Hunting the World

This is garbage. It's purely based on luck. It doesn't show any of the system's power. There's infrared scanning and danger warnings, yet every time someone gets shot—usually crippled—they're back running and jumping again shortly afterward? Are you kidding me? A rifle bullet wound is at least the size of a finger, a laceration; you'd be crippled even if you didn't die.

At first, the book was quite good, but as the plot progressed, the protagonist's personality and the female characters were simply unsuitable for this mercenary war genre. The protagonist, as the mercenary leader, was too weak-willed; even with his excellent marksmanship and protagonist halo, he could only survive to the end of the book, while the other members would gradually die.

I feel nauseous whenever I see murder; I just can't watch it.

If you're writing about mercenaries, just write about mercenaries. Why involve any countries? Can't you write without involving countries? Did you even clearly define what you wanted to write when you started? How many good mercenary novels involve any national conflicts? Also, you're writing for your readers, not for yourself. If you want to do whatever you want, don't upload it!

I figured I knew a little bit about guns, let alone holding my breath before firing, but how could I not distinguish between a magazine and a clip?

Are mercenary salaries really that high? You'd easily make $1 million or $2 million... I've heard the highest daily wage is only around a thousand dollars, maybe tens of thousands a month? It can't be that outrageous!

Did the author consider the issue of stamina? I've only read a few chapters, do you guys think it makes sense? Why are the idiot admins deleting comments? Can't we even point out what's unreasonable? Does the author know how heavy an automatic rifle is, how heavy a sniper rifle is, how heavy a fully loaded magazine is?

What's the difference between a person who doesn't work hard and a salted fish? But even if a salted fish tries hard, it's still a salted fish!

If you're looking for a major plot development, sorry, the whole thing is riddled with plot holes. If you just want to see the protagonist kill people, this story is actually not bad—it's basically all fighting and killing, and almost everyone except the protagonist dies, which is quite realistic.

I've read up to chapter 47. Every woman who comes along gets aroused just seeing the protagonist kill someone, and he wants to sleep with them all. Is this a harem novel? If so, I'll probably drop it already.