessories) to seasoning (the protagonist in another world pretends to shock the player in an endless loop), the similarity is as high as 90%. Only the plating (Western fantasy background) and the main ingredients (protagonist) are slightly different. I don't know what tricks the chef can do/want to do in the future. Anyway, after one bite, I just feel tired... If you haven't read the previous book, you can read it. After all, the original work is quite good. How can it be worse if you copy it?

Reduce the evaluation to food- The book has only been about forty chapters, and the story hasn't even started yet when he started frantically writing emotional dramas. If it's a serious emotional drama, forget it. In fact, it's just the author's personal sexual desire for Faye Wong. He also added lyrics to ten chapters, accounting for one-fifth of the total number of chapters. You really want to use the content of the novel to chase stars, right? It's true that no matter how good the writing style is, it can't withstand the author's illness. ----- It's hard to comment on super seedlings. For now, I'll give you food and grass. Although the author himself said that he was inspired by urban monsters, the "homage" of the characters currently appearing is a bit too much. In fact, the author's writing style is not bad, and the description of the completely original characters is also good. If you can write it well and write your own things, it should be very good. If you really want to pay tribute, just add some small easter eggs. There is no need to force some characters that are very similar to the urban monsters (for example, I am a fan of the urban monsters book, and I bought a set of physical books back then. When I read the first few chapters, I almost stopped thinking that it was a mid-version)

Food and grass-~food and grass Dual protagonists, time traveler owl + Batman cub, infinite flow, the world is in HP; Advantages: 1. The writing is pretty good 2. The fun content is okay. Everyone plays Harley Terriers, but this book still managed to make me laugh. Disadvantages: 1. Too many secondary settings 2. I have seen a lot of works in which the combat power collapsed, but it is rare to see it collapse in the free chapter. I am not optimistic about such an operation and regard it as a shortcoming. However, if it is well written, it may become an advantage. 3. The first world I traveled through (Twilight Wolf) was a bit boring. I didn't see any growth in Bruce. I had to rely on the author to give him a boost to pass the level. If the subsequent world behaves like this, I should abandon the book. 4. (Off-site factors) No matter if you discuss the shortcomings in chapter reviews or discussion forums, it will not last long. I don't think an author who is too glassy can make any progress. Summary: If you just want to have fun and don't care about issues such as combat power and design, then it's food and grass. You can take a look at it. If you care about it, it's food and grass. It's not a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless.

Comments on abandoning the book, picking it up, seeing the latest progress, and then abandoning the book again: Good idea, poor performance 1. The most eye-catching Dumbledore legend at the beginning is basically not behind it. 2. One of the main contents is on school affairs. I'm not sure how others feel about it. I personally find it extremely boring. 3. The second main content is about practicing the art of transformation, but there are no details at all. The whole process of the Riddler is probably "Ah, you should practice XXX first" and "Ah, I understand". I suspect that the author has an idea but can't figure out the details at all. 4. The third main content is to introduce Muggle technology into the magical world to bring about changes, but the main character is basically soy sauce and there are no details at all. 5. The rest is about daily life. The only visible part is that the water is pretty good but it's just pure water, with no useful information at all. 6. The original plot has been changed a lot... But it's basically a very boring change. It's basically like a daily HP version where the villain is deleted. In addition, after I posted the above paragraph in the book circle, it was deleted and banned until 2074. If you think it doesn't look good and want to express your opinions, please delete the book directly. Don't waste your time. ------ How should I put it... It's very bipolar. The content of this book is currently divided into two parts. One part is the novel "The Legend of Dumbledore" that the protagonist broke out to make money and the reactions of various characters (including the protagonist himself); the other part is the daily life of Hogwarts modified by the demon after the author added his own understanding, including the administrative system and the protagonist's learning process. The first part of the fairy grass - has provided almost all the fun and highlights of this book so far, and is also the reason why I can continue reading. The second part is a proper poisonous weed. It is dry and hard and difficult to swallow. It is also very long. It is completely copied from the modern university system. Please tell me how many students there are in Hogwarts. How can the academic institution be so bloated? Not to mention the contents of the Demon Club before it was put on the shelves. It was so poisonous that I gave up the book once. Later, I picked it up after I heard that I quit the club... Other HP fans usually read about character interactions or studying magic, but this book is all about dealing with official duties and various human affairs... Come on, I'm only in the first grade, don't you feel disgusted doing this all day long... I have to write several chapters for the exam, which really makes me vomit blood... All in all, it can only be given to Liangcao-, it's a pity. A wonderful beginning.

