Starting from a Spiritual Medium and Becoming a Martial Artist

Goldfinger is simply a card-style proficiency panel. The more complicated thing is to add a trigger mechanism. The people, objects, abilities and even the environment that the protagonist encounters can be copied into cards, and there will be a percentage bonus after assembly. The worldview and description are lacking a lot. It's a matter of writing style and experience. It's just a minor flaw. But the creativity is okay. There are ghosts in ancient times, and they are slowly recovering in modern times. At the same time, there are martial arts and psychics who can deal with ghosts, and ordinary people don't know about it. In terms of character design, he is neither strict nor reckless, and has no characteristics. Evaluation: Those with higher poison resistance will basically not be able to feel the poison. Those with low poison resistance will have a lot to complain about, but it is not considered poisonous. Comprehensive evaluation [can be seen].

A good book, not overwhelming at all, and there are no bloody plots so far

The setting is interesting. The path to transcendence is currently martial arts training + a mystical school similar to Western Fantasy. The overall setting does not read stiffly, and the integration is okay. Hope it can be updated stably

Interesting, but I don't think it's a starting point for a writer

In fact, I don't quite understand why many people only go to martial arts gyms when they are in college, given the high status of martial artists, and why there is no general movement to practice martial arts? Moreover, when I wrote about Yin and Shang culture earlier, I thought it was about supernatural powers, but then I ended up writing about martial arts. It's best to mention martial arts when writing about the background of this era, otherwise it would be too abrupt. How these sections intersect and how to avoid turning into a suture monster is quite a challenge for the author. In short, the connection and background are not realistic enough, and there are no poisonous points. It can be regarded as good grass.

Can't praise or scold

Brother, can you please stop writing about campus life? It gives me a feeling that I have never been to school. Today I will test 80 on this paper and I will test 81 on tomorrow's paper and then say that I have made a lot of progress. Isn't it normal for scores to fluctuate?

If nothing else, did you just throw away the identity of the college student you wrote about? I only attended one class at the beginning, but then I didn't attend any class after that. Are you a sophomore? I got the postgraduate qualification and didn't even contact my supervisor. I haven't seen a pig running or eaten pork in real life? After tinkering with a lot of knowledge about psychics, I tried it myself without asking for help from a professional. I found a notebook from thousands of years ago that I didn't know where, and it was more true than what my college teacher said. Dude, you don't look like you went to college, either?

It's so unreasonable. A person with such a high status in martial arts has so few martial arts practices.

It's awesome, it's really smooth, there's no bloody plot, I just can't help but watch it. You are so awesome 🙂

It's an easy read, there's nothing toxic about it, it doesn't overwhelm the main character, and the content is quite enjoyable. It's very good. I'll give it a try.

There is nothing poisonous and not attractive at all. My strength has been soaring, and everyone can't stop praising me. I have made great progress all the way, and the competitions are exciting one after another. Trials are always about fighting for the first place, But is this kind of thing really interesting?

Generally speaking, this setting means that the author can write whatever he can think of. There is no direction. The format is not limited. The author has the final say. The essence is the proficiency panel. But I guess you might as well write proficiency. You can write whatever you want, which feels very messy.

I saw the latest chapter today. So far, there are no problems. It's pretty good.

It's okay, I don't overpower the protagonist, and there is no bloody plot, which is already more than an eighty-year-old book.

The first level of Mayfly Burning Sea has a fist power of more than 250 kilograms, and the second level has more than 500 kilograms. By the third level, it can burn the sea dry? The author is more rigorous. Is it such an exaggeration to say that the second floor can't even explode to the third floor?

For the time being, I've looked at it and it's okay. There's nothing sinister about it.

I don't think it's good that cash can be added to the card slot. The money is not printed randomly on the back.

It happened that I heard the cry for help in the fog, I happened to find that the strange fog was blown away by the wind It happened that the man was not dead and called an ambulance Too many coincidences

Awesome, either this is a shock or that is a shock, you can always find someone who is shocked

Currently I have a strong desire to read it. It doesn't overwhelm the protagonist and the battles are smooth. It's worth watching. Innovative themes are also very good.

I like this extraordinary system and its hook settings. It doesn't seem to have any major problems. All in all, it's edible for now.

Shen Nong comes to the rescue! ! ⭐️It's ok, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist at all, and it grows up quickly and smoothly ⭐️It's very smooth, has no poisonous points, no bloody plot, the combat is good, the psychic setting is innovative, and the overall evaluation is: excellent food and grass.

Yes, it has the potential to be a fine product.

The writing is a bit immature, but the plot makes up for it. Although the ability to mobilize readers' emotions is somewhat poor, the hooks laid in the plot still make people want to continue reading. After reading the latest chapter, the descriptions of the supporting characters are the same, and there are no outstanding characters. I feel like a new author with a lot of room for improvement 🙂 Food and grass to read

Just look at the amount of updates since it was put on the shelves. I gave up because the updates were too slow.

Language is the boundary of thought. Modern people will not translate the Three-Character Classic as "Three-Character Moral Proverbs" or "Three-Character Moral Code", nor will they translate "Horse Theory" as "Some Comments on Horses". Because in the eyes of modern people, the two titles have obvious stylistic tendencies: one is obviously imagery and vague, while the other is more rigorous and systematic. This is also a reflection of the difference in thinking influenced by the growth and education environment between ancient and modern times. If the ancient books of the Yin and Shang Dynasty six thousand years ago (perhaps the author's parallel universe here is different, and paper and books existed very early) were to be translated into such a title, this kind of systematic and logical thinking and expression would be contrary to its background and the feelings and communication emphasized by psychics/shamans. At the same time, there is also an issue of civilization dating and text inheritance. Since non-professionals and the text have clearly stated that the text is lost➕original text, I will not list it for now. All in all, I hope the author can seriously present more and better content. At present, the writing of the article is fluent, the martial arts part is passable, and there are some refreshing points that are worthy of a taste. However, the mystery and weirdness of the psychic/shaman part is still relatively weak at present, and I hope the author can improve on this aspect. (You can consider doing an AI review after coding and asking for your opinions. If you have any opinions, treat them as if I didn't say them)

There was nothing wrong with the writing before it was put on the shelves. It was a classic and enjoyable novel with a clear system and did not overwhelm the protagonist. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer normal novels. Please read it and cherish it. My only advice to authors is not to write too much. Many novels start well at the beginning, but become desperate after being published. If readers' trust is gone, the results of new books will not be good.

The advantage is smooth, but the disadvantage is slow update. The author mentions the update speed.

If you are above food and grass, come on, author, just don't be a eunuch