The Adventurer Survived the Catastrophe

I also value my breasts as my life🙂🙂🙂

The entry point and sense of immersion in the opening chapter are okay.

After reading three chapters, let me talk about the shortcomings first. There is no main line, no plot promotion, and no conflict. It is difficult to attract readers to continue reading. The combination of Chinese and Western is a bit separated from the world view. It is like using chopsticks to eat, but you have to eat with a knife and fork. The advantage is that the story is narrated smoothly and the characters are delicately created. My suggestion is to write a Western fantasy world view directly. If you have to integrate China and the West, this kind of setting and world view will not work at all.

It's okay, it makes people read. Feeling a bit like joblessness? But it doesn't matter. It is true that the main line is thin, and readers have no expectations for what follows. The combination of Chinese and Western styles is not very inconsistent. Some people also write that cultivating immortals has good results among wizards. If there is no contract in the future, you can delete it, strengthen it and send it again. However, it is recommended not to promote it anywhere before it is put on the shelves. Otherwise the data will be distorted and the editor will not dare to sign it even if the content is actually qualified.