Master of Firearms

I am just watching Huo Huo, so I can say that I have no qualifications to comment on it. But when I saw the recently updated chapters, I was really angry. I originally thought it was the birth of a good book, but suddenly it took a sudden turn and became disgusting. The author didn't know anything and could only rant. I can tell you that I am also an author and I have written no less than you. It can be seen from your recent writing level that you have no intention of writing at all and treat it as if it is a task. Do you understand that water has no edge? Do you understand? The previous one was quite good, even an old man like me was chasing it, but after watching the latest update, I suddenly realized that there was no need to chase it. The plot was out of sync and the rhythm was chaotic. It was typical that the writing was broken and I had to play it out. Don't talk about an outline or anything like that. It's just one sentence and you don't have the heart to write it.

After reading a few chapters, it was really average. . The names of the characters made it difficult for me to accept, and the characters were very facial-like. .

In the second chapter, the pig's feet can only close their eyes and wait for death, and rely on the author's description to move to the space to take refuge, which is awkward to watch.

This book was written in 2014. Let's not talk about anything else. In 2014, there were only so many systematic articles in 2014, and there were no large-scale bans at that time. This book was considered to be a little bit above the middle grade at that time. At that time, it was basically elementary school, middle school, and high school students who had no problem reading this book. Looking at it now This book can still be said to be a good one. If you complain about the problems of this book, you can first look at why this book appears in your library [big data search for books you like more, or books you often read, and then add them]. In addition to the first method, there is the second search or the third recommendation. But I have a question for the author. Why do I feel like you changed your name? I remember that the author of this book didn't have this name before. Finally, this is a book published in 2014. If you look at it from today's perspective, it's very speechless, but from the perspective of that time, this book is already relatively good.

I just read more than 20 chapters. Like The Demonic Swordsman, the protagonist is willing to risk his life for others. He has only known others for a few months and is already fighting for them. In the last book, the protagonist also met the girl for the first time and also fought for others. What I want to say is that you, the author, really have great love!

No, the author, I said, is also writing DNF. Why did the previous book "The Demonic Swordsman" write such routines and writing style? No big problems. It's just that the second female lead always acts like a gangster or something. . Cough cough cough. Okay, let's not complain about the last book about DNF. Today we are going to complain about this novel that was completed in 17 years. Emmm, I completed the book in 2017 and I have confirmed the time in the chapter here. If you don't believe it, you can confirm it yourself after reading my rants. Okay. The following is the main text. There is nothing to complain about. It is really a terrible DNF novel. Text: emmm, first of all, let's complain about the timeline. It is written about the protagonist who started playing computer games in 2020. Play dnf. Thus traveling to another world. But this is another world. It's just a magical transformation of the earth. The time has also changed from the original 2020 to 5020, the time after the protagonist first arrived in this world in the book? Emmm? It's about this time. After all, in the book, this is what the article I saw said: First, the time is 2020, and then the protagonist went to a kind person's house to use a computer. And from communicating with kind-hearted people, I learned that this happened 2500 years later. Emmm. 2500? All right. It's 5520, ah. Never mind. It doesn't matter how much time it is! ! The following is the text, what I want to complain about: emmm, when I saw Chapter 11, an old trick was used here. The protagonist's character is always humble when he is young, that's right. It's just that I was humble when I was young, because I don't know what it will become in the future. Anyway, I only saw Chapter 28. Stopped it for now. Okay. Next comes the point. Yes, you heard it right. I only saw Chapter 28 and stopped. The reason is this chapter 28 and the previous chapters. Same old routine. Ah. I'm used to it. The general routine is as follows (ps, ah. It's such a lot of nonsense to set up such nonsense, no wonder those novels, water chapter is really easy, ah. The number of water words is really cool. Funny): The protagonist comes out of the seclusion. Met a group of kind-hearted people. Then walk with them. Then the protagonist goes out to do a mission, and when he comes back, all the good-hearted people are dead. Then the protagonist will start his revenge. Then you will find that you can't defeat them in the early stage, and you have to wait for various helpers if you can defeat them. You can only take revenge when various buffs arrive, and then you will find that there are more than just a few enemies, the enemy's backstage, and so on. The next step is that the protagonist is fucked by the enemy's backstage, and the protagonist's helper is also fucked by the enemy's backstage. Then the protagonist continues to take revenge, and then finds that he can't beat him, so he levels up. Continue to use buffs. Something. Then I made a special discovery after I finished it. After defeating the enemy in the backstage, there are still some younger brothers whose lives the enemy had saved before. Friends in the background of enemies. And so on, he started to take revenge against the protagonist again, and then he was tortured by the protagonist in various ways. All kinds of dragons are proud of themselves. Then there are some water chapters about the protagonist's cultivation level and water chapters about the protagonist's pursuit of girls. The protagonist collects the water medals from his subordinates, finally takes revenge, defeats the strongest boss, and then gets married to the heroine, or travels back to the original world, or enters a higher world. Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, finish the book, or it will just end. Okay. The above are some of my personal views on this book. My personal views do not represent other people's thoughts, just my own! If there are any trolls who think what I said is wrong, please try to reply in this post. I don't mind arguing with you. Anyway, I have been very free recently, and I welcome all the trolls and keyboard warriors 24 hours a day (I'm whispering bb here, yes, me too!) Finally, ah, I think what this salty fish said is reasonable. For the sake of my poor word count, I can't give it too much praise, right? Slipping away.

Chapter 242 is a small bug in the plot. The pirates mentioned are extremely vicious, killing men and robbing women. With the dialogue between the two pirates, I wonder why the disguised princess was not turned by the pirates? Is the heroine's halo activated in advance? The princess alone is fine, but other women are in trouble. The article also writes that the princess has seen too many human tragedies in the past few days, so she is fine.

If you don't have any brains, you can read this book. The protagonist calls himself "boy" when talking to anyone. The boy wants to ask for directions. The same is true when he goes to the villain's base: Can you tell the boy where your genetic medicine is? It's 2050 and no one would talk like this in 2005.

Should the protagonist's character mature a little? Although I can't say what should be done, but from the protagonist's words, it still feels like he is seventeen or eighteen years old (my personal opinion). At least the protagonist has gone through so much [fn=4_2]. . . . Also, it would be better if the descriptions of some battles were more detailed. I prefer the profession of sharpshooter. I am very excited every time I see the battle scenes [fn=2_2], especially when I see everyone exclaiming because of their skills, or when the protagonist has an advantage because of his skills. But when I see the description of the battle, I feel that I can't achieve the immersive feeling. Sometimes it feels just a little bit worse. I hope that Light and Heat can go further [fn=3_1]. I hope that this book will sell well and be ranked first! ! 😚

You are really forcing yourself to pretend to be a harem. When you encounter something good, your first thought is to give it to the girl you just met. There is nothing very good about the earth. When you first go to Arad to get the elemental water from the elves, you don't want to use it yourself but give it to your apprentice. Later, you complain about your weak cultivation. It's also true that you are not weak. How can you pretend to be cool? It's even more outrageous to get the crystal of the power of God later. Lin Wu is the same. Relying on the demigod body to weaken the side effects, you'd better just push it on those few sips of water of life you drank during the earth period. Oh, the water of the god of life, tm, the Queen of Tianling Star is only A-level and a sword master. The water of life she made can resist the power of gods and the side effects are awesome. Gods and ghosts are pretending to be cool at least, and there is logic. This is really forced to show off.