The Outsider

Can't finish it! This book does not deserve its high rating! Just a few complaints: 1. The plot is too procrastinating. In a way that seems very delicate but is actually very flow-based, the content that can be said in one sentence is diluted into one chapter or several chapters. Very disgusting. Except for the die-hard fans, there should be few people who don't find it verbose. 2. Multiple heroine settings. Violates the character development of the protagonist. The author is too greedy. A "stone" should be stubborn and determined. To create so many heroines, it is typical to have to do both. Kitsch is just kitsch, and you have to pretend to be so serious, it's so disgusting. 3. Create false tension and excessive tension. Every challenge the protagonist faces is interspersed with a lot of side descriptions, which does not increase the tension of the old bookworm, but only brings a lot of reading aversions such as intellectual deception, defiance of logic, too much pretense, and too fragmentary rhythm. We have to accept the fact that there are really no masters of online writing today!

The plot is exciting and the suspense is reborn. Many times it makes people wonder what will happen next. Some plots are grand and shocking, such as the return of the hero and so on. But some details are not very reasonable. For example, a spaceship can reach a distance of only a few light-years in just a few dozen days. This speed is much faster than the speed of light. Technology is very advanced, but people are still driving fuel cars? You want to say that Charter Glory has limited the development of human science and technology for tens of thousands of years and has not made progress, but it can fly at faster than light speed (or rely on traveling through the torsion void), so the author is not suitable for writing science fiction. There is also the most intolerable shortcoming, which is that there are too many nonsense words and too many metaphors. One thing can be metaphorically repeated several times. Is it really necessary? Is it to make up the word count? Also, almost everyone uses squinting to express their inner feelings. I really don't know what squinting means. To describe inner changes, can we only rely on words such as pale face, shrunken pupils, and bright eyes?

Mao Ni's writing is indeed good, but this person's values ​​are a piece of shit. It's really disgusting to look back at this book after reading it for three years. Mao Ni really deserves the scolding. Xu Le actually only did one thing in this book. In order to maintain the family's ten thousand-year rule, he relied on cheating to destroy progressive ideas and forces. This is the first book where I longed for the main character to die all the time.

It's very much like playing house when I was a kid, catching fish for a while and herding cattle for a while, just playing in the field. There was a fight at another intersection. Advantages? . . Maybe there are a lot of words written. What is more useful is punctuation.

The plot drags and the background setting is really hard to understand. The dynasty era + federal era of tens of thousands of years, and the distance of several light years within the federal area means that it is at least the interstellar navigation era. The local galaxy cluster is almost fully developed and cannot even build a mecha. How about developing your sister? The whole text has been written in the author's self-righteous writing style, which is as light as water. After reading more than two hundred chapters, I found no emotions, no tears, no passion, even the mecha battles made me feel nothing at all. The whole story seemed like a classical Chinese text, maybe I really can't appreciate this type of article.

I used to read it when I was still in high school. Now that I'm 30 years old, I still like Mao Ni's writing style.

It's not good-looking, but it's not too poisonous. The writing is not bad, the sentences are smooth, the emotions are rich, and many of the descriptions can be said to be relatively delicate. I don't want to feel fragmented in many online articles one sentence at a time. But sometimes it's very verbose. If you are like me and came here through tags, please note that it is neither mecha nor interstellar nor science fiction. The technology stream is just a bunch of confusing proper nouns. As for the plot, it's all the author's personal stories about family struggles. Throughout the whole article, I wanted to write about intrigues, but it was extremely stupid to put it into the article. However, there are a large number of author-directed ritual outputs, which quite affects the viewing experience. In terms of supporting roles, a scheming career bitch takes up a lot of emotional descriptions and emotional lines, and the book is still disconnected halfway through the book. A brother's one-night stand with a pregnant woman takes care of most of the book. But the male supporting characters are well portrayed. Among the more than 350 chapters of Mecha, only about 20 chapters saw the protagonist actually fight. He beat Zhou Yu once, beat Li once, and had a simulated battle. The prince only described the result of the virtual battle.

The assembly order in Chapter 356 briefly describes the situation of each team member after they were discharged from the army and the calmness at the moment when they received the order. It made my blood boil and I was inexplicably excited.

"Jian Ke" is Mao Niang's pinnacle work, there is no doubt about this. Compared with "Celebrating More Than Years", it is more Machiavellian and can better reflect reality. It puts forward its own opinions on some political issues and has a strong critical spirit. The characterization is very distinctive, especially the female characters, who have distinct personalities. The future in the context of science fiction also adds a touch of magnificence and mystery. This is a philosophical novel and an ideological novel, the absolute pinnacle of Mao Ni.

A very regrettable novel, the story background is well laid out and very attractive. What is a pity is that the description of personal abilities is overly exaggerated and over-relying on this to simplify what should be a complex issue. What's even more unpleasant is that while the storyline is filled with personal heroism, it also portrays the protagonist as a blind fool. In addition to having a cheat-like force value, it also gives him a super personal charm that he shouldn't have. All in all, most of the conflicts in this book were shattered by simple and crude force. The author personally stifled the complexity and seriousness. He raised seemingly profound questions but chose to simply brush them off, which is disappointing.