Faking It as an Immortal: The Unorthodox Cultivation Notes of Nan Guo

It's pretty good-looking, but apart from the allusion of using the ruse to make up for it, I don't see the need to put the background in the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods. It would feel better if the background was set aside.

Is it the Chuanzi that Wan ordered, or the navy?

Which boss's trumpet? ? ? ?

I really think this book is better than most of the monthly tickets. I have barely read this year's new books. The new books I like, Crow and Xiaolangjun, are not very interesting. Only this one and Immortal Disaster seem to have something to offer, but I just gave up like that? Moreover, this book has been criticized by many people, which is simply inexplicable.

1. Overall, this book is worth reading. At least the writing style on the new book list and the monthly ticket list is not much better than that of the author, Liangcao (mainly the writing is quite interesting) 2. There are several poisonous points, and the plot also has some places that cannot be read with your mind. Let me talk about the points: First of all, the first skill that the protagonist gets (you can see that the protagonist touches people's corpses on the playground) Come out) Why don't we discuss why we still carry the secret book with us after learning it? There are so many people watching the protagonist touching the corpse (the protagonist's excuse is Wang Ming), but it is unreasonable that the general named Tian Wei didn't explain it to King Qi. There is also an assassin who found out the skills that are so naughty (this is not a bad point because the person they want to kill is King Qi, so he is not awesome), but he brings it with him for the protagonist to touch. I felt amazing because after learning it, the protagonist didn't carry any secret techniques with him, and they were searched, and your protagonist could find it out. The assassin was not found by the palace guards, and his head was about to be lost. You modern people are better at searching the body than others. Master, the plot interspersed in the middle is too unreasonable. There are too many tricks that are leaked in the palace. There is only one possible explanation. The imperial master gave you the slave mark and didn't care about you. King Qi also thinks that you can't change the world. I also think this slave mark is a clown🤡. See for yourself if you laugh. Why didn't he use the slave mark to kill you when he was fighting with the other person's Yin body later? The national master was reluctant to use it on you? There's nothing else, it's just that there are too many poisonous points in the palace, so I can't use my brain to detail it Summary: Liangcao, I can still read it, because the writing is indeed better than the ones before and after you, and the story is quite interesting, so the poisonous points can be tolerated, but I hope it will be about the palace. The author can go through some of the rules in his own mind. As long as it is not too poisonous, he can read it. It is impossible to write this kind of thing that can withstand scrutiny. If it is comprehensive, the author will lose more hair and update less, so I will write it when I feel that it can be done after the situation is reflected.

The writing is pretty good, but it's the first time I've seen so many people criticizing a new first-level book. I think I'm being cheated.

Liangcao, some people in the comment section have exaggerated.

✒️Writing: good 🎬 Plot: OK 🎭 Character design: A bit worse

In any case, the author should not be discouraged, just create another small account and come back.

It's well written, but there are two points that make it terrible. After the protagonist is named, he can't do anything. He is prepared to be a dead horse and act as a live doctor, and he sings hard. Isn't this suicide? It is better to add a patch, the protagonist understands a little bit, and then sings, but it is terrible, and in the end he is fucked by the king. Then the anchor ran away here. This place is better than before. The author wrote down the subjective and objective reasons why he can't run away.