People Are in Xianwu, There Are Small Games

The character of the protagonist is simply a seam monster. One moment, the author wants to write that the protagonist is affectionate and righteous, the next moment, he wants to write him as cold and ruthless, the next moment, he wants to write that he is resourceful, and the next moment, he wants to write that recklessness is king. However, the author has calculated every move for the protagonist in his mind. It is the same virtue as in the new squid book, and the author has to personally explain why he does it. The author needs to be clear about it, Kuai Nasuhuan has turned away half of the old readers. Your plot writing is not as good as Kuai. What are you doing with so many mental activities? If you learn from Kuai and describe the plot more, your grades will be improved. I have been a bookworm for more than 20 years. The main character is too poisonous and I really can't stand it anymore. The money I booked earlier will be used as the cost of this paragraph.

To be honest, what is the use of the predecessor who tortured other people's sisters? To persuade people to quit reading, don't say that what the predecessor did has nothing to do with the current one. This plot was designed by the author. It was designed to be disgusting. If you can't bring it in, give it up.

New book, new book, new book, new book, new book, new book, new book. I am short of books again. Dabai will start a new book soon.

If the protagonist had no cheats, then this book would be extremely well written. Unfortunately, the protagonist has cheats, which results in some of the protagonist's decisions obviously not meeting the expectations of quite a few people. To put it bluntly, the author's writing is really good, so he wanted to write a protagonist who is brave, resourceful and courageous. So I still can't understand why the protagonist needs to have a plug-in in hand, and he can be promoted to level 8 in ten days at most. When he reaches level 7 or level 6 in a short period of time, he has to go to the mountain temple alone at level 9 (the mountain temple is the location of the plot), kill two waves of people from Tianzitang and Dizitang (how can the protagonist be sure how many people will come to join them?), And kill an 8th level person in the third wave. The protagonist in the first two waves was already injured, so why did the protagonist in the third wave defeat the 8-level character who was in good condition? What is the advantage of the protagonist? Just because the protagonist is willing to die? (In fact, I don't understand why the protagonist is fighting so hard? He obviously has the plug-in, and the future is promising) In fact, the author did not explain how the protagonist won in the end. He blurred the fighting process and used the word "ruthless" to summarize it. . (The protagonist has just traveled through time a few days ago) Finally comment on this battle: The protagonist is at level 9. He fought two waves of level 9, with two people on each side. In the second wave, he was injured. Play another wave of 8-level players who are in good condition (the protagonist is injured and has no other advantages) (the protagonist has traveled through time for at most ten days so far). From my perspective, the protagonist has no way to survive. The protagonist has a plug-in, and it is visually estimated that he will be able to level up to level 8 in a few days, and his future is even brighter. To sum up, everyone here should ask yourself, will you go to participate in this battle (the protagonist has only traveled through time for ten days and there is no reason to go). It is obvious that he will be able to come back and control thunder and lightning in a month after escaping, but you are going to participate in a battle that the author has not been able to come back from. (And the author hasn't figured it out yet. Even if the protagonist uses dirty tricks to create a slight advantage for himself, I can accept it. However, the author writes with the kind of momentum of life and death. The protagonist starts to prepare to die when he knows the intelligence of this meeting 😰😅). . Finally, I would like to give an evaluation. In this battle, no one will participate in this battle except the author who stands from the author's perspective and knows that the protagonist will not die. To be honest, I personally think that if the protagonist in a novel has cheats and the logic is normal, the novel will not be ugly. Coupled with the author's whimsical ideas, the protagonist's personality orientation, etc., The novel will have a different direction. If the author's three views are roughly consistent with the reader's, you will find that every choice made by the protagonist is deeply in line with your wishes. If the author designs a little more plot, then the satisfaction will be reflected. I have to mention that when I read novels now, I first look at the logic (that is, whether the author can come back to justice), and secondly, the three views (mainly because if the values ​​are different, many decisions will naturally be different). As for that battle, if the protagonist made some extra efforts (such as traps, lime, etc.) In order to win, then I can think that the protagonist was at least prepared for this battle (although it is still better not to go), but the protagonist left empty-handed. I can understand that this wave is completely controlled by the author, and it is a sudden battle. . To sum up, I am unhappy if I don't vomit

After reading Chapter 16, I felt that the main character was a pure stupid clown and the plot was a bit toxic, but the poor writing skills made the plot even more toxic. If you want to win people's hearts, you can't. He has no overlord spirit at all, and is full of bastard spirit. A plot that was obviously ridiculed by a passerby should be scrapped on the spot, and then a domineering and domineering speech shocked people's hearts. Only in this way can the people in the gang be frightened. They are all gangsters and bloodthirsties. This paragraph of explanation and apology, in reality, who cares about you, a notorious A Dou who can't be supported by his dead father. The only way to survive here is to shock people with your domineering and domineering speeches and make ordinary gang members think that you have changed and can be trusted. Explaining and apologizing will only make people think you are still a piece of shit. It feels like playing house.

The writing is really good, but the author's self-created character design of the protagonist really made me unable to stand it. Reading a book requires a sense of immersion. How can I bring into the perspective of a rapist when reading a martial arts novel? It can be said that the protagonist takes the blame, but this identity and grudges are directly important parts of the early plot. Every identity-related plot reminded me that half of the protagonist was a rapist, and I felt sick all over. And from the beginning to the end, I didn't see the plot of raping his own sister, what significance it has to the whole. I can only understand that it is for self-pleasure, or the author is screening readers

I said I didn't want to be a dog, but I actually wrote a good dog

I can't understand it recently. When a sixth-grade person goes to annoy a fifth-grade person, all he sees is incompetence, arrogance, and risking one's life on others? Others won't kill you or torture you? If it weren't for pig's feet, he would have died long ago

Goldfinger is good, but the author is not good. You have a developmental system, but you have to play a very awkward game. Obviously as long as you get the martial arts and medicine, you can immediately find a ravine and squat for a few months, but you have to mess around.

Has the author written about dark genres before? The character of the protagonist is really hard to describe! This protagonist is extremely neurotic. He will drink as much as he can when he has some strength. He is extremely evil and does not distinguish between right and wrong! Just because Duanmu Qing didn't tell you the man behind the scenes, he just started scolding you. It's extremely vicious! Is this how you treat the person who saved you three times? I'm really drunk! I've never seen such a shameless protagonist

How can I put it, the protagonist's dog-betting characterization and the author's occasionally literary-yet-like writing style made me have a particularly bad impression of this book. Currently, I feel like I am eating something that is tasteless and a pity to throw away.

Generally speaking, the biggest problem for you, the author, is that your writing style conflicts with your literary youth, and your writing power is not enough. Changing a few lines of poetry or lyrics from many of the setting sentences will make it look awkward. Maybe you think you can better establish the characters. In fact, the plot is almost complete, and those added later will affect the reader's immersion in the characters. Personal opinion, for reference only. Except for the discussion on this point, you are right.

His whole family died, he himself was also killed, and he went to serve the country and the people after becoming a ghost? I feel sick

There is no literary youth life but there is a literary youth disease.

Before the protagonist obtained the three-phase demon-turning skill, he worked like a lunatic, and it still made sense. After all, the protagonist was indeed greatly stimulated, and there was no follow-up technique. Compared with traveling to other places where people are not familiar with the place, this Three Phase Gang is indeed a good industry. After getting it back, it can help to obtain cultivation resources and follow-up skills. But after getting the three-phase demon-turning skill from the system, and with the follow-up skills, the cultivation resources have become mainly evil spirits. Coupled with the system, a road to the sky is in front of you. If you don't walk, what the hell, are you rushing to make a life-and-death breakthrough? After the plan is set, even if the situation changes and there is a better choice, do you still have to be stubborn and go to the end?

The protagonist's brain is not very good, the start is rubbish, and there are many dangers. After he stabilizes and understands the situation, he doesn't think about running away, but actually wants to get back what belongs to him. (This is what is said in the article) Now the force value is not enough. Even if you have intelligence, you can't get the same bargaining chip. You don't even have the qualifications to speak. You still want to be strong. You have this golden finger that should be underdeveloped. If you have the strength, are you afraid that you won't be able to get it back?

To spread the word to newcomers, as long as you read Dabai's book patiently, you will definitely be amazed at how there is such an exquisite plot design in the world. In addition, Dabai's understanding of system skills, etc. Is definitely better than 70% of the authors. Brothers, push me up so that new readers can see it.

The ninth chapter after it was released was too discouraging. As the protagonist, you save people but don't save them, and kill enemies but don't kill them. He took the good stuff and obviously didn't care about it and didn't run away. In the end, he yelled an annoying reason that was as unreasonable as an underage child. There is no hint of maturity and stability before it was put on the shelves. Sorry, I'm leaving

The plot arrangement is pretentious, and the inexplicable dialogue and plot are forced to be written at the beginning, and the specific situation is gradually introduced later. Because there is a big event and crisis at the beginning, but it has to be suppressed, so I can only open another halo. There is an invincible golden finger that can crush it, but I insist on writing ups and downs, and I can't control it, so I can only open the halo every now and then. The protagonist was supposed to be killed by the child bride at the beginning, but he was not killed. The protagonist was given training resources, and then his subordinates killed the protagonist to take revenge. The protagonist jumped over the level and killed him. Nothing happened. However, in the wild temple, he jumped over the level again and killed him, causing him to be seriously injured and about to die. There was also an inexplicable involvement with a ghost. In the follow-up writing of maintaining the smuggling route, others suddenly looked at the protagonist differently for no reason and gave some help. The reason was that the protagonist was not simple 😅 The ghost protected the protagonist because of the protagonist's umbrella. Who is the ghost of the protagonist? He is so good to the protagonist 😅 Is the halo big? It is the author's incompetence to give the protagonist a new halo even though he has a golden finger.

I always feel like I have to be a dog for King Lin all the time. Why would I want to be a dog if I have a golden finger? It's far worse than the one in the apocalypse. In essence, he is a person who was abandoned by King Lin and has to be his dog. You don't want every day and every day, but at least you shouldn't be someone else's dog, right?

Combined with vampire survivors, come up with some creative techniques 1. Whip + Hollow = Blood Whip has an increased range and returns 8 health on hit 2. Vampire Whip + Holy Whip = Super Vampire Whip. A fatal hit can produce an explosion 3. Bible + Speller = Evil Evening Prayer No cD 4. Throwing knives + gloves = Thousand Blades No cD 5. Rune Tracker + Armor = Destruction Explodes when bouncing and retaliating 6. Battle of Fire + Spinach = Fire of Hell Can penetrate enemies 7 7. Garlic + Heart = Soul Eater Damage increased, health returned on hit 8. Holy Water + Attractor | = Liner The range continues to grow and moves with you 9. Lightning ring + replicator = thunder ring. Ejection can hit 2 times 10. Wand + cd book = holy magic war. No CD 11. Mana song + cursed acid = Managa. Probability to slow down the enemy 12. Ax + candlestick = wind of death. The ammonia type can pierce the enemy's ax in all directions 13. Cross + Clover = Sword of Heaven, can critical hit 14. Pentagram + Crown = Beautiful Moon, which will attract surrounding gems after full-screen explosion 15. Firatupulo/Eight Birds + Tiramisu = Firagi. The bullet effect becomes a penetrable laser 16. Drill + Wings = Flame Spray Gun Moving flames are generated under your feet when moving. Stop moving, the flame becomes a penetrating laser 17. Bitter Cat + Stone Mask = Sinful Desire The summoned cat becomes Kazlan Big Eyes 18. White Bird + Black Bird = Destroyer Can continue to upgrade after synthesis 19. Sword of Victory + Torona's Box = The only solution The more enemies defeated, the stronger it becomes 20. Clock Lancet + Gold Ring + Silver Ring = Infinite Corridor Periodically reduce the health of surrounding enemies by half 21. Laurel + left arrow + right arrow = solid blood shroud. The damage received by itself is less than 10 points, and the broken shield will cause damage to surrounding enemies 22. Two-handed tin + upgrade to level 6 = three bracelets. Can launch three missiles at random enemies 23. Chaos flame + Torona's box = Muspel's ashes The more enemies you defeat, the stronger it becomes 24. Candy Box + Probability = Super Candy Box. Any evolved weapon can be opened 25. White Bird + Gemini Card = Cygnus. Bombing in a circular area 26. Black Bird + Gemini Card = Zaltisa Bombing in a circular area 27. Firatupulo + Gemini Card = Red Muscle Rapidly fire in four fixed directions 28. Eight Birds + Gemini Card = Dream Pressure Rapidly fire in four fixed directions 29. Bitter Cat + Gemini Card = Group Destroyer Destroyer Summon cats wandering around

Baymax's new book has no heroine as always, but the protagonist has a brain! Have perseverance! Be fierce! Overall, it looks like it has great potential! Only a few dozen chapters make people want to put it down, with novel themes (the lawn mowing game we have all played is combined with the fairy martial arts, lively and interesting!), Rich settings (from the end of the branches, you can see that the overall world view is small but rich), and full plot (from the previous protagonist killing Song Laosan to After taking over the Tiger Roar Camp, you can see the step-by-step growth of the protagonist, which is commendable! The ups and downs are not enough for outsiders), and each of the vivid characters is a highlight of this book (Dabai was a blockbuster in three years!) In addition, for those in the comment area, I can say that it is the original owner's fault! It has nothing to do with the protagonist. On the contrary, the original owner is irrelevant. The protagonist has to bear his pressure if he travels through time. If he doesn't travel through time, he will die. If he travels through time, the original owner will still die. Have you never read a time-travel novel? Can the protagonist find a time travel partner on his own? ! "Give me the essence, thank you Dabai" - Ji Zailiu

To be honest, literary youth needs to be cured When did the author learn to be bad? What is not good to learn is the literary youth disease. In the beginning, there were a lot of awkward poems, especially the first limerick. Anyone who has seen the puppet show knows that you want to imitate the narration, but if you don't have that level, why don't we just make it up? Oh my god, I was so embarrassed that I almost gave up. I won't write the doggerel later, but what's even more outrageous is that it's "some family, some family" all day long, and everyone talks about "some family". . . . What, "someone" sponsored you? Where did you learn this bad habit? If it weren't for Frenzy and Zhengzhuyu, I would be dying Other issues, the protagonist's setting is not working, and the protagonist's character is split. I think some people have complained about these, so I won't talk about it. This ghost literary youth disease is really intolerable.

Here comes brothers, another new book, another new beginning Some readers who read the copy may be excited when they see the name Lu Ming, because they think it will link all the universes in Dabai's book. Here, I will explain to Dabai first that he just wants Lu Ming to become the protagonist of a high-quality novel. That's all () The protagonist of this new book gives me a feeling Like a general and a demon in the sky He is really a God of Tai Sui on earth According to Dabai himself, when he wrote this article, the character of the protagonist focused on a rebellious period. That is to say, I know that this is the wrong path for me to take, and there is no benefit to it. , But I just can't bear this tone, I just want to fuck you (I promise to survive, you are uneasy) And judging from the plot I stole, the follow-up will give people a sense of expectation, giving people an impulse to write a second creation (so I have 15 likes this time and I am going to start writing a second creation, the subject matter I guess I will write the OC of the new book first, please give me a thumbs up) And judging from the other books, this one actually makes great progress compared to the previous ones. Several emotional points in the beginning can be considered a success, and it will not be as watery as before. It can be seen that Dabai has indeed improved after a long time of settling down. In the end, expect first and then believe, and finally attack the champagne factory. Reject life and have dreams, each of which is wonderful ()

After taking a look at it, I feel that I am a little bit too good for the sake of being a good middle school student. I always go against the will of nature and do something...

This book is okay, but it's less interesting than Frenzy. When did Dabai write an apocalyptic novel?

Recommended Words It was exciting to watch the writer reveal the follow-up plot. I just want to say that I was also very excited to watch it! 😁 Whether it is the plot foreshadowing the transformation of the male protagonist in the secret passage, or the conversation in the mourning hall with the cousin who 'sold' him, the author has masterfully controlled the emotional suppression and explosion. How does the male protagonist Lu Ming face the murderous intentions behind his father's death? Why do so many people want his life? With these questions, I am looking forward to the follow-up plot! (⑅˃◡˂⑅) Book title: People in Xianwu, there are small games Author: Black-hearted Dabai Category: Fantasy·Oriental Fantasy Number of words: 50,000 words Work status Status: Serializing Keyword tags: passionate, fast-paced, system flow, time-travel, decisive killing Work Overview Lu Ming, who traveled through time and became the son of the old leader of the Sanxiang Gang, a local snake in Xuanshui City of the Great Zhou Dynasty, was dragged out of the brothel to attend his father's funeral as soon as he woke up. As one of the "Four Pests" of Xuanshui City, he has to face not only the criminal crusaders committed by his predecessor, but also the murderous intentions hidden in the dark from relatives, gangs, and gangs. Fortunately, the unlucky little game Goldfinger also traveled through time with him. Faced with this situation of being besieged on all sides, how will he break the situation? Author Related A Lv5 author, who has completed one million words of novels such as "The End of the World Summons Frenzy" and "The End of the World Begins from the Global Dungeon" and other works. If you are not a novice writer, you can feel free to read it. O(∩_∩)O Highlights of the Work The supporting characters are not simply divided into good guys and bad guys, but slightly contradictory characters from their own standpoints. Not only does it make people think deeply about the reasons for the changes, but it also deepens the readers' sense of immersion in the text. Although the male protagonist Lu Ming in the article has never done any bad things, he is actually a bad person; Song Laosan is loyal to Lu Ming's cousin, but he wants to kill Lu Ming, the son of the old gang leader who killed his sister; his cousin Yu Luosha seems to be ready to retire for Lu Ming road, actually sent him to a dead end... The three-dimensional characters make the tense atmosphere of the duel between the two sides increase the excitement of the plot, and also make the process of the male protagonist's gradual growth and transformation appear more natural, without being too fragmented and affecting the reading experience. Wonderful Analysis The plot is not too slow. As the male protagonist Lu Ming gradually emerges, the conflict of the situation gradually escalates (it feels like the author is holding back a big move). The expectation to see the male protagonist Lu Ming get rid of the current shackles is gradually building💡. At the same time, the male protagonist has a golden finger that can speed up the time of practicing martial arts. It is also a great pleasure to change the current stereotypes of everyone by relying on the rapid improvement of his strength✨. Recommended Group It was quite enjoyable to read the latest chapter in one go, without any discomfort or poison. If you like to watch male protagonists who constantly break through difficult situations and have bad starts, or readers who like to read cheat-finger settings, or want to read stories that are fast-paced and passionate, you can give it a try! ✌️(ツ)ɔ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} {"TopicId":"5759111705 07276288","TopicName":"New book recommendation"} {"TopicId":"847871037156360192","TopicName":"New book planting"}

✨RecommendationThe ultimate refreshing article, I was so excited to read it, and the author was also very excited to write it! The protagonist travels through time to a second generation ancestor who everyone wants to kill, and has to practice martial arts to change his life in order to survive! At the beginning, my cousin arranges a secret passage to escape, but the secret passage leads to hell. Between life and death, the protagonist begins to transform, and the previous depression becomes the best preparation for the final explosion at this moment. The author is so knowledgeable, it was so enjoyable to read it in one go! 🍀SynopsisThe protagonist has traveled through time. The good news is that he has become the second generation. The bad news is that everyone seems to want the protagonist to die! At this time, the classic golden finger comes on stage, the Wushu Mowing Unparalleled System allows you to experience the unparalleled pleasure of mowing the grass and defeat all enemies. 🐶 🎈Related Author: Black-hearted Dabai Status: 120,000 words, serialized Elements: martial arts, time travel, system, passion, sofa decisiveness 😘Recommendation reason 1. The plot has a tight rhythm and constant climax scenes. The protagonist is full of murderous intentions at the beginning. He escapes through a secret passage but the killer is the escorting bodyguard. In a desperate situation, a counter-attack breaks out. The series of plots are very enjoyable to watch. 2. The characters have online IQs and have their own desires. A character can be established with just a few strokes. Song Laosan, who killed the protagonist to avenge his sister, and his cousin Jade Rakshasa, who is "as close as a family", backhandedly assassinated the protagonist. The protagonist can only survive hard, and the confrontation between life and death better shapes the image of the protagonist. 3. Sofa's decisive and cool text, the kind that is particularly cool, the golden fingers are awesome, you can become stronger by playing games, and the fighting includes both fists and punches, as well as the light and shadow of swords and shadows of traditional martial arts, which greatly satisfies martial arts lovers. ☘️Recommended Group Friends who are bored during the summer vacation, those who like exciting novels, and those who like martial arts can check it out. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Please write another apocalyptic novel.

The first volume is very well written, as well as the previous chapters of The End of the World. But what is the second volume about? Is it okay to write less idealistic things? