Mortal: Make Friends and Get Back 10,000 Times

It's actually a soul piercing game, and the introduction talks about a magic weapon. Why does it change into a talisman in the first chapter? It also emphasizes morality among mortals. Can the author grasp it?

Isn't making friends just like being a bitch? Han Li is the son of luck, and the rewards of being friends with him will be greater. Nothing will ever happen to Han Li, and when something happens, the protagonist has to step in to protect him. It seems that the protagonist has gained more, but in fact, he is just being a licker on the inside.

The young sect leader is living in such danger, what about the others?

Just by looking at the name, it's clear that it's a dog-licking article, a nanny article.

I won't say anything else, but why is the protagonist so humble as to invite Yanjiabao to join the Ghost Spirit Sect? There are no Nascent Soul monks in Yanjiabao, only one or two pill-forming monks, which have almost no effect on the Ghost Spirit Sect. There is only one Heavenly Spiritual Root, but it has taken hundreds of years to cultivate the Heavenly Spiritual Root to the Nascent Soul.

This Golden Finger has a better start when writing about casual cultivators than writing about Wang Chan. Is writing this identity just to get a woman? In order to order jealous dumplings? Then this identity cannot be used, and it is calculated. I can only go far away, giving up the convenience of the sect. When teleporting away, two Nascent Souls and one pill formation know the location of the teleportation array, leaving the result of the woman's soul being collected without being questioned. Isn't it too underestimated of the character of a demon cultivator?

Author, why don't you change it? You are obviously suppressing the hero! Do you think everyone can't see it? Books that focus on male protagonists will not do well! You, the male protagonist, formed a pill when Han Li was 30 years old, and Han Li entered the Xutian Palace at the age of 147. More than a hundred years before the Xutian Palace was opened, you, the male protagonist, formed a pill with the dark spirit root for a hundred years and still haven't given birth to a baby! Han Li only stayed in the Dan Formation Stage for 91 years!

There are 7-8 golden elixirs in the entire Yellow Maple Valley. The Yan family has them. How awesome is that? So awesome. This setting rubs the IQ of all mortal readers to the ground!

There are 7 golden elixir stage monks in Yanjiabao. Are the other 6 recharged by the author?

The male protagonist's Dark Spiritual Root's cultivation speed, spiritual energy absorption speed, and elixir refining speed are the same as those of the Heavenly Spiritual Root, and should be more than four times that of Han Li's Four Spiritual Roots! Han Li formed an elixir at the age of 126 and had a baby at the age of 217. Han Li only stayed in the elixir-forming stage for 91 years! Even if Han Li takes the Heaven-Building Pill and refines it for decades to reach the speed of three spiritual roots, then your Dark Spiritual Root cultivation, taking pills every day, and refining the speed should be more than three times that of Han Li. Therefore, you, the male protagonist, the Dark Spiritual Root only needs to stay in the pill-forming period for more than thirty years. Wang Chan, who formed the pill in his thirties, is now about 130 years old. Your Dark Spiritual Root has been waiting for about a hundred years, which is longer than Han Li's 91 years! You should at least have a baby by now! If you take medicine every day and practice cultivation, you should have a baby within a hundred years before the Xutian Palace opens!

Han Li, who had false spiritual roots, gave birth to a baby 91 years after forming the elixir! You, the male protagonist, Dark Linggen, formed a pill at the age of 30, and it has been a hundred years and you still haven't given birth to a baby yet! Are you trying to suppress the male lead on purpose? The speed of cultivating alien spiritual roots, refining elixirs, and absorbing spiritual energy are more than four times that of the four spiritual roots!

The writing is too long-winded, and speaking truth in the dark world of immortality will lead to death. It's not fun, it's too bland, and it's like a running account.

You have traveled through time, and you have the destiny in your hands, so why should you bind a life and death contract with a woman? Is it really good to leave your life to others like this? Knowing clearly that Yan Ruyan in the original novel later took over the Wang family's foundation and killed Wang Chan, is it okay for the author to write like this? ? ?

Your timeline is wrong! Han Li went into seclusion in Tianxing City at the age of 66. After 60 years of seclusion, Han Li successfully formed elixirs at the age of 126. Han Li refined 72 Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Swords at the age of 147. He went to a deserted island to meet Xuan Gu, and the Xutian Palace was opened! So the Xutian Palace should have been opened after Han Li had been in seclusion for 81 years! You, the male protagonist, formed a pill when Han Li was 30 years old. You, the male protagonist, should have been able to conceive a baby with his dark spiritual roots more than a hundred years before the Xutian Palace was opened! Han Li only stayed in the Dan Formation Stage for 91 years!

The idea is good, but starting from Chapter 5, it's too routine.

There are a lot of poisonous points in the first few chapters

Just like recruiting a disciple and getting back ten thousand times, it's fun to write and easy to break down 😂

Han Li, who had pseudo-spiritual roots, only stayed in the elixir formation stage for 91 years before successfully conceiving a baby. The male protagonist's qualifications are much better than Han Li's. He hopes that the baby will be born in less than 90 years. The reason why the male protagonist has been looking forward to it for more than 90 years must be because the author is deliberately suppressing the male protagonist and deliberately poisoning him.

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!

I want to say that many people in the comment area said that I should lick Han Li. I don't particularly care about this. So far, I have only sent spider eggs, but I have to say that I shouldn't have sent them. You shouldn't give him something like a ticket, because you gave him the ticket. In the end, does the Xutian Cauldron count as yours or his? Of course, you can say you also have a spider. But it has never been able to produce any special effects, and it cannot be promoted. Don't give away things that can generate secondary income. Even if you and I give him the Xutian Cauldron for rebate later, it's okay. Secondly, the handling of the Great Relocation Order, the handling of Yan Ruyan, and the handling of the interpersonal relationships between the family and her natal family are very rough. I can understand the idea of ​​taking Xin Shen, who is talented and gifted. How about you take Qi Yunxiao to fuck chicken feathers?

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, it is sent directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

I have gone back and forth to build bookshelves several times! But I really can't stand it.

It's okay to make friends, but as a demon prince, it's too toxic to make friends.

It is very easy to write this kind of rebellious article into a dog-licking article.