Starting with Smiling Proud Wanderer, I Gather Merit Tags

If the protagonist needs achievements and fame, then develop more industries. Don't get stuck on the path of martial arts and chivalry.

Explaining sword energy is so annoying. Martial arts are just a means to an end, who needs to explain them? Strength is enough. This is from my childhood. How old is the author? The era of Jin Yong is long over.

It's too rough; it feels like they're deliberately trying to belittle Linghu Chong. Even without a main character, Linghu Chong still manages to roam the martial world on his own, and he's doing just fine, isn't he? Linghu Chong is simply someone who responds better to gentle persuasion than force, and someone who prioritizes immediate gains over long-term consequences; he is not stupid.

He's born to do great things! 🙂

... Why is it called rebellion? Don't you know how to speak properly? That's called an uprising.

I suggest you revise the first three chapters properly; they're too rushed.

If you were emperor, you would have started the Industrial Revolution, ushered in the Age of Exploration, and colonized the entire world. Bringing high-yield crop seeds and other seeds (such as rubber tree seeds) to the Central Plains would be a tremendous achievement.

I think Yue Buqun was forced into becoming the sect leader. He had not received any education as a crown prince, and all his actions were aimed at being an excellent disciple of Mount Hua, not a qualified sect leader.

Putting everything else aside, Linghu Chong's character is portrayed vividly.

Let's change the book title; the entry isn't very noticeable.