Wuxia Crossover: This Western Venom Is a Little Off

I don't know how the protagonist became so obsessed with money; I know the author was terrified of poverty. A perfectly good martial arts novel, reduced to nothing but money. I really don't know how Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying raised the protagonist; every chapter is just about money, money, money.

It's disgusting how Yan Kuangtu is chased and hacked by Lin Chaoying. It's like he's writing whatever he dreams about. A powerful figure from the Wen faction is being chased and hacked by a character from the Jin faction who has more screen time than a minor character.

What does it mean that Yan Kuangtu was chased and hacked for thousands of miles by Lin Chaoying because he called her "female swordsman" instead of "swordsman"? He was spared by Lin Chaoying and then surrendered?

He withdrew right at the start; a very old-fashioned, pretentious writing style. When some thugs come to the restaurant to cause trouble, clearly intending to drive away all customers and ruin the business, the protagonist, as a diner, actually thinks deep down, "Don't see me, let me finish my meal.

"Ashes of Time"? Does it use the setting of that pretentious movie?

Madness to sainthood, creating a fictional Der completely erases any trace of the Western Poison. Tsk, purely due to too much censorship. Using the title to lure people in but failing to write anything truly heinous, who has the patience to read your childish playbook? Utterly boring.

Zongwu is fine; you can write it as Jinzong or Guzong, but you're writing it as Zazong...

Seeing the beginning of Chapter Two, where the senior brother is tidying up his clothes, this kind of writing style is either typical of female-oriented fiction or overly sentimental. I can't stand it; if it even shows signs of that, I can't read it.

This martial arts crossover novel is a bit too chaotic, and the protagonist acts like a pretentious young man, constantly and inexplicably lamenting about the martial world, appearing neither young nor old, which is jarring to read… The protagonist transforms from Ouyang Feng to Ouyang Feng, pursuing freedom, but based on the novel's content, his actions and his professed freedom, his carefree…

Martial arts novels are not easy to write, but personally, I think the author has written them very well so far. The introduction of various characters is gradual, which is good for slowly advancing the protagonist's plot. There are some flaws in the writing of certain plots, but that can't be helped. I hope the author can keep improving!