Tang Sanzang, the One-Punch Monk

The author strongly recommends that the plot of the White Dragon Horse be reduced a bit. It is nondescript and affects reading. Especially when you describe her having other emotions towards Tang Monk, I want to abandon the book. The protagonist is Tang Monk, a monk, and the White Dragon Horse is simply a mount. You describe her as more important than Sun Wukong. I feel that many readers are uncomfortable. According to the current setting of your book, I personally think you should It's time to write about how Tang Monk helped Sun Wukong improve his strength, instead of showing it everywhere and making readers think that a mount is better than the senior brother. What's more, it's weird to write a mother-in-law monk, or just let Tang Monk break the ordination, and Monk Hua.

I hope the author will respect the original work and respect Chinese culture, and don't make any mistakes. Immortals and Buddhas may have calculations, but they are all upright. Moreover, in this kind of ideological and cultural things, right or wrong is not obvious, only the standpoint. The protagonist is a human, and it is best to stand from a human standpoint. The three views are different from those of the indigenous people, but they are also of the same origin. Don't write about Buddhas and Jade Emperors, who are like despicable villains. , After all, the Jade Emperor is also the same generation as several saints, a good person who has experienced thousands of years of experience. He is the kind of absolutely good person, a person with noble merits. The Buddha is also a person with great merits. He has less low-level calculations. The powerful rely on the situation and make the best use of the situation. He can never control living beings, just like Wukong who committed suicide by relying on the great opportunity of the innate beings to cultivate immortality and jump on the train. , It didn't take long to reach a very high level and almost live forever, but it also exhausted all the merits. Later, he was suppressed for five hundred years to repay the karma, and then switched to Buddhism and earned great merits. Although he lost his freedom, he really gained immortality. It can be regarded as seeking benevolence and benevolence. Not to mention that Bima Wen's official position is small, or that the position of Qitian Great Sage is empty. You must know that even Erlang Shen did not participate in the Peach Banquet. There are a lot of innate beings in the court, and Wukong is not a rare thing. As Taibai Jinxing said, it is not easy for Wukong to practice, so he should be rewarded with an official position. You must know that many demons such as the Bull Demon King who are stronger than him have no official positions. There is no shortage of innate beings in the heaven, but Buddhism is lacking, so in the end Buddhism accepted him. Unless the system is re-established, the heaven is honest to Wukong. He has to commit suicide! It's like a scholar in ancient times who was good at studying, but his family was in decline. The emperor gave him a fellow Jinshi. It is estimated that you have been studying for many years, but you feel that it is not good and you have to get three yuan. Isn't this the kind of person who doesn't know the heights of the world?

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Little White Dragon

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Tang Monk Saves Wukong

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Little White Dragon

It looked pretty good at the beginning, but it turned out. . . There comes a girly little white dragon, and then there is the holy monk brother. The protagonist feels guilty, distressed, and greasy for several chapters. He punches Tang Monk. The result is this greasy little plot that makes people have goosebumps. I am speechless. . Disappointed

When I read this chapter of this book, I really laughed. Shenji connected Chinese mythology together, and then the second set of magic changed it, becoming the originator of the prehistoric style. And prehistoric fans formed Chinese mythology and Taoist doctrine through various versions of prehistoric novels, fan fiction, and a little bit of their own yy. 🤭🤭🤭Don't laugh, just laugh and say that Honghuangliu is more widely circulated and more deeply rooted in people's hearts than myths, such as the history of the Three Kingdoms and the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. People know more about the Romance of the Three Kingdoms.