Military Industry Empire

I reached chapter 76 of the poison test and I really couldn't hold on any longer. Not to mention anything else about this book, there are a lot of typos in the book. The typo rate is 1%. What do you want readers to think? This is still the original version. If I hadn't clicked in it myself, I would have suspected it was a pirated version. Moreover, the formatting is a mess. Who has ever seen a paragraph with hundreds of words? Could the author be any lazier? While asking for readers' support, you don't even do the basic formatting and proofreading. Unless a reader is crazy, he will give you a recommendation or a monthly vote. Abandoned. (Readers are warned that the content of this book is more poisonous and the article is not on topic.)

This is not a military article, this is a military article disguised as military industry. A large amount of the text in this article describes military life in detail, and most of the research, development, and production of military industry are briefly mentioned. The person sitting here probably knows a lot about industry and military industry, and has a relatively good understanding of weapons and equipment. The person sitting here is probably a soldier or has served in the military.

Maybe it's because the author has a relatively real life experience background and didn't pay attention to deleting details when writing. After reading a few chapters, I didn't want to continue. This kind of experience can be found in many industrial and military novels. Generally, novel writers make additions and add details. Authors with life experience should do more subtraction.

After reading Chapter 49, I was poisoned to death. Inventing a good weapon actually frightened the senior officials of various departments and put the protagonist and some supporting characters under control? Instead of a reward, he was locked up for investigation? What plot is this? If only it were like this! Can China's military industry develop to this extent? Can China reach this point? Don't all those great talents in science and technology hide their own clumsiness? Disgusting, extremely disgusting. I heard that the heroine will be changed later? Fortunately, I saw the abandoned book here. Otherwise it will disgust me for a month.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. The more I read, the fewer and fewer books I have to read. I am becoming more and more picky about writing, character creation, including the character's personality, and the general pretense and slap in the face are becoming more and more boring. So far, only this book and the blind man's book "Rebirth of a Common Man" can keep me going.

I don't want to watch it when I see the male protagonist accept it because he was set up and give up on the female protagonist. He has no sense of responsibility at all. Is this love?

What is silk meter, and who can machine 0.10 Silk meters? In the 1980s, the machining accuracy of township enterprises was at the 0.02 Mm level. Let me teach you common sense. 1 Mm = 100 silk meters. There is no silk meter. In 1984, our factory purchased a CNC machine. The machining accuracy of the machine tool is 0.005 Mm. In the 1980s, township and village enterprises could not buy machine tools. They usually made them by themselves, such as the 6316 lathe. For example, the 620 lathe could only be bought from Tunxi, but the 620 machine tool from Shenyang was not available.

To be honest, I really like this book, but when I read this, it really made me sick to my stomach. Is the protagonist an idiot, or is the author an idiot? Being kidnapped and repaying kindness with kindness? ? ? Were people idiots back then? Or are we all idiots? First of all, the identity of the protagonist is very unusual. If this happened, he should be charged with treason. There is no reason to kidnap military technicians, or is it just as simple as registering with superiors? Well, there were many companies that couldn't survive at that time. Let's kidnap them. Anyway, there is no responsibility. If you kidnap, you can still get some benefits! ! ! The kidnapper and host must die, and the factory must die as well. Why should you help him? It's because they kidnapped you. Poor them! ! This is not soft-heartedness, but the behavior of a mentally retarded idiot! Forget it, delete it and stop reading it.

From Wei Tui to Jiang Chen, because the family business requires marriage for success, and then I immediately forgot about the person Liu Yun, and then I stopped watching.

How many people have been persuaded to quit by PS one after another?

When I saw the change of girlfriends, I gave up the book. I tolerated all the PS at the beginning. I also ignored the inconsistencies with historical facts and the names such as "Four-nine Cities". But just changing girlfriends like this, haha, is this going to open a harem in the future? Or is it that the red flag does not fall but the colorful flag flutters? Anyway, does your current wife owe you anything? The purpose of reading books at Qidian is to have fun. Goodbye to you for this depressing part. Don't talk about Mr. Lei, I only see a degenerate bureaucrat who has forgotten his original intention.

After reading Chapter 88, I really can't stand it anymore. I'm not poisoned, but disgusted. The writing is not that good, but it doesn't matter, but reading the novel is a pleasure. The most disgusting plot is repaying evil with kindness. This kind of nonsense plot is unbearable. Is it being labeled as a hat, and you have to discuss with others how your wife's life is. Just pretend to be pitiful and everything will be fine, 😰😰😰. The plot of the Virgin Bitch is at least disgusting to more than half of the readers! !

I read Chapter 35. To be honest, I really like this theme, and the main plot is okay. I subscribed to 100 chapters just to leave a message. . . As a result, I was persuaded to quit by the author with a lot of PS. I have never seen a 20-year-old bookworm write novels like this. It was too ridiculous. One PS after a while. . I have read many novels that were poisoned by the plot. This is the first time I have seen one that was poisoned by the author. . . Goodbye. . ™, Subscriptions cannot be canceled. Waste of money! !

