A Chinese National Team Memoir, Beginning with Union Berlin

Here, you can probably see where all the problems that have plagued Chinese football for so many years have come from.

The plot is really interesting. It's just that it's long and drawn out, making it uncomfortable to read; the layout seems a bit off. And the updates are slow.

The Japanese men's basketball team looks set to win today, but I have to say that Asia's lousy referees and lousy associations are hindering the development of the sport. The Japanese men's basketball team's 8-on-5 advantage started back when Mu Tiezhu was still playing, sometimes even reducing the team to only four players due to free throws.

Well written, but lacking any truly satisfying moments. When writing about players, those who excel are usually described well during matches or in the locker room, but this book falls into neither category. It flows like urine, offering no memorable points. The only redeeming quality is its solid research; that's about it. I hope the author can refine their writing style and produce more engaging and enjoyable content.

The text arrangement and punctuation are so difficult to read. In particular, a basic requirement for football novels is that the match descriptions be fluent and that the offensive and defensive rounds be well-described. However, this author wrote only one sentence: "Who passed to whom in the 86th minute? The score is 1-1," and that was it. How do you interpret this?

I'm not sure if it's a local or personal habit of the author, but it feels a bit like my own Guangxi roots—I often have trouble distinguishing between subject and verb, and my word order is often chaotic. The word choice and sentence structure are even more difficult than complex sentences, but the plot is quite interesting. It's somewhat similar to Yang Zong's basketball novel, and also a bit like that old football novel that started in Croatia (I forgot the name, it's been too long).

The author himself had many typos in his paid chapters, and when readers pointed them out to him for proofreading, he claimed that his place was under renovation during the day and he couldn't write, so he stayed up late writing in bed and then blamed the readers for being picky. Did the readers do the renovations to your own place?

Did you write this with AI? It's such a good story, but it's so hard to read.

The domestic media has played a crucial role in the Chinese national football team's success.

Bro, this one's better than your others. Just finish "Rome" as soon as possible and focus on updating this one; it looks more promising.