Wizard: Starting with Immortality

The eternal being is a nanny for others, that's too weird!

The protagonist will make mistakes = The protagonist will definitely make mistakes The protagonist will be plotted = The protagonist will definitely be plotted Looking at the introduction, are you planning to write this as a classic plot?

There is no threshold for wizard immortality style, so I don't know what I want to do when I write this kind of wizard immortality style.

There is a gu and he ran away. Aren't there worms in Western Fantasy? Forcibly adding a trick, the style doesn't match up to me

Change your name. I choose to be a nanny forever... Disgusting

There is nothing wrong with Goldfinger being immortal. The plot at the beginning goes by so fast because it wants to compress the apprenticeship period that is infinitely extended in other wizarding novels and quickly enter the official wizarding stage. This resulted in the loss of a truly inhuman feeling of being a mortal and an apprentice to a formal wizard, and the apprenticeship period was no longer set up, making many settings very abrupt and smelling of oriental fantasy. In short, it is just a waste of time.

It's hard to write about the wizard immortality stream, because in my impression, the wizard's cultivation system is so life-saving that you don't even have to reach a very late stage. You can easily live for eighteen hundred years just in the early stage.

As soon as it was released, the protagonist was defeated, 666

It's too complicated. You either have to write a Western fantasy or just write a fairy tale. The settings of the two dramas pop up at every turn. It's like a sentence suddenly pops up in a traditional fairy tale about cultivating immortals. The master of a certain sect went into retreat and broke through to an Omega-level immortal cultivator. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Wizard Immortality Stream. . . . Which wizard did this? Shouldn't immortality be the key? If we try to make wizards immortal, which wizard can't live forever? . .

A story about a fourth-rate protagonist who, with the help of a third-rate author, goes through a second-rate plot to achieve a first-rate goal (hint: the goal is accomplished at the beginning)

After it was put on the shelves, I didn't care about it anymore, and it was still being targeted. Even if I wrote clues in front of it, being targeted just made me unhappy. If you're interested in watching it, you don't need to read it after it's released. It doesn't feel interesting.

It's well written. If the follow-up doesn't collapse, I should be able to go to Sanjiang.

There is nothing left to write. I can only write about the nanny. Bye.

This is a genius novel. It has nothing to do with immortality, and it has nothing to do with any area or Gou. The protagonist doesn't know how to be Gou and can only rush forward. After all, he is a master who can decide the war between two planes.

The author took the advice and changed the poison into a bug. Readers have a stereotype that if there is a poison, it doesn't look like a wizard novel. Just like what I read is a martial arts novel, but their martial arts names are: Fireball Technique, Wind Blade Technique, and Earth Release Technique. It will look nondescript, and readers will feel separated when reading it.

Many plots involve the left and right brains fighting each other.

What I don't like the most is being plotted, making mistakes, or being stupid. Thank you for saying it in your introduction. Who wants to see you grow up slowly? It won't be fun until later.

An immortal is bound to a life and death Gu. Don't you think you are very abstract?

Pig cruelty novel, forced feeding of feces, no wonder the grades are poor

To be honest, I don't have any sense of empathy.

It was okay in the early stage, but later on the benefits and efforts were a bit out of balance, and it also violated Gou's character design, making it unbearable later on.

The rhythm of the plot is not right, there is a problem with the description of the transition, and the names of people (maybe they have appeared before) appear inexplicably during the battle, which makes it confusing.

When writing battles, use AI.

Stick to Chapter 5🙏🙏

The curse of witchcraft. Wizards can also play poison. For example, the spring and autumn poison is changed to the spring and autumn insect. It feels like the grade is low.

It's very well written. I'm lucky that I read this book when it was in its infancy. The protagonist is very consistent with my idea of ​​what an immortal should be. He is slow and slow, advancing slowly, with clear goals and firm will. It is the best book I have read this month, but the update is a bit slow.

Thinking in leaps and bounds like the title, lack of coherence, like prose

The author you wrote about the Seven Witches fell in love with the protagonist in the first few decades of her life, and then silently loved Bai Yueguang for 50 years. Is it not a bit heavy? Now, join the vice-dean's sect and quickly develop a wave of strength that surpasses the protagonist, and then capture the protagonist as a ⭐Work hard

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