A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting in the Medicine Garden of Yellow Maple Valley

The protagonist is dressed so flamboyantly when he makes his entrance. Are you sure he's not going to become a Nascent Soul disciple but a Spirit Plant Master?

If you're looking at a medicinal herb garden, then look at the medicinal herb garden and get a plant called a "spiritual herb grower".

When writing characters, the author must clearly distinguish between primary and secondary roles. Readers should focus on the protagonist most of the time, and any other character should only be an auxiliary to the protagonist, such as giving the protagonist magical treasures, equipment, elixirs, or even a furnace, to drive the plot forward.

Killed the spider, took the storage bag, burned the bones to get the Heaven-Mending Pill, and left? What about the two Blood Jade Spider eggs? Didn't they make any hidden features in the passage? Just left directly? Was this written by the author himself? Can't he even remember the plot?

The name you chose is so poorly chosen, it's even your real name!

"You have a wood elemental root. The Azure Origin Sword Technique warns you to run!"

I still don't understand the point of writing an original character Zhang Renmei

What the heck is Zhang Renmei? I mistook her for Chen Shimei at first glance.

Although I was persuaded to quit, I still praised the author. He is a good person. The introduction made it clear that Nangong Wan was not accepted, instead of tricking people into killing them like some novels.

Is Shennong involved? I saw the part about Yanjiabao releasing poison, and I'm not sure if I should continue watching.