My Wife Is Hua Mulan

The dialogue is too childish, like two children playing house, so childish.

The subject matter is good and quite novel. But it feels very white. No one has an online IQ, including the protagonist. It's 100% good that there are so many clickable topics. I estimate that readers who are more than 5 years old and have a bachelor's degree or above. It looked awkward. Readers who are over 10 years old will want to vomit after reading this.

The writing technique is young (; 一_一), the writing style is poor, and the writing is simple and simple. People who like this style can take a look.

I would like to remind the author that in ancient times, it was a disrespectful behavior to call someone by name directly, and it was usually called by word. Maybe I didn't read it carefully, maybe I haven't seen it yet, the protagonist's name is not mentioned, I hope the author pays attention.

The author underestimates the possessiveness of readers, especially in online articles.

It's not the heroine Wan Yutong who writes like this. I feel bad. Let's see what you write next.

As for the author's imagination, I can only say haha ​​and not much else to say.

It's a bit frustrating to watch. A modern person travels to the past and knows that there are no good people. They are all for profit. They are careless and make excuses to promote the plot. It's very blunt.

Why would Mao have such a strange discussion? It is generally accepted that "Mulan Ci" is a Northern Wei folk song. How could Mulan be from the Sui and Tang Dynasties? Could it be that "Mulan Ci" is a prophecy? The source of Hua Mulan's artistic image is "Mulan Ci". After that, it can only be said to be imitation or impersonation, just like Bian Que who has lived for hundreds of years.

Doesn't anyone see why Hua Mulan can join the army in place of her father? There is also a woman, so it's easy to tell that it's a woman unless she looks very similar. So I think Mulan is really not very good-looking😅

I don't believe that no one found out about joining the army for my father for so many years, and I don't think about the three years of being in the army sow racing Diao Chan. It's just that no one reported it, and in ancient times, women who joined the army had to be beheaded.

At the current world level, the strong bows used by fierce generals will not exceed 50 kilograms for horse bows, 60 kilograms for foot bows, and the maximum bow level will be around 100 kilograms. There are reliable records (not just nonsense by literati) in the Qing Dynasty, when a 18-power bow was fired, which is about 120 kilograms. This should be the top level in the world. Under the premise of ensuring accuracy and continuous combat capability, the bow power of a combat bow should not be greater than 60% of your maximum strength.

This emperor killed well, 😁 the author has greatly rewarded him

Hua Mulan's family isn't that rich, right? And a ranch? Will ranchers even be exempted from military service? And what is the first line of Mulan's poem? Chirp after chirp, Mulan is weaving in every household. What does it mean? It shows that Hua Mulan's family is very poor, and her daughter also needs to weave to support the family.

Chang Wei, you said you don't know martial arts!

It's okay, at least your wife is not Meng Jiangnu

Please don't open a harem, don't open a harem, don't open a harem! Let me tell you important things three times. We are here for Mulan! And the other female characters you wrote are really embarrassing! ! ! Please don't open a harem, just protect Mulan honestly and sprinkle sugar in her daily interactions. You have to write about other female characters who are ambiguous, and the protagonist's character is problematic. I don't feel that the protagonist has any personality charm. It's okay for Mulan to marry a chicken and follow a chicken, marry a dog and follow a dog. The other female characters like the protagonist inexplicably! Please focus on writing the protagonist and Hua Mulan! Stop writing about ambiguities with other female characters

The incident around Chapter 815 really disgusted me. It was clear that two envoys from a small country, one of whom had stolen state secret technical documents, and the other who was colluding with court ministers to plot evil, had sent people to monitor them, but no one followed the relevant travelers, and yet they allowed these people to do so. The two groups of people came in and out and accomplished so many things, and even rebelled and assassinated the emperor... Not to mention that a suspected envoy from another country casually entered the sky prison to visit a serious criminal who committed an assassination and rebellion. How could he, the warden, make the decision to let such an important prisoner be visited casually? Don't you need relevant documents? After experiencing such a big event as a rebellion and assassination, Chang'an City did not seal the city gates and conduct a city-wide martial law search. The key suspects were not mentioned and were directly placed under house arrest by the army. You can monitor and follow them, right? How could someone even walk away with several cartloads of confidential technical books? How does such a retarded imperial court govern most of China? From the emperor to the officials, no one has an above-average IQ. Does this dragon chair have an intelligence buff? The protagonist has become increasingly idiotic since he became emperor.

Fattening, look again, the subject matter is very novel.

Suddenly a joke came to mind... Hua Mulan joined the army on behalf of her father, and was attacked by an enemy army. After a wave of brutal fighting, she was seriously injured and fell into a coma, covered in blood. A few days later, she woke up. Seeing this, the medical soldier sighed: "Hey, brother, you were injured too badly. When you were brought back, you were covered in blood, and even the ancestral treasure was gone. But don't worry, the wound has been stitched up for you..." "It's been stitched..." "It's been stitched..."

Let Hua Mulan share her man with other women? Anyone can write about the harem. Since I have chosen the role of Hua Mulan, I must live up to the name Hua Mulan. Sperm on the brain? Still haven't seen a woman? What NC thinking?

Imagine your senior sister as Hua Mulan

This is not the point! This is just an entry point for the story. The plot needs plot requirements! If everything were written according to reality! Then why don't you go read the history books!

If you want to be happy, you can fake your death to escape, if you want to be tortured, the female supporting role will be fucked by the emperor. Well, but the subsequent development may be roughly like this. The female supporting role is sad and becomes a princess. Junsheng is the emperor next door. Xiaoai kills the emperor and bullies the orphans and widowed mothers. Junsheng is unhappy that his son is being bullied. It would be better to kill Xiaoai himself and bully the orphans and widowed mothers. After Ming Junsheng became a powerful minister, he felt that his name was not powerful enough, so he named him Kuang Yin...

There is a reason for this achievement after writing so many words. The author is Hua Mulan's licking dog. The character creation is not to mention other than Hua Mulan. The protagonist talks about great principles while being thick-faced and evil-hearted. It disgusts me. To be honest, this book was written just to lick Mulan.

It feels like the protagonist's IQ is online at times and not at the same level at other times, and Hua Mulan is so holy that the supporting characters are trying to trick the protagonist and ask if there is any other way. My protagonist feels tired. Also, the protagonist gave up a lot for Hua Mulan. The most annoying thing was that he killed the emperor for Hua Mulan, and Hua Mulan was still crying. I was speechless. In the end I really couldn't bear to abandon the book. The final comment is that Hua Mulan drags the protagonist to Kai Wushuang.

Meng Jiangnu cried at the Great Wall. This should be a political show and smear. It is the same as the uprising of Chen Sheng and Wu Guang, and the uprising of Liu Bang killing the white snake.

This book will be much better if you imagine Hua Mulan as Sister Yu from the Northeast.

First of all, I skipped chapters to read this book, not because I couldn't stand it, but because the protagonist is the author and it's too modern thinking. With two emperors in one year, everyone can become an emperor. If the emperor is so easy to kill, then there will be nothing wrong with Li Shimin and Zhu Yuanzhang. He also said that others are loyal ministers and do not want to be sinners. He also said openly that my history of Youzhou is a job and no one can influence it. I don't know who was almost killed by the county magistrate at the beginning.

In fact, I really feel that there is no need to compare these truths. The real Mulan was a disgraceful thing for a woman to join the army in feudal ancient times, let alone being widely circulated. Therefore, there are almost zero official historical records about Mulan. I think the author just wants to fill such a historical gap. After all, I think that aside from the environment and other factors at the time, I am still more curious about Mulan's life.