From Farmboy to Martial Arts Sage

I've been feeling a bit frustrated and annoyed since the start of the game. It's too slow, and the player count is low. If it continues like this, the player count will remain low and it won't rise much, which is frustrating.

Read more, write more, and absorb more. Many unknown authors suddenly have their entire lives transformed by a single book, such as the authors of "The Newspaper Boy" and "The Fox Tail Pen." I feel that the author's writing has the potential to become a literary legend; it's humorous and flows smoothly. You just need an opportunity to mature and solidify your skills.

I just don't understand, with such good writing skills, why write about an indigenous person?

One of the distinctive features of your writing is its engaging romance, which is an advantage, and there's no need to throw the baby out with the bathwater. However, it's best not to let the romance overshadow the main story; telling a good story (especially with a well-developed outline) is the core competitive advantage.

The author's writing is getting better and better, but I think sometimes you should tone it down a bit and not have the characters constantly making nonsensical jokes. It's normal for a glib-tongued character to like joking. But in your previous book, there was always this character who liked to use slang, regardless of his identity.

The author's writing style is witty and playful, the characters are vivid and endearing, and the slice-of-life scenes are exceptionally well-written. However, from the story outline to the fight scenes, the writing is always lukewarm, lacking that exhilarating feeling of "a silver bottle exploding and water splattering." I hope the next book will be a better fit. By the way, what were the titles of your previous fanfiction works?

You, who don't eat meat, release a new book without even notifying me of the release of the old ones? I only found out now that they've released a new book. And I saw that the new book has already been abandoned. Should I watch it or not?

This gradual, step-by-step approach to practice is more reasonable, and the writing style is better than the previous book.

Have you finished the outline? I'd rather you write slowly than leave it unfinished.

Well written, still so comfortable to read. I just hope that we can learn from the previous experiences and lessons, keep the romantic relationships within reasonable limits, and ensure that the power system is logically consistent. That would be enough.