The Immortal Path of Qin Melody

The author writes so slowly and can still remember the previous plot. I am also very impressed that there are no bugs in the connection. I have almost forgotten the previous plot anyway when I read the book. I read it again and found that there are no particularly big bugs in the connection of the plot. I am also very impressed, but I still want to tactfully remind you, can it be faster?

In the original novel, Mu liked the original heroine, but now the heroine has traveled through time. According to the part where the original heroine teased Senior Brother Mu in this article, as well as many previous foreshadowings, we can know that Mu fell in love with the heroine. Is this yin and yang agreement formed without both parties knowing? According to this article, it can be seen that their yin and yang are in harmony because one of them has the blood of growth and the other has the blood of demonic energy. It is like the two poles of yin and yang. They were formed due to the mistake of yin and yang. They have been together for so long and experienced many things. The heroine will definitely have a good impression of him. Those stories that say there is a male protagonist are all spoiled stories. That's because after there is a male protagonist, the female protagonist is all dependent on the male protagonist and has no sense of independence. But the female protagonist in this article will not be like this. If you let her have no sense of independence, it will be more uncomfortable than killing her. So if you can't stand it, just leave if you don't like it. Don't leave me a comment saying that if you have a male protagonist, you will leave! ! ! (Don't spray if you don't like it)

Damn it? ! I have only read Chapter 104 for now. I just went to Baidu to see if there is a male protagonist, and it turns out that Mu Jianxing is the male protagonist? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! Is this true? ? ? ! ! ! Thunder is rolling! Doesn't that man have a crush on the original heroine? Emotional mysophobia means that you can't tolerate someone who liked the original heroine and then likes the current heroine as the hero 🙂 Just because you glanced at it when you were eight years old? Pedophilia? ! To be honest, I quite like this book. It is slightly different from the ordinary orthodox fairy tales. Some of the plot settings are also quite novel. I occasionally complain but it is harmless. But for the male protagonist, I do not reject the idea of ​​​​cp in fairy tales, but this man is obviously not worthy 🙂 I no longer have the motivation to pursue it. I say goodbye.

This seems to be the author's first book. From the first chapter, the writing style is relatively young and gradually becomes more and more mature, and the writing gets better and better. Moreover, the writing of this book did not become more biased, nor did the artistic conception or characters become distorted as the writing progressed. Let's talk about the male protagonist, Senior Brother Mu. In the book that the female protagonist has read, you are sure that Senior Brother Mu's love for Gu Weiyu is a man's love for a woman, not a senior brother's love for a junior sister. There was no heroine in the original book. Senior Brother Mu didn't meet the heroine, but he met Gu Weiyu first and had a crush on her, and then fell in love with her after spending a long time together. You must know that everyone has their own personality. Different personalities lead different behaviors in the world. What kind of person is Gu Qingyu in the original book? Envy, jealousy, hatred, hatred and low self-esteem. You will know after reading the first few chapters. Don't say that Senior Brother Mu doesn't like him and I don't like him either. After the heroine traveled through time, it was the heroine who met Senior Brother Mu first (remember, it was Senior Brother Mu and the heroine Gu Qingyu who met and got to know each other first). The heroine's character was completely different from Gu Qingyu's character in the original book. Although the skin and skin were the same, different people had some changes in their appearance (yes, I didn't say completely different). What's wrong with Senior Brother Mu having some feelings for the heroine when he first met her, and what's wrong with slowly falling in love with her? Isn't that okay? (Senior Brother Mu already has a seed of the heroine Gu Qingyu taking root in his heart. When he meets Gu Weiyu later, you tell him that he still likes her.) In the original book, Senior Brother Mu has not changed much after time traveling with the heroine, except that he likes the heroine. The author did not, like some other authors, write the heroine for the sake of the heroine to make the author feel that the world is at his fingertips, nor did he make the original heroine Gu Weiyu more and more embarrassing. In this book, Gu Qingyu and Gu Weiyu cannot live without each other. They complement each other. Even if the male protagonist and his supporting partner die, they cannot die. If they die, it will be over. The story ends here. Oh no, rewind the author and rewrite it significantly.

I don't want to read it when I see a male protagonist. Are you fucking kidding me about falling in love in a fairy tale?

I have read so many articles about female protagonists cultivating immortality. They include wood spiritual roots, fire spiritual roots, ice spiritual roots, and five element spiritual roots. However, I can't find one in which the protagonist majors in the earth element. Is it because the earth element moves are too difficult to write?

I feel that this part of the agreement, forcing CP, ruined the rhythm of the entire article, and abandoned the article.

When I read novels, I envy their wonderful world and unrestrained life. In real life, I am ordinary and like dust, so sometimes I envy their different lives. I like the heroine to be as beautiful as a fairy. However, the heroine in this article is not particularly beautiful. . . . Just a pair of eyes can tell something about the head,,, so, forget it if you are not beautiful. If you are not beautiful, you should not always write about the appearance of the heroine. If you write less, I will be able to self-hypnotize myself and imagine that the heroine is particularly beautiful. . Every few chapters you have to write that the heroine is not beautiful, and every few chapters you have to write that the heroine is not beautiful, what are the pictures? Pictures can highlight how special the heroine's eyes are and can blind other people's eyes.

After reading the first fifty chapters, everything about the plot is good, but the parts involving the original plot are indeed a major drawback. 1. Although the original heroine is the heroine of the novel, the novel is just a novel. The world is so big, who is not the heroine of their own world. I always feel that the heroine's attitude towards the original heroine is a bit condescending. In fact, the best attitude is to be indifferent. You can go your own way and avoid the original heroine appropriately. There is no need to be humble. 2. It's good to avoid the original plot, so why not join other sects! ! ? ? ? Even if you miss the entry time, you can still live as a casual cultivator in the city near the first and second sects. You don't want to enter Tianxu Sect to avoid the heroine, and you don't want to leave after staying in Xutian City for a year, so what kind of trouble are you trying to make? If you want to rely on the plot to win opportunities, you will definitely not be able to avoid the original heroine. It is better to enter the sect openly. The resources and information obtained in this way are not at the same level, and you will not almost commit suicide because of ignorance and ignorance of meridians for healing. If you want to stay away from it completely, just change a sect and practice by yourself far away from the plot. Watching this decision makes me feel heartbroken and desperate... The writing is very good and the plot is not bad, but these two key points are very uncomfortable to watch😣It is said that the writing will get better and better afterward. I want to endure it but it is really uncomfortable, so I will make a small complaint.

The author's writing style is very delicate, and the storyline is very cleverly connected, making people fall into it without even realizing it! !