The author has some ideas, but it doesn't look very good so far. The operation is as fierce as a tiger, and the output is 250, and although it seems to be a magic way, it feels like it is gradually moving closer to the nanny story. It keeps giving benefits, and there is almost no recycling. It is really meaningless to just collect vegetables on the farm, and it is better to sacrifice the world with blood. Maybe it will become more exciting in the future, but for now it looks like dry food.

Grain- The first world is good, but the pace of map switching is terrible. The second world is okay, but I strictly suspect that the author deliberately provoked readers and deliberately used a more abrupt rhythm than the first map change. From the beginning of the third world, Lu Xiaofeng has been constantly rushing to make progress. Lu Xiaofeng has already forced you to do more things than him, and his behavior has become more and more incomprehensible. It is recommended that you check out the first world, it has the level of Grain + Grass, and you can consider it finished after watching it.

Liang Cao, the writing is good, the emotional description is more delicate, but it is also childish, at least from the perspective of an adult time traveler, it is a bit childish.

Poisonous Weed+~Food and Grass- The creativity is okay, the comedy is okay, but the problem is the writing that can be compared to a car accident scene... I really rarely see an author who has written several books and can't even describe it in a simple and straightforward way. Didn't he just replace all the third person pronouns with "it" to make it look old-fashioned? If you don't have that ability, it's better to write in vernacular that's pleasing to the eye. Besides, there's no need to be archaic in comedy writing?

Grain- Get away with the low profile, it looks like an imitation of the Jidao Heavenly Demon + Lime Martial Saint Advantages: 1. The writing is okay, at least the writing is smooth, and the fighting scenes are also good. 2. The Big Muscles Don't Be Human series still has a certain audience. Disadvantages: If you succeed, you will pretend to get away. If you fail, you will pretend to get away. You will be beaten and pushed aside. 1. First of all, a large part of the reason why "Go Away" is so good-looking is that he is actually very good at describing the "horror" atmosphere. When the ghost itself is frightening, the protagonist uses extreme violence to blow everything away to achieve the ultimate satisfaction. The author's performance in this aspect... I'm sorry I can only give zero points. There is no uneasy and scary feeling at all. Killing a ghost is as boring as killing a passerby NPC. 2. The purity is too low, go away. One of the cool points of Liu Da Musha is the simple but stubborn extreme, such as "Add points in dark blue, all give me strength", such as "Break the realm beads for me"; however, the protagonist of this book also practices martial arts, adds points, and has some demon skills. It seems to be comprehensive, but in fact it is gimmicky. It is not as refreshing as directly exerting force to create miracles. 3. One unavoidable poisonous point in the book "Get Out" is the sister control... The author did a good job imitating this point... I hope he won't imitate the leg control and black stocking control in the future. 4. The unique Hong Kong comic flavor of the protagonist of the Gun series... It can be seen that the author is trying hard to imitate it. To be honest, it has the flavor, but it is not enough, far from it. Books that get out of here have always been food~ food+ for me, so I can only give this book a food- for its current performance.

Saw it on the shelves, Poisonous Weed+ Advantages: 1. Good writing style 2. Bonus points for niche themes Disadvantages: 1. Prices are crazy. At the beginning, the whole family was struggling to get a few snacks. One formation only had dozens of spiritual stones. After a few chapters, a plot appeared where a few ordinary pastries were sold for two spiritual stones. In this way, the protagonist could still buy it from time to time to eat and play with his friends. Then later, he learned the exercises and spent hundreds of spiritual stones. You tell me that the protagonist can't afford it...? The genius treasure only costs a thousand spirit stones, maybe even a pastry seller can afford it. 2. The character design is in a mess. The old kid who was still sensible at the beginning immediately changed his mind and attacked the naughty children after it was published. At the beginning of the book, he was still telling small stories to fool the rich second generation. Later, someone led a group of thugs to find the protagonist and asked him to do something. The protagonist directly called him a useless bastard...? Doesn't this force people to kill you? It wouldn't matter if the protagonist was already very powerful. The problem is that he couldn't even dodge a random punch from a thug. If the author hadn't arranged for a passing neighbor to take action, he would have died on the spot. There are many similar plots later in the comments. It's extremely poisonous. 3. It is said that the world of cultivating immortals is cruel, but in reality, it is like old men everywhere. Every now and then, they encounter good teachers who give all their money, honest and rich classmates, and people from an approachable family. Everyone wants to give benefits to the protagonist. Finally, it is an off-site factor. A bunch of negative reviews in the book review area are actually the result of review control, and the comments will be deleted. The actual evaluation is definitely lower than the performance in the book review area.

