Sect Development Log

It's so disgusting to see a female apprentice who washes feet and serves daily life. Has the author never seen a woman? What kind of loser mentality? A teenage female apprentice has to write about ambiguity

What about the author's new book? Did you change your vest?

I came in after seeing the introduction. Is the protagonist named Qin Chuan? RUA!

Congratulations to the author for using a female apprentice to persuade me to quit! Your goal is achieved

This seems to be the first novel about cultivating immortals in my memory.

The protagonist of this book has a special hobby. He likes to sneer while watching others shit on his head, pretending to be cool. When the other person gets comfortable with it, he then beats the other person to death, pretending to be cool.

This book ends hastily, and many plots are not written out. I guess the author may have run out of energy! Can't we compare part-time writers and professional writers? The plot framework of this book is actually good, but the author wrote a lot of articles, and in the end the big plot plot was not finished. Personally, I think it is unfinished!

When I saw Wang Zining here, I didn't want to watch anymore. It was so boring. Full of vulgar sense of picking up girls.

Has the author written any other books?

I didn't expect that this book was written in 2011, but when I read it now, it doesn't feel outdated (maybe it's because I don't often read cultivation-related books). The outline of the book is reasonably laid out, the plot is compact, and the ability to release the (cheating device) system is also reasonable. However, for the battles between some sects, the naming of magic weapons and exercises is still relatively immature. Throughout the book, except for the first enemy Song Yang who is the enemy of the murderer, all other causes of disputes seem childish in the eyes of old bookworms, or they look at you too much in the crowd. Eyes, or someone said a few sarcastic words at a certain time, and then the protagonist took revenge with various grudges. When watching it, I was worried about the protagonist's mental problems. Maybe the author is not old enough and regards these trivial things in life as big things that he will never die. Also, the names of the various magic weapons and techniques in the book also seem old-fashioned. The Five-Shape Return to True True Jue, the Tiger-Shape and the Crane-Shape, are you sure it's not Mr. Hua Tuo's Wu Qin Xi? Here it is changed to the five elements of gold, wood, water, fire, and earth, and the level immediately goes up. After all, it is a sect of cultivating immortals. If you pose in the shape of a monkey, it will make people laugh. The instant kill method was changed to Star Shift or Apparition, and other magic weapons had different names. The most important flaw in the book is that the author has spent all his efforts to develop his sect, but has he never considered what exercises his sect's disciples should learn? A great sect does not have its own inherited skills. The Lingxiao Sword Sect has the Lingxiao Sword Jue, and the Tongtian Sect has the Tongtian Sword Formation. The author has not considered the inherited skills of his own sect, and he still teaches the original Wu Qin Xi? Leader of the Qixia Sect had only joined the Qixia Sect for less than two days, and he was appointed as the elder to teach you. He didn't know your Yuhua Sect Kung Fu at all. A few years later, you found that the disciples you had worked so hard to train all learned the Qixia Kung Fu, and they all became Qixia disciples. However, it is said that this is the author's first book. It is very rare for a newcomer to write such a new book. Most of the plots in the article are still reasonable and reasonable, and occasionally the poisonous points are harmless. According to the final remarks, it was revealed that a new book will be published in February. Now nine years have passed and I wonder where the book is?