The Little Ancestor of the Immortal World Has Arrived

I have read Chapter 300, and my current impressions are: 1. The heroine has unparalleled qualifications and unparalleled luck and opportunities: the best qualifications, physique, peerless appearance, room for growth one to one month, two powerful masters who have lost the permanent space of their bodies, which is rare in the world. With magic weapons, spiritual beasts, treasures, and excellent understanding, he can refine high-grade elixirs from scratch in 5 days. At this time, the heroine has not even learned a few spiritual herbs. In 3 months, he can reach the early and mid-stage of foundation building from never introducing qi into the body. Two sensational epiphanies! 2. The male protagonist has fallen in love with the female protagonist since they met her when she was 4 years old, and they soon became deeply in love with her! 3. The villain is too straightforward to be evil, with almost no traps or designs. A sister who is generally not well-liked can beat her in public, push her sister into a trap and kill her as if nothing has happened, and no one will hold her accountable. She can arrogantly poison her at the New Year's Eve dinner, so unintentional! Other villains also have their bad intentions exposed on the surface, and they are bad people at first glance. In short, this is a story where the protagonist is omnipotent. I don't know how it will develop in the future!

The female characters in this book, except for the protagonist, are all bad. Even the mother and grandmother are scheming bitches. Doesn't the author think it's too dark?

The plot looks quite exciting, why can't I watch it?

The ending is sloppy, not counting the ending. I feel like it should be written a little more, such as what happened to the heroine's mother in the end, why are there so many reverses in the upper world, and why is their organization going through so much ups and downs? What is the purpose? What is the purpose of repeatedly going down to the next world to cause trouble for the heroine? What is the origin of the Yun family and the Tianhu Yun family in the world of immortality? Why do they only look to the Yun family for reincarnation? Is there a happy reunion in the end? Have the two weapon spirit masters transformed, and have the spiritual thoughts of the third master returned to their original bodies? Even the main body of the fairy world does not know the existence of this apprentice...

Everything else is fine. I just don't know why after writing 400 chapters, the heroine is still five years old and has not yet entered the sect... Now that I have read 400 chapters, I feel that this is just a novel about otakus in the skin of Xianxia. It's not that you can't write about aristocratic families in Xianxia, but I think everyone comes to see Xianxia to fight monsters and get promoted. Let's go for the free atmosphere in the world of Xianxia In the first chapter, the heroine said that she wanted to join the sect when she was four years old. After more than 400 chapters, the heroine is still five years old and has not yet joined the sect. The previous article is actually very good, but for those who want to read Xianxia, it is really interesting to read more than 400 chapters of intrigue and house fighting in Xianxia novels. I'm tired. It's understandable that I'm laying the groundwork for the plot, but I feel like it's enough when I write one or two hundred chapters. Why do I have to fight at home until chapter 400? It's really painful. Now I just want to see how the heroine will recognize the fox's biological father and I can't wait to read it (it's over at chapter 1500, and now it's almost 500 chapters and the heroine is still there). I haven't even entered a sect at the age of five. Could there be some "50 years of seclusion to advance to a great realm" later? ) I really like the various settings and male and female protagonists of this book. I have read many comments and I can actually accept the complaints made by others. Maybe this is the author's first time writing a fairy tale? One year to build the foundation (from the second level of Qi training to the middle stage of foundation building at the age of four to five), this kind of common knowledge question of cultivation is regarded as the author's personal setting, but I really can't help complaining about why I keep writing about house fighting in the cultivation novel. The aristocratic family is an abyss and quagmire. It is harmful to my physical and mental health if I look at it for a long time. I really hope that the heroine can break out of this cage as soon as possible

After reading the synopsis, I don't want to read it anymore, it's about dying over and over again, and there's also a father who cheats on his daughter.

The ending feels a bit rushed. Is there any follow-up?

The Cultivation family gives out lucky money by giving out golden beans. If you accept some golden beans, you are called a rich woman. If you give some golden beans to the waiters, you are called generous. I was also drunk and suspected that I had read a fake article on Cultivation of Immortals 😰

The heroine was a furnace in her previous life 😥

There is a problem with the logic, and the constructed worldview is unattractive.