Atlas of Heaven and Man

The first 80 chapters are all well written, both in terms of writing, plot, logic and rationality. However, from the moment the protagonist starts accepting supernatural commissions, the writing is poor and ugly, and the style of painting suddenly changes from a high martial arts➕steampunk theme to a supernatural novel. The key problem is that the protagonist handles several supernatural events without any effect and relies on the guidance of the teacher. Isn't this a high martial arts novel? Why are supernatural events happening one after another? Also, if you take it, there won't be any improvement, it's just a mediocre plot with a low word count! Moreover, the book you wrote is set in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. There are machine guns, mortars, armored vehicles and grenades. So what is the use of writing a bunch of certificates for the protagonist? Especially the weapons certificate and the unlimited counterattack certificate, isn't this funny? Then you also write about rebels, gangs, and other organizations. I think it's funny that several fugitives can get protective clothing and weapons. The protagonists all wear protective clothing and weapons and need certificates. Isn't this funny? All kinds of logic collapse

The writing style is too stiff and lacks the fairy spirit of the past. There are so many titles. It feels like a group of robots talking to each other. You are not a cyberpunk style. If it is not intentional, it is difficult not to suspect that it is a studio ghostwriter. The various settings are strict and the writing style is confusing.

A piece of garbage with one poisonous point in one chapter: Chapter 1: The uncle who lives under someone else's roof and is kind to the protagonist in raising him up. Because the uncle doesn't like the title of uncle, what will happen if the protagonist is changed to an uncle? It's not a big problem. Given the context, people are very concerned about this title and have said it seriously many times. The protagonist must be stubborn? There are different ways to eat, use, and live in other people's things! Just like a SB. In the second chapter, there is a classic protagonist chatting and laughing with the beautiful woman he meets for the first time, and then the senior male supporting actor gets angry, and then he wants to be the protagonist. The protagonist uses the supporting role equipment to slap him in the face, and this added dog must have a background or power outside, and then he will continue to pretend to be cool and slapped in the face. In Chapter 3, after defeating the supporting character of Timgou, I directly know that my cheat needs pleasure to level up. ..... Where did you find out? Can this kind of thing be deduced by defeating a person? Not increasing the sample size? Pure speculation? , In addition, plug-in upgrades require a sense of pleasure... There are really many loopholes in this SB setting.

Have you ever participated in a political struggle? Why is the predecessor dead and gone? It was eaten. There are no clues about parents, and they are only used as spices in life!

An entrance examination requires senior students to take the test, and there is also the problem of high-level monopoly, leaving almost no room for the bottom. Except for the protagonist, other civilians are probably just making up the numbers. Except for the protagonist who is cheating, this setting is only to deepen the protagonist's slap in the face. You can see this in the first 10 photos. You will know after a look.

Rigorous? Are you talking about this highly toxic book? After reading the first 10 chapters, you can tell that this novel is awesome. I guess the author has already sold it.

Dealing with such paper-like so-called cave mysteries is as easy as killing a chicken😘

The realm system is chaotic Economic system is in chaos Man cannot establish The more Goldfinger evolves, the weaker it becomes. It has no effect after the first evolution. Fighter later rewrote the group portrait, and it was a mess. The plot depends entirely on the task pile. The protagonist is a dog who is kept on a leash; The content is about cultivating immortality rather than cultivating immortality, and is about punk rather than punk. Technology or not, weird or not High martial arts but not martial arts, supernatural but not supernatural Five seconds of fighting time, Chapter 3.4 Of being able to swim I've written 1,600 chapters, but the other world hasn't arrived yet. I wrote 1,600 chapters and kept fighting among myself.

I have read more than 200 chapters and would like to share my opinion. From the beginning until now, I have been told that practicing medicine is expensive, and I have been doing tasks such as government affairs, gangs, big companies, shopping malls and movie theaters, supernatural, pagan and other tasks. I was working on tasks almost the whole time, and they were still high-value tasks. How many people were killed, how many places were bulldozed, no bags were licked, no property was searched. The whole process is to chop people with a knife. Just leave after chopping and don't care about anything else. Now when I arrived at Central City, I shouted that I had no money again. Such tyrannical force, so many difficult tasks, but no money was made. Is this because of a lack of care or because the author didn't design the plot well, so he simply asked the protagonist to do the task. The excuse was lack of money to practice. There are hundreds of chapters, all of which are various tasks, one after another, relying on intensive tasks to push the plot. It really makes my head hurt to watch.

Yeah, I had a dream about a shipwreck, and I didn't know who I was having sex with. It seemed like they had agreed upon it. A shipwreck and someone on top of something like a skyscraper. Leave it there and fight. Then they finally went upstairs to fight yesterday, and then came down and fell downstairs. Then someone ran up to the skyscraper and made the skyscraper resemble an external connection. The frame just fell off. Well, I want to smash the sunken ship and that person to death. I don't know if I want to smash it to death. Then the shipwreck gets a makeover. Just stand there hundreds of meters high. Then a bunch of people came out and knelt down on one knee, shouting "leader" or something? Then I woke up and couldn't connect.