Immortal Cultivation in Progress

If there is no male protagonist, I will feel bored and easily give up on the novel. I still like the fairy tales where men and women interact, not the boring kind, but have their own paths and support each other. Looking at many popular film and television fairy tales, fairy tales, even if they are for men, they all have CP. Those who can integrate love into the story without affecting the quality of the whole article, or even add icing on the cake, are great. If in order to cater to the public taste, in order to emphasize that cultivating immortals, one should cut off love and have no distractions, it would be too boring to eliminate all love factors. Cultivation and love are not cakewalks. I still hope to have a male protagonist. Personally, I don't like the character design of Mary Sue all the way. I enjoy the stars and the moon. After that, I still say that my heart is on the road and I don't want to fall in love. If there was no protagonist like that, it would be called White Lotus.

After reading more than 600 chapters, I really wanted to review it. The novel is very good, but I can't stand the character of the heroine. She doesn't do things straightforwardly, is sloppy, and repeats it over and over again, which is annoying to watch. You have to think about the opportunity for a long time. Besides, you can have partners on the road to immortality. If you can't be a peacock demon lover, you can be friends. Now that you have a contract, you have to break it off. It's hypocritical. Isn't it tiring to be so indecisive in cultivating immortality?

Forgive me, I really cannot accept the handling of Su Wuyi's emotional line. What everyone wants to see is that the heroine is awake throughout the whole process and does not develop too many emotional lines with others, instead of like you who clearly developed the emotional line and then destroyed it This book's treatment of Su Wuyi's emotional line is a sticky one The confusion tortures the readers, just like the bloody idol dramas at 8 o'clock ten years ago. Either don't develop too many plots with Su, but the author has written to that extent, but you force yourself not to form a Taoist couple because the heroine openly and secretly refuses to face her own heart. It is completely overcorrected. Where is the Taoist heart? In the end, the heroine finally figured it out and went to find Su Wuyi, and then she gave up when she saw Su Wuyi staying with other women . . . . . Author, you are good at torturing people back and forth.

Although the author said there is no male protagonist, the female protagonist has been entangled with her male counterpart Feng Wuyi for a long time, which takes up about half of the novel.

In this book, cultivating immortality is about avenging one's mother, but the protagonist's character is inconsistent and not decisive. Various male cultivators kill people because of their appearance. Later, the swan-faced man wants to kill him, and the protagonist plans to kill him, but in the end he is reluctant to kill him. In fact, it is still based on his appearance. The Ming Leopard episode is full of sweet and heart-warming plots, just like the CP immortal novels. The man has a super high level of cultivation and good looks, and he saves the heroine in every possible way. There is also a random murder plot later on. Killing a maid, and other maids did not hinder the protagonist. It turns out that the owner of the maid has sworn to protect the maid. I originally wanted to see the protagonist avenge his mother, but I really don't like this kind of protagonist. He doesn't do what he should do, is sanctimonious, and kills people indiscriminately (even though it was just once, but I just don't like to violate the principles of normal people and kill innocent people).

It's a disgusting book. There are male supporting characters everywhere, and the vicious ones are all female. The inexplicable emotional scenes make the female protagonist look like a bitch.

I don't quite understand. If there is no cp, shouldn't there be no emotional line? Why does the heroine still have an emotional line? She is hesitant to do things on the emotional line. If this article is placed in a fast-travel novel, the heroine will definitely be a self-righteous and hypocritical person.

Opportunities keep coming, but if you don't improve your cultivation level, you will go to the secret realm at the second level of Qi training. . . .

After seeing the heroine's behavior towards Su Wuyi in Chapter 750, I went straight to the ending and found that she was just playing with Su Wuyi. I felt disgusted with the heroine and abandoned the story. The first three emotions were written in a way that made people feel uncomfortable, and the characters collapsed. By Su Wuyi, the heroine was already annoying. The emotional lines were forcibly written and then cut off. From Xiao Yao, Chu Qingwu, Qian Feng, and Su Wuyi, they were all forced to create copies for the heroine. The writing was so poor. Xiao Yao: A young man's relationship, devoted to the heroine wholeheartedly, and left the scene in despair. Qianfeng: The inexplicable emotional line, forced. Chu Qingwu: What a good character design at the beginning, but the emotional drama of the heroine was added later, which ruined the character design. The most innocent one is Su Wuyi. The heroine took the initiative, fell in love with someone, got involved with him, and formed a bond of mutual agreement between two people who liked each other at the same time. Then she turned around and said that she had no intention of becoming a Taoist couple with him, and only wanted to become an immortal. She broke off the relationship with people, ditched them, and continued to practice as an immortal😊. She was a scumbag who played with body and emotions. Su Wuyi was a big enemy. He was disturbed by the heroine's advances until he vomited blood, and then he was poisoned by the heroine. After he fell in love with the heroine and gave her his life feathers to form a mutual agreement, he was slaughtered by his subordinates, was knifed and used as a thug for the heroine, and then was dumped. [Eating Melon] was the worst.

There are more than 1,100 chapters in the book, and I have read more than 300 chapters. The heroine is still on the seventh level of Qi training. The enemies are all above the foundation level. Problems encountered are ultimately solved by outsiders (outsiders). This arrangement is very confusing. I jumped to read it just to see the heroine become stronger. The article is very disappointed with the lack of regard for one's own cultivation, no matter how many specious reasons he finds!