Golden Lightning, Shining Across the Nine Heavens

Thunder roars and lightning sweeps across the land, casting aside royal titles; beyond the distant dust-covered pass, the nine realms are chilled to the bone. With divine might unyielding, I disregard worldly ambitions and scorn the celestial ranks; I will rule the mortal realm.

The spring river tide rises to meet the sea, and all spirits of heaven and earth pay homage to the Jade Capital. His fists swept across the martial world, ascending to the clouds; he traversed heaven and earth, wielding thunder and lightning

Don't you guys think this physical therapy technique, Haoxing Guiliu, is amazing because every move is like a nuclear bomb?

I can't help but complain. The protagonist's awful poetic signature—either don't recite it, or get someone to revise it! I was initially thinking the protagonist was pretty impressive, but after hearing this lousy poem, I thought some lowlife was cosplaying as a speed bump. The contrast is too great. Go ahead and solicit opinions from cultured readers; if all else fails, we'll just plagiarize. You're okay at writing novels, but writing poetry is a different story.

Honestly, could you please stop reciting that poem title? Generally speaking, writing a poem title for a puppet show is a plus, but yours is just too crude.

You guys are still discussing the poem's title, but I lost interest in watching as soon as I saw the protagonist's dog-like name. What kind of bullshit is "Sixteen"? A slave? A servant?

It starts with perfect enlightenment, innate, and acquired. Then they further divided the martial arts realms into eight gates, six departments, and Heavenly King. He kept mentioning the Gobashi Kenryu position as a martial arts realm. Does the absence of martial arts realm classification mean they can't write it?

After reading a few chapters, it seems this book was written under a pseudonym; it's best to avoid showing signs of pretentious writing.

The protagonist, this good-for-nothing, relies entirely on the system to carry him; he has no talent, wisdom, or imagination of his own. It would be better if the system were a bit more powerful, with the ability to merge divine skills and techniques, combining countless martial arts techniques and their essence to create his own heaven-defying divine skill.

Putting everything else aside, how come the invasion and retreat of the Western Sword Stream, the Nine Dragons Heavenly Book, and the opening of the Demon World were all completed within a year? The protagonist is 16 at the beginning of the story, and he's still 16 when the Demon World opens. Is the author 16 years old? No matter how time goes by, the protagonist's age doesn't change, right?