Shuoming

I haven't finished my last book yet, so I'm starting a new one. I kept your last book for five months just so you could come back and continue writing it. You're so damn cool, give me a trick to start a new book.

I have read many Ming Dynasty novels written by this author before. They are very good. I have not supported them yet. I will support them now.

Lao Bai, you have opened a new book again. . . In fact, I still want you to update "Zhu Ming". I really like this book 😆

This time it's considered a stinker. I think you won't write online novels in the future. You've already exhausted the patience of book friends.

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The beginning was okay, but when his father died, it collapsed. Die for the sake of death, without considering rationality at all. Hundreds of households in a village are eager to use your skinned and bone-pulling enemies to deal with you, but in the end they trust you just because they killed the Boma thieves together. The protagonist's father is surrounded by a bunch of veterans, a group that has been hanging out outside the Great Wall for decades. Even you, a bastard, think it's inappropriate to let them into the camp. And looking at the posture of the raid, the opponent has already coordinated internally. Imagine this scene. Two groups hate each other. One of them sneaks into the camp of the other group with the idea of ​​killing all the opponents. It is in a zone where no one cares, and there are enemies outside. Can you try it and see if you can do it? I let you escape, and I didn't want to rush back to the village to find my brothers to take action in advance. Then I insisted on going back to see how his father cut the body into five pieces. After the division, he was still thinking calmly about how to finish the meal. Aren't you afraid that this white man will go back and slaughter your small group? Isn't he afraid of your revenge? And your revenge is inevitable. Why don't you go ahead and kill all these half-hearted guys and get it done, instead of waiting for you to go find him and cause trouble? You have to know that human behavior comes from purpose, and purpose comes from motivation, and motivation comes from inner emotional needs. A series of plots starting from when his father was raided are unreasonable. Rather than being the author's deduction based on the characters' personalities, it is better to say that this is the script in the author's mind. Writing a book is actually about expressing oneself, and authors are all exhibitionists to some extent. The author of this book writes similar plots again and again, which makes me feel that the author has some kind of emotional disorder in his heart.

I have read several of the author's novels, and they are brilliant at the beginning, dull in the middle, and dull in the later stages. It always ends in an anticlimax, and the more you write, the worse it gets. How can such a style last?

I don't quite understand. It took more than thirty chapters to fully develop the character, but all of it was sacrificed? Also, the line about the Mongolian girl is gone, so why write it? It's better to just start with the sentence "Qidian Orphanage, Parents Sacrifice to Heaven"

One of my favorite historical authors. I have read Shun Ming ten times, Jin Yi Dang Guo twenty times, and Da Ming Wu Fu thirty times. It is a novel that I never tire of.

Recently I feel like I didn't write it myself, did I find someone to write it for me? Still a not-so-good ghostwriter!