All Worlds Begin with Soul Land

Fanfiction without a female lead is almost always doomed. Don't be fooled by the majority of "abandoned" comments; they're actually a small minority. And then there are the people saying they're interested in the plot, not the women—but if you think about it, you'll realize these are the kind of people who just want the author dead. If the plot were good, they'd be writing original content.

This book is readable up to chapter 70, but the later chapters are utter garbage. The protagonist is decisive and ruthless in the early stages, but becomes incredibly cowardly later on, holding back at every turn. Shrek Academy and that transmigrator are constantly causing trouble, but the protagonist only teaches them a lesson before letting them go and continuing to support them.

Sigh, things were fine at the beginning, but then a transmigrator inexplicably appeared. This transmigrator tried to kill Tang San multiple times, but Tang San didn't kill him and let him go multiple times? You're making a novel about countless worlds, are you worried that there won't be powerful gods for Tang San to fight later on?

Let's put it this way: without a female lead, do you think anyone would watch it?

Overall, the writing style is acceptable. There's nothing particularly bad about it. I'll save this for later!

Chapter 60 is really toxic. Author, do you even know what's most important in an auction house? Let me tell you, a keen eye is the most important thing! Her surname is Zhu, and she possesses the Netherworld Cat Martial Soul; just by looking at her, one should be able to guess she belongs to the Star Luo Imperial Empress clan. How audacious must this auction house be to dare to auction her off?!

The earlier chapters of Douluo Continent were alright and readable, and I thought it would be fine if it just continued like that and then switched worlds. But then, in chapter 104, they started writing Under One Person, cramming in a bunch of new characters, especially the part about Li Hansha.

I initially came here because of the title "No Female Lead," but after reading about 30 chapters, I discovered there is indeed a female lead, Ning Rongrong. Personally, I don't like Ning Rongrong, and her talent is arguably the lowest. In the original story, without the immortal herb, Ning Rongrong could only cultivate to level 70.

Didn't they say there was no female lead?? Can't you be honest for once? This is toxic!!

The protagonist transmigrates into the body of Tang San. At the start, another transmigrator steals his place, living with Xiao Wu and becoming a disciple of a master. This other transmigrator, named Xiao Li, wants the protagonist's Xuan Tian Gong (Mysterious Heaven Skill) and challenges him, threatening him with twin martial souls to force him to accept the skill and become a disciple of a…