Well... When I saw it on the shelves, there was nothing wrong with it except that it didn't look very good. 1. The old problem of detective stories is that the methods of committing crimes are over-elaborate and complicated for the sake of complexity, but in fact, they do more and make more mistakes. 2. The character design is quite satisfactory. The protagonist, supporting roles and villains are all standard templates, with nothing outstanding about them. 3. The motive for solving the case is unknown. If the protagonist likes to solve cases, it is strange that he is determined to take the imperial examination and refuses to accept the recommendation; if it is just to gain fame, then why bother with such trouble? If solving crimes is just about pursuing high-ranking officials and good salaries... Wouldn't it be strange to choose a detective as the theme? Might as well be the main writer interspersed with officialdom to solve crimes Basically, if you are a fan of mystery novels, you should find it good. If you are just looking for a casual book to read, I think you can skip it.

I have only read about ten chapters, and there is a lot of interesting information, but the way the story is told... Is more like a story than a novel. Every few sentences of the plot requires a lengthy explanation by the author. There are more narrations than the actual story content. The author has a higher sense of presence than the protagonist, and the reading experience is super fragmented. Maybe some people will like this tune, but I personally can't stand it at all.

The fighting scenes are extremely exciting, but the plot is super boring, and a bunch of pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes are so cliché that it makes people feel sick... I think it would be much better if this author wrote a simpler fantasy or fairy tale about fighting.

There's something about the cool operation, but not much. It's a low-level version of "Don't confiscate my citizenship" in all aspects, and it's extremely low-level. The problem with "Recruitment" is that the part other than the sexy operation has a strong odor, and this is pure poison. It is obviously a world of cultivating immortals. It is full of traditional urban pretense and slaps in the face. It is cliché, watery, and disgusting. The character setting is even more disgusting. There are no normal people in the entire class except dog lickers and green tea. Is it really okay that the world of cultivating immortals is so ruined?

Brief review: I have some imagination, but the writing is completely unsustainable, and the review is too controlling. Advantages: The author spent a lot of thought on the structure of the world, which is indeed interesting, but no more Disadvantages: 1. The character creation is very casual. The protagonist is sometimes meticulous and sometimes very meticulous. He is clearly literate but does not try to communicate with others. However, after being picked up by the heroine, he suddenly starts to actively work as a nanny. 2. The description of the protagonist's abilities is also very sloppy, and many details are not clearly written. The reading becomes like the protagonist suddenly being able to do certain things after encountering something. 3. I just asked in the book club whether these shortcomings have been improved in the future and then deleted the review. I also know that there is absolutely limited room for improvement in this kind of writing attitude. I suggest you not waste time.

Brief comments: The rhythm is sloppy, the writing is a waste, and the writing attitude gradually became casual after it was released. 1. I am obedient to the evil slaves who disgust me, and I strike hard at the bosses who give me benefits, the allies who trained with me, and the loyal sword slaves. 2. The protagonist has a split personality. He is constantly forcing himself not to kill people while killing people like crazy; while talking about pretending to be weak and becoming a master before leaving the organization, he performs various extreme operations to kill instantly for fear that others will not see that he is serious. 3. If you don't know how to write a transformation story, why bother? If the protagonist is physically female and her psychological behavior is like that of a woman, then it's a heroine story. Shouldn't the author arrange for her to be sexually frigid and call it a transformation? 4. The transition from martial arts ghosts to fantasy was too hard. In the past, they were just cutting each other with knives. After it was released, blood mist that can leave the body, water-controlling skills, and immortal characters suddenly appeared without any foreshadowing. It was inexplicable. 5. The plot arrangement is too deliberate. When the protagonist's sword is broken, an enemy with a good knife will come out to give him away; when the protagonist has mastered the original skills to the top, he will have an adventure and a boss will show up to give him new skills. 6. The only good thing is that the writing has gradually fallen apart since it was put on the shelves. Not only the typos and bad sentences, but also the emojis are shown. God knows that seeing the emojis in traditional martial arts literature will make people want to dig out their eyeballs and wash them.