Create a Different Game World

To create a game world, the big framework remains the same

If you are not a full-time employee, you will be satisfied with one update every day, as long as you ensure the quality. Most authors now do one or two updates. The three-update trend that was led astray by Tang has gone away.

I have to say that this book is still nothing new. This kind of subject matter is like that. It cannot write the feeling of a real person's consciousness game.

A very novel article about land reclamation, construction and farming, I like it very much. Construction should be full of vigorous energy and enthusiasm. "Constructors" must be full of positive energy, believe in the power of the masses, inspire and mobilize the masses' enthusiasm for production, and overcome difficulties through mutual support. Such works are the most inspiring and make people passionate about life.

This episode where the player "Xiao Ming on the run" put his major into the game and achieved great results really touched me. I didn't like this major at first, but suddenly I made great achievements, was noticed and appreciated by others, and became full of enthusiasm for life and study. I also repaired the conflicting father-son relationship and was full of positive energy.

After a cursory glance, I don't quite understand how the author wants to write this story Whether he wants the protagonist to develop a development route that focuses on personal force and players are supplementary; or a route where the protagonist focuses on training players and personally takes on the role of Gawain in Sword of the Dawn In fact, I think it is more like the development route of Sword of the Dawn, but I don't see that feeling now. Many basic settings are not done well, and the characters are relatively empty. Come on, author

In Chapter 29, the player "Xiao Ming on the run" participated in the game design - transforming the mine and managing the mine is really enviable. I also want to play this kind of game😍

I have read the previous part of this book, and it is good, but the world setting is not clear. I suggest you change the place where another world invades, otherwise it is true to persuade people to retreat. According to the part I am reading now, what you want to express, the author, is that the laws of each world will protect the individual living beings in each world, so melee combat is effective (indirect effect), while the weapons (spells) fired from a distance are only materials, and the rules of the world cannot apply, and this rule is effective for both parties. The explanation you wrote is really confusing, and it will be a ghost if you don't persuade them to retreat.

Is there any difference between a thrown dart and a fired bullet? Is there a problem with the material or the wrong flying position? Why do I feel like people nowadays treat hot and cold weapons as if they are two different types of damage? Chopping with a knife can effectively kill the enemy, but the destructive power of a chainsaw is not enough? What's the difference in motivation? What did it do to you? The rules of the world are different, and the lethality of thermal weapons has dropped significantly. How did it drop?

Brothers who have never learned how to control animals, please report your numbers,

I saw something was wrong at the back. The settings for your sleep online game. . . . Are you planning to abandon the foreigners on Blue Star? If not, how would you let foreigners play with this change? If so, I can accept it if you simply set the will of the planet to be China's national destiny. If you don't change this setting, it's a big poison. .

This book nb, there are a lot of books I'm following that are recommended, I came here from Yushou to check it out

My personal suggestion is not to write about the government army on Blue Star. It is risky and easy to 404. Just concentrate on writing about the game world

The protagonist has an innate soul power of level 100. He has a terrifying resurgence at the beginning. He wears women's clothes to kill Tang San, eats the rabbit Xiao Wu, kills women, kills Ning Rongrong, becomes a sister to Zhu Zhuqing, protects Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, and does not lick dogs. The title of the book: Gods in the Heavens Starting from Douluo, come and take a look, just click in to read it. Become a god at the beginning and play the role of a beautiful girl. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is a tsundere loli, but in fact the protagonist is already invincible.

From: Duoduo (crossed out) Fenggege (crossed out) Fengyue.

After watching part of it, the positioning of the protagonist is too toxic. He's just a tool man, there's nothing exciting about him. Especially since the protagonist is also a player. When other players pretend to be B, the protagonist becomes a little transparent. In other behind-the-scenes articles, no matter how powerful the supporting characters are, we also know that they serve the protagonist and are given or indirectly given by the protagonist. However, the protagonist of this article personally goes out to grab the position of the supporting role. It is okay in the early stage, but the author can downplay this position later, resulting in transparency at the critical moment, which is very unpleasant. On the other hand, there is a goddess above the protagonist, or in other words, the other supporting characters really serve the game itself, and the existence of the protagonist is dispensable. Yes, it is optional. The protagonist himself does not have a particularly strong goal. Eve from Yggdrasil, the young master Annan, and a certain mechanic all have clear goals. All players strive for their goals and are guided secretly by them. But the protagonist of this article always feels detached, like an outsider. It seems that he is the same without him, which is really a failure.

