From Farmboy to Martial Arts Sage

I still feel a bit suffocated from the beginning till now. I feel a bit unhappy when I watch it. It's too slow and I'm not very popular. If it continues like this, I won't be very popular. I can't get high and I don't feel good about it.

Read more, write more, and absorb more. Many unknown authors suddenly turned their lives around with one book, such as the newspaper seller and Foxtail's Pen. I feel that the author's writing style has the potential to become a god. It is humorous and fluent. You just need an opportunity to settle down.

I just don't understand, why should such a good writing style write about an aborigine?

In fact, one of the characteristics of your book is that the emotional scenes are interesting. This is an advantage. There is no need to stop eating because of choking. But it's best not to overwhelm the focus. Telling the story itself well (especially the outline is in place) is the core competitiveness.

The author gets better the more he writes, but I think sometimes he should hold back a little and not let the characters always tell jokes that don't make sense. Create a glib character who likes to joke normally. But in your previous book, a guy who likes to talk slang appears from time to time. No matter what his identity is, the protagonist also likes to talk. Then when they meet, they use slang to chat about casual things, and talk about serious things with slang metaphors, which makes the whole book seem out of tune.

The writing style of "Eating Meat" is playful, the characters are vivid and lovely, and the daily life is written extremely well. However, from the story outline to the fighting scenes, it is always lukewarm and lacks the refreshing feeling of "exploding silver bottles and water slurry bursting out". I look forward to improvements in the next book. Btw: What was the title of the fanfic book you wrote before?

You who don't eat meat didn't notify you of the new book when you published it, and you didn't notify the old one I didn't know until now that the new book was published And when I saw the new book, I was already eunuch Do you think I can read it or not?

It is only reasonable to practice slowly and step by step in this way. The writing is better than the previous book.

Have you finished writing the outline? I'd rather you write slower than finish it.

It's well written and still so comfortable. I just hope to learn from the previous experience and lessons. It's enough to have the emotional point between men and women, grasp the scale, and the power system to be logical and self-consistent.