Pokémon: I'm Really Just a Photographer

When I read Chapter 26, the four words above were my most intuitive reflection of this book. It is said that he is a photographer, but the description of the photo shoot and the plot are all in one sentence. There is little mention of composition and situation, and there are very few descriptions of daily photos. The main plot is about the protagonist playing tricks with Gengar. Although it is not impossible, it does have little to do with the so-called photographer title. It is said that there are videos of the protagonists filming, but there is basically no feedback from the audience. In the middle, a Shenhao fan suddenly appeared to sponsor the live broadcast equipment, and also praised a lot of the protagonists, but there were no specific works, just that they had a sense of life and so on. Other than that, I have the impression that there is no feedback on the protagonists' works. Writing about travel in the Pokémon world is not a problem in itself, but since there is a photographer's gimmick, the writing should give more emphasis to the shooting of the protagonist. In addition, the identity of the photographer itself has subtext, it is not the person in the picture. As a photographer, the identity that is more suitable for character creation should be a witness, not necessarily a person who has experienced the story. Under the theme of being a photographer, it would be more in line with the title to depict the protagonist witnessing some touching stories and spread them, whether ordinary or mythical. In the current plot, I don't see the necessity of the protagonist as a photographer in terms of story and setting. It is just a gimmick at the moment, and this gimmick doesn't even account for much in the article. If you put aside the title of the novel and just look at this book as a Pokémon-themed travel article, the warm description is not bad, but with this title, I can only give this evaluation. I hope that the author can examine what kind of story he wants to write and adjust the ratio of various elements in his own article. At the same time, since he wants to write about shooting, he also needs to provide the composition, storyboarding, scene description, etc. Of the finished product. Just a sentence of shooting, editing, and uploading... Readers will not know what you shot and what the effect of the things you shot will be, and the sense of immersion and persuasiveness will be greatly reduced. Don't let the title element of the photographer exist just as a gimmick like a cheat finger or a background board.

Anyone can publish a book, even a flashing toucan (

Forget it Suicune, his name is quite cool, but it's a pity that he was caught with a fishing net.

I suggest that when Gengar says this, it would be better if you put a bracket next to his cry, otherwise it will be very tiring to read.

Gugu

To explain, most of the mythical beasts and phantom beasts have tribes. They are not as rare as many people think, and their strength varies. Just take the first-level gods and fantasy beasts as examples: two Lugias, one big and one small, appeared at the same time in the anime; two Rayquazas appeared at the same time in the Hoopa theatrical version and one was a flash; the player in Zhuzi conquered two Milertons or Gulltons; in LA, Arceus made it clear that he had multiple clones, and one was conquered by the player; a group of Salud appeared in the theatrical version; in the Sun and Moon anime, multiple Meltans and two Solgaleo appeared.

The author of Starting Point can be anyone, let alone a big-billed bird.

It's a bit difficult to write Pokémon Dreams well. I still prefer the traditional growth genre, not the live-streaming genre. It's a bit nondescript. Don't tell me that there are gods who make Pokémon. Nowadays they are just so-so.

Dear legendary trainers, legendary breeders, and legendary coordinators, I know it is normal to raise books during the new book period, but I still want to ask you to help me get to the last chapter from Tuesday to Wednesday, can you? Because what I'm looking at at Qidian now is to test the waters on pk so as to get more traffic. I will write the story well, so can you move your little hands and turn to the last page every day? Please, don't let this book be stillborn, kneel down and worship I will update it hard after it is released, please!

Is this a Teacher Lu type article? In recent years, Mr. Lu's Pokémon writing has taken up half of Qidian. Com.

The character creation is not very good. The characters in some incidents feel a bit mentally retarded. They forcefully find reasons that are not consistent with the reality for the sake of the plot. Moreover, I believe that with the short videos and live broadcasts, those people should know the knowledge introduced by the protagonist. The author's ability in this aspect needs to be strengthened. Furthermore, since you are a photographer, you should do what a photographer should do, and other skills and so on must serve the photography industry. Otherwise, why is this book called this name? You shouldn't fix too many other things, because there are really too many other Pokémon stories, and in addition, the new author's creations are not as reasonable as those of the old author, so those who should be tired of aesthetics are already tired of aesthetics. Everything else is pretty good, come on, author, I hope you write better and better.

I hope that in the future it won't become mainly about live broadcasts and online battles. It's good that the Pokémon text will become a live broadcast room blowing water and online battles and exclaiming.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't know anything about the main character's live broadcast. You can't support a broken hiking anchor. The whole thing is the same as that of Ten Million Big V

1. The protagonist really didn't practice and went to participate in a gorgeous performance. Although the gorgeous performance in the early stage was really not interesting, forget it 2. What song was the protagonist playing on the harmonica? Needless to say, there is really no sense of immersion! It's hard for me to imagine this 3. When the protagonist cut the video, I felt that the content of the video was very short. In my imagination, it was very short. It probably didn't include the beginning, interruption and end. If this is the case, we only know that what the protagonist sent was about flying Pokémon. Theme video, I don't know anything else about it 4. Although the update is slow, I can understand it. After all, the author is not a super printer, but the recent chapters are indeed too routine, mainly because they are not interesting. I will come and read them when I stock up on a few more.

Can any reader give me some follow-up reading so that I can test the waters? Please, if the story is very interesting, please don't keep it. Can I ask Gengar to make mushroom soup for you?

Already updated in full. Come on, big brother who likes Gengar.

Take the title to mean I'm really a dementor.

Strange things

I feel that the protagonist can sing those famous songs in a specific scene, and match the scene, such as wind, vegetation and other scenes, let the protagonist sing a more suitable song, or make some super delicious food, and interact with those mythical beasts from all over the world. It is very good, and I like the Pokémon novel very much. If battles are added, it will be even more perfect.

It's probably some interaction with the audience. For example, when the protagonist sings, you can describe the lyrics and the artistic conception of the lyrics. Write the beginning, climax and ending parts, and then present them. The audience's reaction and feelings after listening to the protagonist singing the song Moreover, the songs the protagonist sings are very artistic songs, and they are songs that are not found in this world. They are not shocked by the protagonist's creation of songs, and sigh. It's shocking, emotional, and feels like it's missing some interaction If the protagonist sings a song that's not found in this world, and it's very beautiful and artistic, add some bird poetry! Farewell book! For songs like this, let the audience have a good feel of what music shocks. Before playing this song, you can also write a story similar to humans and Pokémon, and then after the protagonist expresses his feelings, he wants to present this song, etc., And also highlight the audience's reaction after listening to this song. If it is too ordinary, it will feel that there is no difference between live broadcast and no live broadcast Probably these are the feelings for the time being, and it can be regarded as my personal opinion. I hope it can be helpful to you.

Does the author have a heroine? If so, is it multiple or single? Having a heroine can also accompany the protagonist on trips and take photos.

What's going on with this latest plot?

I always feel that this way of writing looks a bit familiar.

Come on Shennong, is this a live broadcast?

I hope the author can write more, after all, 200,000 words is still too few

I feel that the author's book has achieved very good results. It's because of the internal editor who is so discerning.

There are only more than 70 pictures, which is not enough to read. Is there any way to save manuscripts?