Cultivating Immortality Across a Hundred Lifetimes

The writing is really good, the only shortcoming is that I like to do it myself

Is the author letting himself go? The first book Lin Zhuanlun was still boring and boring. This one's nature has been exposed. It's obviously sexy, right?

Can you write a normal way of writing fighting skills? You don't want to say that the writing is exciting or not. You are very good at fighting skills. What does it mean to be a low-level practitioner? In order to play with the new three's jokes, you have a foundation building period to allow Jindan to give face in the later stage. And because the protagonist can seriously injure the opponent, the opponent is willing to tell the secret. What kind of plot is this? If it is written by AI, it is more logical than what you wrote.

But why did you start charging later? Author, are you obsessed with money?

Something has dropped again. What are you trying to do? Writing this frustrating thing all day long, now I personally feel that the protagonist is wandering around all day long relying on reincarnation. Thinking of it, I want to improve my level. I don't care what you, the author, think, anyway, this is how it feels now. Obviously there are many formulas that can solve this junior high school math problem when I get to high school, but it just doesn't work. Ai! I just want to solve this math problem using what I learned in junior high school, and then I will go to high school after that. The author is full of malice, your senior Pingda Yue i Subaru TV, right?

Haha, I got red eye as soon as my book scores came up.

This book is one that has good grades and will definitely keep your starting point. A long time ago, there was a book called Xian Xia, in which the main character acted like a duck. It was selling all the time. It didn't even make it to the new book list, so it was removed from the shelves. On the one hand, colleagues are jealous, but there are also some readers who don't like to read these and will report them. The author should revise slowly, straighten out the outline, and at least ensure that the first 1 million words do not collapse. This book is a great improvement over the previous books. If the follow-up is stable, there is great hope for future bookings.

There is no golden elixir in the twelfth life. Why don't you upgrade your fantasy? How could you have been used as a chess piece if you had golden elixir earlier? The protagonist of this book is the most rubbish one even though there is such a thing as the Book of Hundreds of Worlds. Sure enough, no matter how good the person is, it is useless.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​  As I'm up to date, I'll write a brief review. This book is generally getting better. The pace in the early stages is quite fast, at least much faster than the few books I have read before. In the early stage, it can be regarded as food and grass +. Although the writing is good, if it borrows too much, it will eventually fall behind. In the later stage, especially in the 8, 9, and 10 three generations, as the plot progresses, it can be seen that it is getting better and better, which can be called fairy grass. The style of this book is very different from most novels of the same type that I have seen before. Reincarnation does not add combat power. The overall plot is mainly about planning. If you want to see the truth through force, you can go out and turn left. Selling hooks is a feature of this book (I like it very much, it is very innovative). If you care, you don't have to read it. Some people say that this book is sloppy and never opens new maps. Since I am not a follower of updates, the overall impression is actually very good, and there is nothing particularly sloppy about it. The writing style of this book is actually more conducive to character creation, at least in terms of character creation, it is far better than the Path of Immortality. The success of the First Sage also proves the superiority of this path. Due to the advantages of this writing method, if the standard can be maintained, I think there will be a chance to be better than the First Sage in character creation in the future. Then there are some suggestions. I think there is still room for improvement in the foreshadowing and layout. Moreover, the plot of Dragon Lord is obviously the main line of the whole book. Dragon Lord should be in the late stage of Yuanying. This main line can support up to the protagonist Yuanying or Transformation God. In most books, the quality of the plot will decline significantly after the end of this main line. Although I see that the author is already opening a new map, I still hope that the author will lay it out as soon as possible. The quality of the plot and the protagonist of this book have been stepping on steel. The threads are highly relevant and the tense plot rhythm can attract people to continue reading. If you just open the map without putting pressure on the protagonist, the quality of the plot will definitely decline significantly. Moreover, I don't really want to have another plot where the old one comes back again. This kind of situation like Bajiao Ke only happens once. It won't look good if it happens too many times. And don't rush it. The ten-year plot is too deliberate and easy to be criticized. It's better to think about it later.

The protagonist treats all women as playthings, and these women are kind to the protagonist. Even if you don't take care of them, I will admit it. This is the default character of the protagonist, but he is very nice to those who have nothing to do with you, which makes people speechless. For example, the Nineteenth Junior Brother, such as the female disciple Ying Ning, does not help the protagonist in any way, but the protagonist loves and cares for them with all his heart. For those female cultivators who have helped the protagonist, the protagonist treats them all as toys, which is very awkward. Otherwise, you should be evil to everyone, so there is no need for feelings. If you really still have feelings, you have to distinguish who has been good to you and helped you. For many women you have slept with for decades, you show no mercy at all, and you still slander them. If you have raised a dog for decades, you will have some feelings, right? But for those who have nothing to do with you, such as the 19th Junior Brother, the female disciple, and the orphan of the Foundation Establishment Daoist Fellow, you are inexplicably helping selflessly.