Calamity on the Immortal Path

It's not a traditional story about fighting monsters and upgrading. It doesn't feel exciting, nor is it very unpleasant. It doesn't have a very interesting plot, nor is it very boring. The characters are not very good, but they are not bad either. The writing is quite good, but it is very cumbersome. The setting is very cumbersome, and the plot development is also very cumbersome. Things that can be explained clearly in one or two hundred words have to be written in one or two chapters. Overall, it is very mediocre. What I don't like the most is the amnesia joke. From the comments, it seems that the heroine has always been in a state of amnesia. Anyway, I don't like it very much. She is like a fool and doesn't understand anything. She has to form a team and rely on her teammates to make up for common sense. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to play by herself, but currently, it seems that the heroine brings her teammates with her no matter what she does. It is estimated that all the subsequent experiences will be in a team. And it seems that the whole story is only in the small world of Fuyue Realm. I am a little confused. How can the world of cultivating immortals, which is only at the Nascent Soul stage, write more than 6 million words. Originally, I was looking forward to the heroine going to all the worlds. . . How to describe it, it feels like writing some trivial things in a large world view, but the writing is very good, so I always feel that it is a pity to discard it if it is tasteless.

I think a big reason why this book is not popular is that it is placed in the wrong section. Obviously the style is not the same as other novels in fantasy romance, okay? Obviously it should be in the classical fairy tale! How can people who like to read similar articles about cultivating immortals find it?

I watched it a long, long time ago. The setting is novel and there are many wonderful ideas, but it is too long, too long. I saw that it was abandoned in the middle. I opened it a while ago and saw that it was still being updated. I really admire the author for his great perseverance. I would like to give my own opinion. The world is huge and there are many pitfalls. Can the author fill it in faster? Also, the heroine feels like she is constantly changing the map, and the people around her change again and again, and it feels like she can't remember it. This kind of writing will make people lose motivation if they are not careful, just like playing a game, upgrading and killing monsters becomes a daily routine, and it becomes boring. In fact, what I have always wanted to know is when the dimpled boy at the beginning will reunite with the heroine, and the background of the organization. If you change the map to fight monsters, it is best to fix the team members, then write out the characteristics of the team members and create a good group image. Will you open it sometimes to see the author's updates? Let me admire you. The author has stopped recently. Is there something wrong or does he not plan to write anymore? I think it's a pity. The beginning is really great, and many of the ideas are wonderful. If I change the way I write it, I might be able to become a god. As I write this, I suddenly think of another book, Senbon Junyang. That one also changes the map to fight monsters, but there are not so many hidden clues and mysteries, and the male protagonist's presence is not high, but there will always be several appearances in the middle. That book also has many shortcomings, but I have to say that the ideas about each world are wonderful. When I read it, I felt that I could take out some of the worlds in it and write a separate fairy tale novel. I can't tell what the difference is, but that one attracted me and I finished reading it. I didn't have enough motivation to abandon this book. I hope the author can improve himself even more. I think you are an author with the potential to become a god.

Wow, please create a character column. Other books have character columns where people can vote, but this one doesn't even have a chance to vote 😭 It's a waste of more than 20,000 of my fan points.

It's hard for the author to come up with such a good plot and work so hard to update the article every day. I sincerely thank the author!

I have read 600 chapters. Here are my thoughts: The first part (the first 80 chapters) is really painful to read. The language is awkward, the characters are not fleshed out, there are too many settings for cultivating immortality, and the plot is boring. I really forced myself to endure and read on. But starting from Chapter 81, when the heroine leaves the underground and enters the mainstream world, the story has a strong plot, reasonable design, and correct views. After Chapter 200, the writing gradually becomes smoother. All in all, it's still worth seeing. Among all the novels written by Qidian about female protagonists cultivating immortality, these should be considered some of the best ones. Five-star praise!

It feels like the heroine is just an eye, an essential cog. What the author wants to write about is a world that is gradually collapsing, and countries and people acting for their own goals. This part is particularly exciting! Readers who like those super cool upgrade streams may be disappointed. This book does not read 5 years later... 2 Years later... This book just tells us that sometimes cultivating immortals is not about meditating in a cave, and improving cultivation is not about gaining treasures by upgrading and fighting monsters. The heroine is truly growing up, experiencing the world and making choices. What's very nice is that this book doesn't make the heroine feel aggrieved. The character and identity of the heroine make the tone much more relaxed! Sure enough, "saving" the world and "breaking" the prison of the world are still different. I miss the mage 🤫🤫🤫

There is no male protagonist, right? I don't like fairy tales with male protagonists, because they are all here to torture the female protagonist, and then the female protagonist is a masochist who likes to warm up to the man's butt.

The writing is quite good, and the writing style and IQ are also online, but it's not quite like a fairy tale. It doesn't have any cultivation upgrades. Even if there are secret treasures, the heroine can't use them. It's more like a detective suspense novel, always reasoning. It's a million words and the heroine is still losing her memory. It is estimated that the entire article revolves around that mysterious organization. Therefore, it may not be in line with the taste of readers who are accustomed to reading fairy tales about upgrading, treasure hunting, and map replacement.

The plot of this book was set up in such a way that it was difficult for me to figure it out. The sense of plausibility was really refreshing!