The Long Road to Immortality

The author is not ordinary verbose, it feels like he is trying to make up the same number of words, especially the third grandfather's talk about the white jade match, which he wrote for several chapters. It is simply disgusting to me.

There are too many emotional descriptions, and the key points are all dragging down, which makes people lose the desire to read further. Too much verbosity is useless. Not recommended to watch

The first volume talks about every detail of the heroine's journey before entering the house. It is really "bit by detail". Even every sentence of the interaction between the heroine and passerby A, and the banter between passerby A and passerby B, B and D are also explained clearly! Even if it doesn't matter, it's important! It can be seen that the author is very enthusiastic and wants to write a good article, but his thinking is too divergent. Every time someone appears, he wants to explain everything clearly! As a result, I couldn't bear it even after finishing the free chapter. I thought that if the rhythm of the following chapters was like this, there was really no need to embarrass myself anymore! Personally, I think that as a trial reading sample, the free chapters are not the essence, but they should also include some useful information, so that people can intuitively understand what story is being told, and what is interesting to keep readers interested in reading. . Otherwise, there are so many similar works, why bother forcing yourself?