Life Begins with A Soldier’s Story

Author, have you never been a soldier? Don't have any military knowledge? A trainee soldier from the National Defense University is about to graduate and still needs to join a company of new recruits in the grassroots army? You wrote this stuff to make a veteran feel uncomfortable after reading it.

Stop writing about Fire Phoenix. I really can't stand it.

Write less about special operations (mainly because there are too many people writing about it, so you can probably guess it), and write more about conventional operations. Now that you have reached level 6, you can be the commander of a combined brigade. Write less about competitions, selections, etc., You can become a division commander.

The plot is very novel and makes people want to read on. It is not an exaggeration to call it spiritual food. I like the male protagonist Qiyue and the female protagonist Manqing. For military dramas, a single female protagonist is the best. Because soldiers are worthy of respect, and sentimental people cannot believe it, because even their own feelings cannot last forever, so there is no reason to believe that he can protect the country, and everything is going well for the family. No woman can tolerate her husband having another lover. No matter how much you like her, don't underestimate a woman's IQ, especially a woman in love who is closest to Sherlock Holmes. Although I am writing an article, I also need to be close to life and enter reality. Author, I want a single female protagonist, not a harem, please, please!

Every time I read a novel about soldier assault, I hope that Shi Jin will not be discharged from the army and Wu Liuyi will not be injured. As for Xu Sanduo, I think it still needs to be polished 😂 Without a little pressure, this strong man will always be a coward.

Personally, I don't think it's necessary to stand up for Xu Sanduo (especially to stand up so that Xu Sanduo doesn't make a fool of himself is really annoying). If you keep protecting him but harming him, it's better to let things take their own course. The only two things that need to be changed in Soldier Assault are: First: change Shi Jin's shooting during the exercise, premature exit from the exercise, and achieve a good result at the same time. Second point: Pay attention to the 561s when selecting special forces, and don't let the 561s get injured and retire. Achievement is what makes people proud. It is difficult for a proud person to change without experiencing setbacks.

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Is the protagonist a fake special forces member? Anyone can check his information, anyone can bully him, and there is no cost. Are all his contributions fake? Anyone can get his details. No need to keep it secret? Is the confidentiality policy fake?

How many fellow Taoists came here from the eunuch's soldiers' surprise attack?

The author praises the Desert Eagle too much. To be honest, this gun can only be reduced to a toy for the rich. It is not suitable for battlefield use at all, and it cannot be used by mercenary special forces.

🫠As long as those who write about soldier assaults have some common sense, they won't be bad at writing But this, I don't know if it will be good later It's Chengcai, tmd film and television dramas are not consistent with the original work In the original work, Chengcai is the army who enters through the back door, and Shi Jin didn't want him at all. He is feeling inferior now, wondering how to build a good relationship with his boss, so that he will have no way out in the future The relationship-finding part has been omitted in the film and television series, but the fundamental purpose of becoming a talent has not changed How can he compete with a protagonist who enters the recruit camp by helicopter and has been a military cadet for three years? It's probably too late to be flattering The author doesn't understand the purpose of becoming a talent, and thinks he just loves to flatter others by nature, right?

Ten monthly passes, can I add more?

A researcher engaged in a high-security project in the military went abroad privately with a team from a Hong Kong company without explaining anything, and conducted transactions with unknown persons. It was okay and very strong.

Author, "Fire Phoenix" is really a rubbish plot. I want to persuade you to quit the plot. A colonel can just come and question me personally. I'm really speechless.

Why write about so many women? Are they ambiguous? Don't forget that you are writing about a soldier. Even the protagonist is annoying to me now. Don't watch it, it's annoying! ! !

I was speechless when I saw someone writing about Fire Phoenix again. I personally hate this show for several reasons: ① Selection: Fire Phoenix is ​​the first female special forces unit formed in the military to cope with the new situation, but the selection is messy and occurs in all departments. I just want to ask, can those who only go through basic military training and then a few months of special training become an excellent special forces? Could it be that such a large military region couldn't select a dozen female soldiers from field units for training? ! ! ②I remember there was a plot where Ye Cunxin's mother asked her to go directly to the training base. It seemed that a friend of her mother's in the military helped her. Since Fire Phoenix is ​​the first female special forces unit, the level of confidentiality is not to say high, but at least it is not bad. The military region must pay attention to it, but Zhang Xiaoyan went in directly. What the hell... Could it be that Zhang Xiaoyan's friends in the military don't know the powerful relationship, or are the top leaders in the military region, or that her friend is a big boss of the Central Military Commission? ? ! ③Tan Xiaolin is indeed excellent based on her written performance, but let someone who has never been on the battlefield or killed an enemy serve as an instructor of the women's special forces that the military region attaches great importance to? I want to ask if the above is serious? ! ! ④ Judging from the scenes in the play, Donghai City is not a border city but a very prosperous city. I just want to ask: How did the black cat transport such a big bomb to the city? Is this an insult to the military or relevant departments stationed at the border? Disclaimer: The above is not my insistence. Since the drama is a military drama based on reality, shooting and cannon shooting cannot be real, but at least the basics must be real. . If you have any different opinions, you can put them forward. After all, the above are just my personal opinions. Please don't criticize me.