Ps + hydrology of garbage science

If you don't know how to write about daily life, just try to write less and more about military affairs. Isn't that cool? Or is there something wrong with you? ? ?

It talks a lot about human nature and sophistication and has little technical knowledge. I definitely can't tell you the real data, nor can I talk about the principles or processes? Shengong Renyuan is pretty good and has a lot of professional knowledge.

The more I watch, the more rubbish and brainless the plot becomes.

There is no strong sense of age. Also, when writing about military industry, write less about military affairs. If you write about military affairs, don't write about military industry.

I saw Chapter 378 and can't stand it.

The two shortcomings of China's industry are materials and processing. It is not something that can be reversed by passing through an industrial giant. However, industrial literature rarely starts from these two aspects, which is a bit regretful.

Liu Yun left, and then Wei Lingling got pregnant and you got married. Well, although I don't agree with it, I think it's acceptable. After all, there will be men who choose this way. But I think it will take a long time to cope with this choice. At least I will be closed for a while, either to completely empty my mind or to be too busy to think about anything else. It is impossible to get married directly and act like a loving couple.

Originally, I quite liked the subject matter and the rhythm of this book, but the author had to attach a PS at the end of each chapter and write hundreds or even thousands of words. I am a book listener and like to play games and listen to books at the same time. I have no time to press the next chapter and skip the hundreds of words of rubbish at the end of each chapter. It is quite a show and makes me sick. Maybe many readers also complained about this issue in the chapter reviews. The author also said several times that since people didn't like the PS at the end of the chapter, he wouldn't write it. Hey, he got smart and changed [PS:] to [Confession:]. Okay, after all, compared to the long trash talk before, he shortened it to two or three hundred words. I endured it and continued to listen. When I heard that in Chapter 86, the heroine watched helplessly as the hero was kidnapped, everyone collapsed. The hero was beaten by the kidnappers and was strangled until he bled. Then the kidnappers misunderstood a few words and started to make some excuses. The hero was about to forgive them. I guess the hero would have to go out of his way to exonerate them later. . . Haha, you don't care about your personal safety at all. Regardless of the fears of your family, colleagues, and friends, you just want to care for the kidnappers anyway, right? Oh, the kidnappers were employees of another arsenal. They kidnapped people with guns, and the kidnapper's deputy director was also a retired company commander. Are they all legally illiterate? The deputy factory director sent an unclear telegram, and they robbed people at gunpoint. They stabbed themselves in the leg and kidnapped them, and the matter was over. The male protagonist was so smart that the public security, national security, security and superior departments were concerned about it and pretended that it had never happened? It can be seen that the author wants to depict the image of a combat hero who changes his job to a small factory and works hard to save the factory and its employees. But your writing skills are not good, and you can't stand up as a person. Your behavior of stabbing yourself in the leg is more like a robber. The male protagonist also sympathized with him because of this, and he backhandedly gave them orders, which was very similar to the gangsters in Hong Kong movies. He showed all the charlatanism and was not at all like an intellectual who graduated from university and engaged in scientific research. What the hell is this? I also gave 100 points to anyone who wanted to post a chapter review, but I didn't expect that there wouldn't be so many words in it. I have put the game aside and stopped playing it. I have to come to the comment thread to complain about it. It is poisonous and disgusting! Delete the book and run away.

I bought it during the event and after looking at a few pictures, I can't explain the results.

Is the male protagonist a stallion? If you fall in love with someone you meet, you have to be ambiguous when you meet a woman?

After reading the first 20 chapters, the military-industrial article should be written in the rhythm of a military article. The main plot is unclear, the plot advances slowly, and the plot is all irrelevant to the main plot of military industry. In Chapter 20, I didn't see any idea of ​​pig's feet developing military industry, and there was no sense of the times in his actions, words, and deeds.

What else do you want from the 15-year-old book? I was also drunk. I saw a lot of people spraying feces in October this year?

It's a good subject matter, and the beginning is pretty good, but then it just starts to get messy. Disgusting people

Brothers, don't read the comments. If you think you are interested, just read it. If you are angry, just click ❌. If you read the comments to find books, there is basically no ambition. After all, everyone's preferences are different. One person's honey and another's arsenic are inevitable. Just follow your heart.

After reading the first chapter, I was very curious when the protagonist was going to get married at the age of 21 in 1981. At the age of 40? In 2000, the woman probably wouldn't ask to buy a house, right? You can't just talk about marriage at the age of 5 or 60!

Since I bought it, I finished reading it. To be honest, it has quite a lot of bugs. I also took a quick look at the new book, which is not my cup of tea. I can just call it a complaint after reading it.