Sect Development Log

It's so disgusting to see a female apprentice who washes feet and serves daily life. Has the author never seen a woman? What kind of loser mentality? A teenage female apprentice has to write about ambiguity

What about the author's new book? Did you change your vest?

I came in after seeing the introduction. Is the protagonist named Qin Chuan? RUA!

Congratulations to the author for using a female apprentice to persuade me to quit! Your goal is achieved

The protagonist of this book has a special hobby. He likes to sneer while watching others shit on his head, pretending to be cool. When the other person gets comfortable with it, he then beats the other person to death, pretending to be cool.

This seems to be the first novel about cultivating immortals in my memory.

When I saw Wang Zining here, I didn't want to watch anymore. It was so boring. Full of vulgar sense of picking up girls.

This book ends hastily, and many plots are not written out. I guess the author may have run out of energy! Can't we compare part-time writers and professional writers? The plot framework of this book is actually good, but the author wrote a lot of articles, and in the end the big plot plot was not finished. Personally, I think it is unfinished!

It's so bad 😰

Has the author written any other books?

Bad ending? ? It's better if he's not a eunuch. But, I don't know what the author thinks, is it a sect that relies on martial arts to cultivate immortality? I am currently reading, hoping that there will be some methods for cultivating immortality in the future.

I didn't expect that this book was written in 2011, but when I read it now, it doesn't feel outdated (maybe it's because I don't often read cultivation-related books). The outline of the book is reasonably laid out, the plot is compact, and the ability to release the (cheating device) system is also reasonable. However, for the battles between some sects, the naming of magic weapons and exercises is still relatively immature. Throughout the book, except for the first enemy Song Yang who is the enemy of the murderer, all other causes of disputes seem childish in the eyes of old bookworms, or they look at you too much in the crowd. Eyes, or someone said a few sarcastic words at a certain time, and then the protagonist took revenge with various grudges. When watching it, I was worried about the protagonist's mental problems. Maybe the author is not old enough and regards these trivial things in life as big things that he will never die. Also, the names of the various magic weapons and techniques in the book also seem old-fashioned. The Five-Shape Return to True True Jue, the Tiger-Shape and the Crane-Shape, are you sure it's not Mr. Hua Tuo's Wu Qin Xi? Here it is changed to the five elements of gold, wood, water, fire, and earth, and the level immediately goes up. After all, it is a sect of cultivating immortals. If you pose in the shape of a monkey, it will make people laugh. The instant kill method was changed to Star Shift or Apparition, and other magic weapons had different names. The most important flaw in the book is that the author has spent all his efforts to develop his sect, but has he never considered what exercises his sect's disciples should learn? A great sect does not have its own inherited skills. The Lingxiao Sword Sect has the Lingxiao Sword Jue, and the Tongtian Sect has the Tongtian Sword Formation. The author has not considered the inherited skills of his own sect, and he still teaches the original Wu Qin Xi? Leader of the Qixia Sect had only joined the Qixia Sect for less than two days, and he was appointed as the elder to teach you. He didn't know your Yuhua Sect Kung Fu at all. A few years later, you found that the disciples you had worked so hard to train all learned the Qixia Kung Fu, and they all became Qixia disciples. However, it is said that this is the author's first book. It is very rare for a newcomer to write such a new book. Most of the plots in the article are still reasonable and reasonable, and occasionally the poisonous points are harmless. According to the final remarks, it was revealed that a new book will be published in February. Now nine years have passed and I wonder where the book is?

Alas, I read this book many years ago, and I have been in a state of panic for several years.

Recommended book, but ended up with a random ending because my girlfriend broke up and got back together during more than 200 chapters, which made me feel a little uncomfortable 😒

It shows that I am a student and have no time to write articles, and neither do I.

It's almost the same as this one. All easy to read.

Cultivation novel, "The Immortal Rebellion" ///////////////////////// Doomsday novel, "Killing the Abyss" ////////////////////// Fantasy novel, "Fight to Break the Sky" //////////////////////// Hard science fiction novel, "The Three-Body Problem" ///////////////////////

What's the difference between being a eunuch? At the highest state of becoming a god or above, you are finished without even reaching the golden elixir... As a 5-star force, you only dominate at 1 star and are gone? To build such a large frame, you only laid a foundation!

Is it the Orange Light game "Master of Cultivation"? Quite fun

The author's ambition, hostility, and tone cannot be distinguished

I stayed up all night for two nights and then finished it. There are too many plots in it that are really watery, and I don't have the intention to read them slowly. Everyone's routines are incomprehensible. There is a fight with pig's feet, but everyone else is watching motionless? It shouldn't be pig's feet talking to people, other things have been taken care of. Just wait for the end of the pig's feet. Then open a new map. The framework is very large, and at least a thousand chapters can be written about the incarnation. I didn't expect that the foundation-building consummation would be over. There are a lot of holes left unfilled, why does the Cultivation Alliance exist? Why does the cultivation system exist? Or leave it in suspense, but in the end you will make a fool of yourself. Many of the relationships between the protagonist and the heroine are not straightened out. The time is also a bit unclear. I wrote a dozen chapters of Jinta in 10 days, and I really didn't have the heart to read it at all.

Book recommendation: Rebirth of Yue Buqun, revitalization of the Huashan Sect

This book is suitable for new book lovers who are new to online literature or novels about cultivating immortals. I also endured all kinds of routines and plots, gritted my teeth and read it for so long, but there were still 48 chapters that I couldn't stand anymore.

It's well written, but I don't like systematic writing