Immortal Journey

The reviews in the feed are pretty good, let me check it out.

The title and introduction of the book have delayed you. After reading the title and introduction, I thought it was an old-fashioned upgrade stream. I didn't expect it to be so good.

The beginning is fascinating, the writing is concise and sophisticated, all kinds of people are comfortable and reasonable, and the world has a strong sense of reality. Treasure book

Why do you feel like something happens wherever the protagonist goes?

I said that the rhythm is so good. It turns out that it is LV5. It is a high-quality asset. The simplified setting is similar to that of Pseudo Heaven. It is interesting.

Just a month after the Soul Transmigration, you have such a deep relationship with your parents in that world?

I was really convinced. This novel has one theme: the protagonist deserves disaster at every step and is in trouble at every turn.

Shen Nong is Coming, after Lan Ke and Chi Xin, it is the only work among the Xianxia works that can be watched. Of course, it is not the same type as Lanke Chixin. It is more old-school and a little speculative. It is easy to have random thoughts while watching it. For me, this is probably the biggest charm of this work. The writing is simple, the plot is compact, and the story is full of fun. It's a good book. I hope I won't be a eunuch

Bubble. Better looking than the cliche fantasy I expected

I don't know how to deal with the ending of using the disciples of the sect to make elixirs. Yan is definitely going to die. I just don't know how to write about his daughter. I hope it doesn't disgust me.

Have you ever practiced immortality? I wrote some things randomly and took them for granted.

I don't understand why I need to change pills. She already has pills. Shouldn't the good elixir of the copy be kept for myself?

Good books, rare good books, old-school books. Nowadays, there are a bunch of Taoist books, which are very boring. This book is very strict. You have to risk your life to cultivate immortality. The story is told smoothly and a bit suspenseful. The author's writing is profound.

I read this book after reading the author's remarks after finishing the last book Where is the fantasy, and where is the farming? The author was deprived of his life or sold his name Also, don't write it as a Buddhist journey, Immortal Journey.

The realm setting and sect background are too ordinary, and the writing is petty, but the plot is okay, the characters are well-rounded, and the writing is sophisticated.

Give me the essence.

It's a rare good book, I read it in one sitting!

Recommended by a real person, watch my tasting skills 😏

It's well written, not just a routine piece of writing.

If you ask me, it would be better to let Chunji reincarnate and worship the protagonist as his teacher, which is much better than letting Chunhui take him away. It also conformed to Zen Master Chunji's heart. Chunji himself did not want to follow the path of harmony, but wanted to seek good results. The protagonist accepts the reincarnation of Chunji as his apprentice and lets Chunji teach himself.

If you are not particularly good at writing the parts about interpersonal relationships and showing off, you can shorten them appropriately.

The name is Xian Xia, but he is actually a martial arts man.

It looks good. Love it. Please add more 😍

Come on, it looks interesting so far, more interesting than the old-fashioned upgrade article.

I looked at the setting and it seemed similar to a book a thousand years ago with the main character named Shao Yang. I forgot what it was called a myth.

Seeing that readers hate iron, I would like to post a critique. Zhao is too stupid even if not from a moral perspective but from a profit perspective First of all, it must be admitted that Zhao Zaiyuan's choice of reporting in the script is the lowest risk. It can be realized immediately by eradicating the roots, but the benefits obtained are probably the least. Basically, Shang Chunchun made a wedding dress for the clan, which caused a bloody loss to the Zhao family. The core reason is that Zhao himself is a fetus, and it is hard to say whether there is any Qi refining in the family. Judging from the fact that the Zhao family received a heavy reward, took the wind spirit, and developed for more than a hundred years, it was only a weak Qi refining deacon. The family must have been in a worse position a hundred years ago, and it is very likely that the strongest one was Zhao himself. How much reward can a family and a person of this kind bear, and how much is the sect willing to give? If I were to take over, I would choose to take Lingling out secretly, fulfill my promise and slowly gain trust, and then use her as a medium to find a way to trade with Fengling (you can just report it if it doesn't succeed), and at the same time try to help hide Fengxiang from the outside. In this way, the Zhao family is equivalent to being the only middleman, and Qingping Tianlaiqi, who uses the resources of the human world in exchange for secret books, makes the difference. After that, when it's time to have children, it doesn't matter if you prefer or not. 🐶 Monopolized the secret realm to cut leeks for a long time, and the wind spirit blessed the bloodline, waiting for the clan to develop. A few generations later, people who were at least in the late stages of Qi refining and even foundation building revealed that the secret realm would most likely be directly named Zhao, and Fengling Township would become a subordinate force of Bixuanmen Waiting for a reply from a big boss...

It's good to read, the pace is just right, the author will update soon

There is nothing to say about the writing style and the plot. It's just that this kind of genius flow is easy to collapse in the future, and even the plot of the copy can't be restored. As long as the pig's feet can be written reasonably, I will continue to subscribe to the monthly pass in the future.

I think this book is a masterpiece, even if it is delayed by the title.

It's too little. Can the author keep writing without sleeping?