Mu Ying's Immortal Path

It's so long-winded. I could bear it at first, but after reading a hundred chapters I couldn't stand it any longer. There are over two million words, probably one and a half million, all of which are the heroine's inner monologue plus explanations of various reasons. I'm vomiting blood, giving up, it's a waste of time.

To be honest, I personally felt it was quite wordy, the plot progressed slowly, and the early stages were a bit frustrating, making it a bit unwatchable.

It's such a long-winded thing, it's so annoying, it can be explained in 3 sentences, but he insists on using 10 sentences, because he wants to make up the word count or he just can't be concise.

Alas, I really can't stand it anymore. The old lady's foot-binding cloth. I've never seen a heroine who is so verbose and self-righteous and whose IQ is low.

It's too inky! I endured reading more than 120 chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. There are 100 chapters of nonsense! And the heroine has no sparkle at all!

It's super long-winded, one thing is explained over and over again, and it's over in one chapter; there are too many weird things, the characters are stereotyped, and the character changes are blunt; the heroine relies on luck all the way, and she has died countless times just by herself. Except for the author's own emphasis on describing her temperament as different from others, it cannot be seen that the mature mentality of the reborn person is irrational, and her emotions are too fickle. She always thinks that others are bad in one sentence, but in the blink of an eye she becomes grateful. Overall, it's not interesting. If you're bored, it's okay to watch.

At the beginning, there were a lot of drag bottles around the heroine, but finally they were all gone. Jin Dan began to accept disciples. The Nascent Souls of another continent were running around, and there were enemies there. She didn't want to improve herself, but she found drag bottles for herself. This book needs more water, and the whole process is running around for others. Luo Liba Suo, fight monsters to upgrade, why is it like watching a house fight, one book, one map, and several characters require hundreds of pages

It's so long-winded, like an old lady's foot-binding cloth. She has to explain 123,456,789 points for everything. At the end, she has to explain 123,456,789 points. The author has this kind of personality, so he deliberately made up the number of words. There are probably 100 chapters out of hundreds of chapters that are not just long-winded to make up the word count.

In fact, the writing style and narrative style are very good, but the writing is really verbose! If it is a long novel with 2,000 chapters, it would be normal at this pace, but there are only 600 chapters in total. When I wrote more than 100 chapters, I didn't even enter the sect. In the early stage, I wrote 60 or 70 chapters about the intrigues of a five- or six-year-old house fight. I was really worried about it! ! The house fighting life in the early stage was too depressing. Everyone just wanted to see the heroine be free and have room to grow after entering the sect. However, after finally reaching the 100th chapter, she found a reason to say that the original sect could not be entered. It really gave people the feeling that the old lady's foot bindings were smelly and too long And I don't think at all why the heroine could not continue to go to the original sect. Wasn't it because she was plotted by her teammates on the way to the trial? Just give up without even asking? It is said that the person who killed her is in the sect. The problem is that when they killed you, you were practicing at the third level of Qi training and she was practicing at the fifth level. The heroine survived the catastrophe and broke through to the sixth level of Qi training. She was one level higher than the other person and gave up with just one sentence? ? ? I feel that this reason really cannot convince the readers, but it is too deliberate to make the readers feel that "the author deliberately arranged this twists and turns of the plot" It feels like a pity really, it is a rare female video cultivation book with good writing skills

Ah, what a verbosity! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 It's so long-winded. How can there be such a long-winded novel? ! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Ahhhhh! What a mouthful! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