An important cadre at the deputy corps level, cooperating with a small soldier to perform a very dangerous mission, how can he have the thinking of a senior commander, and how can he justly say that the mission is important? You can't tell what is important, right? Can't we let the commandos act? Just to show off? Are you going to be in danger? No matter from which point of view, the role of the protagonist is far more important than this mission. There are countless solutions, so just choose the most dangerous one? Just pretend to be b? Even during the Anti-Japanese War, a deputy military-level commander went to the front line to fight, but he did not reach the end of the battlefield and did not sit in command. At the most, he was irresponsible and forgot about the mission of the national army. At the most minor level, he was not responsible for himself, his family, and his talent. After all, your talent is far more important to the country than your personal strength. Although I know that the protagonist cannot die

Dear author, can you not praise the protagonist in every chapter? How busy, how powerful, how talented, how how to make your subordinates admire😥Wouldn't it be better to write more about other things?

Ask, how is this book? I've read five chapters and I'm almost addicted, but it's really weird to see that the monthly ticket price is over 1,000+. Can any hero help me clear this up? 🙏

This book should be renamed: Exercise Life from Soldier Assault

Author, what are you doing all day long? If you want to write, you should write well. If you don't want to write well, just stop it. Take a look at what you have written in the past ten days. As a senior general at the deputy military level, what you have to do is to be responsible for the army and the country, not to go to the front line with a group of small soldiers. It will make readers very uncomfortable when you write like this. In real life, if the soldier you wrote about really did this, he would never be promoted, or go to court-martial, because the sense you would bring to the leaders above would appear that you are not responsible for the army, the country, yourself, or the soldiers below. What kind of positions correspond to your responsibilities?

If I were Xu Sanduo, I would also long for the care and help of others. But as an audience, I don't want to be Xu Sanduo, and I even hate Xu Sanduo. In order to cultivate him, the surrounding friends have paid too much, which is too wasteful.

It is said that the early writing was good, mainly to make up for the regret of the soldier Wu Liuyi retiring during the assault. But there has been a bit of chaos since the beginning of the DA division. It was not until the recent plot of Wolf Warrior and I Am a Special Forces that the author began to let himself go. First of all, you have no system at all. The protagonist gives people an inexplicably strong feeling. He is always dull after a few chapters and then suddenly the protagonist explodes when it comes to exercises or tasks. Secondly, the article mentioned that the limit of human attributes is more than 50, but if you look at the attributes of about 15, they are already beating down the national special forces and commanders. At the same time, in the recent article, the mercenaries of the retired special forces of the foreign army were also beaten. I would like to ask if you upgrade to more than 50, will you become a god? Judging from your current thinking, you must be writing the entire plot of "I Am a Special Red Soldier" and "Operation Wolf Warrior Red Sea". If you set and upgrade it like this, in the end it will either end unfinished or be in a different world. Real time simply can't fit in Finally, although it is a military article, you can't ask for too much, but you can't be too exaggerated when it comes to military classification. Do you also need to pay attention to basic common sense? When military officers do business, they cooperate with private enterprises without military qualifications to develop important combat systems. They are also involved in mobile telecommunications and other infrastructure businesses. Scientific researchers, special operations officers, and active military personnel can go abroad freely. At the same time, drug dealers can get such talent information as they want. What do you think of the country? Writing to this level, you can't get over what you said earlier, but I hope that if you, the author, really want to finish this book, you will pay attention to the problems and don't write in random directions

That's it. At the deputy military level, major general can't write anymore?

The rapid reaction force is also organized into four departments, which is very problematic in itself. This structure itself is unqualified. The headquarters of the rapid reaction force consists of: Staff Department, Planning Department, Equipment Department, Logistics Department, Material Management Department, Joint Logistics Department, Transportation Department, Information System Support Department, Personnel and Training Department, Intelligence Department, Security Department, Medical Support Department, Guard Department, Political Department, Supervision Department, Finance Department, Compliance and Internal Control Department, Integrity Investigation Department, Aviation Department, and Army Department These departments should all be necessary. Only with qualified structures can they respond quickly. Each unit under the rapid reaction force should be multiple air assault regiments.

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