The Planar Keyboard

I can only say that the author's imagination is quite good, but you've oversimplified martial arts. For example, Shi Potian had teachers both before and after his rise to fame, and being a martial arts fanatic, he learned advanced martial arts, which is why he mastered so many skills. If you try to understand advanced martial arts halfway through the story, even if you know the plot, you can at best become someone like Chen Xuanfeng or Mei Chaofeng.

The cultivation techniques in Journey to the West are far superior to the power system in Naruto by countless times, yet they are left unused; they are utter garbage.

I can't stand it anymore! This internal energy system is ridiculous! Decades of training, gone in a single fight! What's the point of training at all?

I don't understand what some authors are thinking, they just love to give their protagonists those weird names, just to attract attention?

I read this book in 2018. I remember posting about it back then. Looking back now, I'm amazed at the author's perseverance in writing so many words. I stopped reading after the Hunter x Hunter world arc. The protagonist seemed like a 5-6 year old kid to me—his mind, intelligence, habits, way of handling things, temper, hobbies—he was like a child in every way. I wonder how the story progressed later on.

I saw this book when it first came out and browsed around. Back then, it wasn't very long, and not many people were reading it. I posted a thread saying that I didn't care about the later plot or the power system; the title alone was dragging down the readership—it was too convoluted.

Just because you've linked meridians and nerves together, anyone with a basic brain wouldn't buy it. The biggest reason the world today is unwilling to acknowledge Traditional Chinese Medicine is that current technology can't discover meridians; there's no evidence. So you've turned them into nerves? You're not even as good as those protagonists who learn martial arts without a teacher.

I can tolerate everything else, but I really can't stand the fact that time travel reduces my energy limit. Reducing the limit means that I can never improve further after reaching a certain level, and trying to compensate with so many different cultivation systems is just too complicated. Goodbye.

I've read over a hundred chapters, and every time the protagonist travels back in time, his cultivation is drained, forcing him to start all over again. Is that really interesting?

This book has a good concept, but the protagonist seems like a useless person, like a child. He sees something fun and wants it, then throws the toys aside. No one in this world can succeed by being half-hearted. Also, take the Golden Bell Shield, for example. The Mind Beast Golden Bell Shield is a complete surprise. It's an upgradeable Golden Bell Shield.