My Talent Has Been Upgraded Again!

Listen to Chapter 59. The beginning is really well written. But the writing is still a bit poor. You have to save some money for me. It feels like I'm just pretending, pretending, pretending. It sounds like he is very powerful. But none of his skills have any effect, so they are useful. Moreover, the combat power is unbalanced. Obviously, the more people there are, the more powerful it is. But the more people there are, the more powerful I am. These are two different concepts. The subject matter is very good. It's cool but not good enough in writing

In recent years, more and more old authors have fallen behind. The new environment represents new minefields and new minefields. Many things that were barely writeable, innocuous, and even well-received in the past may now become minefields that must not be touched. I believe all old readers understand Dabai's ability to construct cool points, but I'm afraid that some places may be misunderstood.

The old author has made some progress. For example, the poisonous character of the last book, Zhan Zheng, which made you smooth and jailed after the first book, is gone, but there are a lot of small poisons, such as the classic cold girl, the girl who sticks out her tongue when talking, etc. . . If you don't know how to write about women, you really don't have to force yourself to write.

The author should write less about the real world, it's a bit brainless 😥

One unpleasant point is that the protagonist is obviously the first to clear the level, but he hides himself as a pig 😏 and hides a little too many things. After the protagonist completes the second dungeon and comes out, he becomes too powerful and hard to explain.

A lord of armies, Dabai can still survive for a few more years 🙂🙂🙂

I hope this person will become the emperor soon, otherwise he will not be busy trying to upgrade the world every time. Will there be any benefit to him? The natives will become the losers.

In this evolution, there are only two branches in total that can be cross-evolved and will not produce new branches. However, the author only takes one path and does not write about the effect of the skills of the other branch. This is a bit unacceptable. Since you can only follow a fixed evolutionary route, then don't come up with options.

You can see, but that's all. The author's saucy routine is a bit embarrassing, and he gets a little nasty from time to time. I will give you a seven-point rating (out of ten)

I always feel that the atmosphere is a bit strange. The protagonist (or is it the author?) Seems to have a crooked butt. Not only is it reflected in the protagonist tying the main world to the Black Mountain Castle copy, but it also always feels like he is stepping on the real world at every turn. He always emphasizes that the main world of the protagonist is Black Mountain Castle. What does that mean? The protagonist also acts entirely for the benefit of Black Mountain Castle, but he is wary of real-life officials. He has a cold and egoistic mentality towards all things, but he is very enthusiastic about Black Mountain Castle. It feels so strange. Is it because real topics are out of reach?

At present, this female character does not understand the purpose of this. In terms of combat power, the protagonist is the strongest if she has subordinates, and the protagonist has many subordinates at the beginning of his career.

It turns out it's an old thing, no wonder it's written so cool and old-fashioned, and the old-fashioned plots just happen.

Isn't this attribute wrong? It says exponential increase, but why does it behave like linearity? . .

There are so many suggestions in the comment section that seem so poisonous.

It's better not to write about the protagonist's original world. Download the dungeon and develop quickly, and don't worry about the heroine. This is what brothers want to see.

In the Blood Plague Corpse Cave, if you want to play with corpses, the original design would have ended with the natural disaster of the undead. I want you to change your job to a lord, because I want to see you as a human being, with a bright spot of humanity, not a mindless zombie wave.

Oh, that's right. Dabai, just write a good article honestly these days. Don't manipulate the protagonist of the previous work and plot the death of the current protagonist. With your rhythm control and skills and imagination, there will be no shortage of readers.

It is an imaginary feudal era, with no memory of barbarians, military castles, landlords, aristocratic families, etc. The author says whatever he says, a whole feudal family. At least everyone is familiar with the Three Kingdoms world played by Wang Wei. They know every historical character who appears and have expectations for specific characters. At least I still remember Wang Wei meeting Cao Cao at the end of the first dungeon, participating in famous scenes such as offering a sword to Dong Zhuo, and using money to beat Liu Bian to death.

My suggestion is to write less about the main world, or to copy the main world earlier, otherwise it will be easy to get stuck.

1. Occupational name!!! It's too ordinary, not as good as a military leader at all. 2. I don't know if it's because it's still in the early stages and I need to maintain a cool and fast pace. Most of the details have been ignored, but it looks a bit clumsy. I hope that there will be more detailed descriptions in the later dungeons, otherwise it will not be engaging and it will be meaningless to keep killing and killing. (Like the previous book, killing and killing is very exciting, but there is no main line or plot to hold the rhythm, and it will be out of control after seeing it. In the Battle Paradise, because the dungeons are all in the world of movie and TV novels, it has its own mature world view and a clear main line. The rhythm of reading is very smooth and the sense of immersion is stronger.) 3. The original world should be copied as soon as possible, spread out the world view first, and don't write too many urban plots (mainly because your writing in this aspect is not good-looking, and you are tired of seeing the abnormal affairs bureau and apostles like some urban supernatural powers, of course, except if you have new ideas) 4. Can the growth of the protagonist be described with more words, instead of focusing on the improvement of power all the time. 5. Update quickly.

Old guy, don't stick to your old laurels and absorb some new things.

The skill settings are like a brainstorm, and there are a lot of poison points.

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The first subscription is supported. But to be honest, it's boring, like following a running account. Not cool enough

Chapter 6, Chapter 5 talks about acquired talents and skills I can't catch you anymore Come on, I'll retreat first

With this level of strength, the real world can be controlled with just ordinary firearms, let alone more powerful guns. A division can easily wipe out a copy. Or am I missing something?

The real world is poorly written. It should not be written. Pure infinite streaming would be great.

Dabai, you have to think carefully, if you update less, I will subscribe less, and then my monthly subscription will be less. You don't want to lose your monthly ticket, Jiejiejiejiejie.

Are there any brothers who came from Zhanzhan Paradise? I originally left, but when I saw the familiar ID, I came back.

I hope this book can be longer. The first one was too rushed. A lot of the plot is for the sake of upgrading. It's too big and too depressing. The look and feel of Battle Paradise, which needs to be developed and then fully activated, is much better.