Wuxia Crossover: This Western Venom Is a Little Off

I don't know how the protagonist became a money-minded person. I know that the author was afraid of poverty. It's a good martial arts book with only one word "money" in it. I really don't know how Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying raised the protagonist. Every chapter is so fucking expensive.

What does it mean that Kuangtu Yan was chased and slashed for thousands of miles by Lin Chaoying because he called Lin Chaoying a female swordsman instead of a swordsman, and yet he surrendered even though Lin Chaoying spared his life?

It was really disgusting to write about Kuang Yan being chased and chopped down by Lin Chaoying. I really just wrote whatever I dreamed about. A fierce guy who can be ranked high in the warm series is chased and killed by a character who has a gold series who has more scenes than a supporting role?

"Ashes of Time"? Is it the setting of that movie that pretends to be sophisticated?

The madman became a saint, and a fictional Der was created to completely erase the shadow of Western poison. Tsk, it's just that there are too many tubes. If you use the title of the book to deceive people, you won't be able to write about the evil deeds of injury and death. Who can bear to watch your children play house? Boring

When I read the beginning of the second chapter, I saw a story about a senior brother sorting out his clothes. This kind of writing is either a female video or a pornographic video. If not, it would be very pretentious. I can't do it. I can't watch it if this happens.

It's so hard to find a book that I can read in this book shortage. Why are there so few well-written reviews?

This comprehensive martial arts novel is a bit too messy, and the protagonist is a bit too artificial to pretend to be young, and inexplicably keeps sighing about the world. There are many young and old, and it is uncomfortable to watch... The protagonist changes from Ouyang Feng to Ouyang Feng, pursuing freedom. However, judging from the content of the novel, the protagonist's behavior is completely separated from the freedom he talks about, doing whatever he wants and living a messy life. If the plot is written like this, it will look very awkward.

I only read Chapter 24. I say I want to be stubborn, but I don't want to be stubborn to the end. Just for some self-justifying calculations, it's not satisfying enough, it's not wanton enough, and I'm shackles!

A world of martial arts, seventy-two realms, does the author want to see what you are writing?

I really couldn't hold my breath when I saw the second picture. There are gangs underground in Zhongnan Mountain. Are the gangs looking for trouble for Taoist priests wearing Quanzhen Taoist robes? 😰

It can be seen that the most difficult thing in mixed martial arts is to balance the force. After all, the world's weights are different. The author chooses a line to measure. It is actually quite good, but sometimes it is a bit fragmented, but I personally like it.

It's too much to add drama to Lin Chaoying.

Why do these writers who write about martial arts always randomly change the characters from other people's original works, and it's nondescript

Isn't AI banned? Such an obvious AI article

What a pity for this author's writing style! The biggest problem with mixed martial arts is that each story has its own benchmark. The Jin Yong series is fine, but the most annoying thing is that the ancient dragon series is also mixed in. What's wrong? Do you let Jin Yong's Five Jue's talk about Liaozhai? Why do you still practice martial arts? Can the masters in Jin Yong's novels fight against the madmen and perverts in Gu Long's novels? You have to know that in Gu Long's writings, no one is invincible! As long as you are human, you will always have flaws and shortcomings, and you will eventually capsize! No matter how gorgeous you are, Yan Nantian, Lu Xiaofengchu Liuxiang, you will be killed in Niubi. The reason why they are not killed is because they are pig feet! I'm watching Jin Yong, who is Wu Jue? It was a true journey across the rivers and lakes. The most intuitive one is Zhang Sanfeng's Jiazi slaying the devil in "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword"! Come on, let Gu Long's heroes play tricks on me! Either it will be crippled by a woman, or it will be drugged by a drug dealer, it is not worthy of being a hero in Gu Long's works! Therefore, people who write about Jin and ancient mixed martial arts are forcing the system and talking nonsense. Jin Yong's martial arts is more like a fairy tale. The three religions and nine schools in Gu Long's works are more real!

Wu Zong is not very easy to write. Personally, I feel that the author has done a good job so far. The introduction of various characters is gradual, which can slowly advance the plot of the protagonist. There are some flaws in the description of the plot, which cannot be helped. I hope you can work harder!

You were persuaded to quit after three chapters, but you won't kill anyone who sticks to your face? Do you think you are very dignified? You are pretending to be elegant!

It's okay, but just barely. It's not bad at first, but I don't need to watch it anymore. The battle scenes in different realms can also be written like a level, but there is only one level. Here it is directly "Ah, I am at level x of level xx, and my opponent is at the peak of level xx, but I still can't win." How to write this "cannot win" into a story-filled process is the author's lofty goal. Obviously this author is not good at it; if he is good at it, there is no need to suddenly reach a state later in the writing.

This world setting is Daming! Ouyang Feng is too young, even if you want to unify the world, it is unreasonable. The first part of the plot is okay, but the restaurant part is too pretentious, and this is still a dog sign

The writing is a bit poor. The protagonist talks to himself too much. However, I don't write mixed martial arts well. Alas.

Why do I need to subscribe to the chapters I have already subscribed to?

Beautiful and well written! I just like to watch mixed martial arts and all kinds of strange masters.

Do you have any recommendations for mixed martial arts novels of similar quality?

In the original novel, he was born to his sister-in-law, but now the eldest brother has died long ago! Even though there are so many women, he is still a virgin!

I've written two hundred chapters and it's still a mess.

It smells like AI. I don't know if it's an illusion.

What is it? Messy

By the way, it's not the kind of routine where being a eunuch among thousands of flowers is called a carefree one, right?

The writing is so messy, and the main character seems to be pretending to have nothing to do!