One Piece: I Can Animate All Things

Why is it that authors who can come up with good topics can't write well?

Does the main character not have a name? Why can't I say "Dog Basket" and have always used someone else's name? No one will laugh at you if you call yourself a dog basket.

Author, your writing feels a bit disjointed, lacking a main plot or outline.

Some readers said the writing was poor, but I didn't think so; it felt like standard fanfiction. However, the protagonist was sometimes a bit... Well, you know. Here are two examples: Firstly, the protagonist wants to go to the island to get artificial Devil Fruits.

I've only read a chapter or two. You need to be smarter with your novel writing! When you bring characters to life, you need to give them personality and traits. For example, a deity statue could speak with a divine style after being brought to life, making it more three-dimensional.

The character of the protagonist has no highlights at all and even feels stupid.

Shennong, your idea is pretty good. But the whole plot feels like child's play. None of the characters with even a slight influence in the original story were killed, not even those who were enemies of the protagonist, even when there were opportunities to kill them. Take Enel, for example.

The writing is getting dumber and dumber; it has no purpose whatsoever, and it's unclear what the protagonist is trying to achieve.

1. By exposing the power of the Pink Dragon Fruit, what will the World Government think? Will they not realize the potential of artificial Devil Fruits? Will they prevent Vegapunk from continuing his research on artificial Devil Fruits? In that case, Vegapunk will be even less willing to go with you. 2. Why did you invite Vegapunk to create a Devil Fruit for you in front of Zephyr?

The protagonist is just an ordinary pirate. There's nothing particularly noteworthy about his personality or thoughts.