Anti-Toxin Patch The author of this book always likes to make some fancy things. How can I say it? Speaking of creativity, the creativity of this book is indeed good, but if you look closely, it is like a piece of cake that looks like chocolate. It tastes like chocolate, but after two bites, you can eat an undigested excrement, which makes you feel sick and uncomfortable. You can eat it, but it is disgusting. What are the laws of the world, what is the flow rate of time? When the author wrote the setting, have you ever thought that this kind of thing affects the whole body? You can't go through this thing in advance and sort it out before writing. It's really a headache to read it. There are countless shortcomings and bugs. Writing a novel itself should use your wild imagination. This is true, but if you want to write about reality, you must respect the basic logic of reality. Otherwise, it will look like something like an anti-Japanese drama. I raised my opinion, but I didn't listen or change it. Alas, you continue, I slipped away.

There is a big problem. Firearms are ineffective against alien creatures and will be killed by two hits of the gun butt. Logical errors, 1. The fired bullets and cannons should be the same as the stones and javelins thrown by hands. They are both kinetic energy and physical damage. The author can write that the hot weapon misfires, but he cannot write that it will be ineffective after being fired. It is very stupid. 2. Continuing from 1, I think that since the will of Blue Star can forcibly pull the will of the dead world goddess, and arranged for Xu Yi, the agent chosen by Blue Star, to lead this novel. It is obvious that there is only one result. As a world will with a complete main body will, Blue Star must be able to restrain or even devour the goddess' world will. 3. Borrowing the content analysis from 2, I don't think Blue Star Will has no power to resist the invasion of the demon world. When the worlds come into contact, the rules of chaos do not match. Banning thermal weapons and evil energy is completely insufficient to maintain the game. If you don't plan a range, others can easily kill you with their bodies, and there is no potential for game. At least why I, as a devil, didn't run away and lurk, but confronted you head-on. The author didn't write or explain it at all. 4. My understanding of this plot is that when the world comes into contact, a space portal is created. With the portal as the center, within a certain range such as 3 kilometers, 5 kilometers, and 100 kilometers, the rules are disordered. The opponent cannot use evil magic. The earth explosion art fails and misfires. At the same time, a barrier effect is generated in this range to shield external attacks such as nuclear bombs and extraterrestrial missiles. Only muscle strength can function normally within this range. But beyond this range, thermal weapons can be used normally, while demons cannot use fel powers within the Blue Star.

This kind of novel has too many loopholes to write. First, why not find the army? The army is much easier to use than players. Second, it is both an evacuation and a war, but it did not break out online. (The solution is to sign a confidentiality agreement and seal it, but it will still be disclosed) Third, as long as the world has a brain, it should choose the top leader when choosing people. (The solution is the matching problem)

Ha, why is it okay for bullets to hit monsters, but can kill them in melee combat? Aren't these two things physical damage? I can understand if the gun cannot be used, but your bullet has already been fired. Otherwise, the bullet in this world is another kind of damage except physical damage and magic damage. It is different from the thermal weapons I know?

The author can re-write the next novel. This book is finished. First of all, boring point 1, people from the original world can actually be resurrected. Boring point 2, other worlds have come to the earth and are still weak. Boring point 3, the world has intelligence and is too weak to be seen. It was originally impossible to defeat it because it has the protagonist? ! ,

Where did you all come from? I came from Beast Control.

Chapter 10 is a poisonous spot. Bullets are useless, but a gun butt will kill you. Unacceptable.

Many novels about fighting anomalies like this describe modern thermal weapons as useless. Guns and cannons are like tickling, but people holding machetes can do huge amounts of damage. When I saw this, I lost interest in reading it. It was too deliberate. As long as the laws of physics remain unchanged, there is no argument that cannons and bombs cannot cause damage. If the laws of physics change, it will be effective if you use a machete, bow and arrow to hit? It's really insulting to people's intelligence. Bomb explosions not only cause physical damage, but also high-temperature energy shocks, etc. If you can't hit them physically or with energy, then you're not invincible, so why bother?

Once the national team entered the field, the fun of the game was gone, and I didn't pay close attention to the rest. The purpose of playing the game is to have fun, with the elements of the national team, no matter what, it is a Wolf Warrior-style novel 🙂

It's too boring, like reading a running account, there are too few conversations between players, and in places like out-of-game forums, they are basically mentioned in one stroke, and players are written like NPCs. Several characters have no characteristics at all, and some places that can enrich the characters are basically mentioned in one stroke. For example, the contact between old players and new players at the beginning of the second test, there is no interaction between the boss and the players when seizing the core of the first world, and the players' dirty talk is not described. Is this the first time the author writes about the fourth natural disaster type?

Good looking

Good guy, the monster that couldn't be killed by bullets was killed by two gun butts. I retreated first 😒

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not very good, a bit too straightforward.

Oh? The finale? Another book that has been raised to death... (; 1_1)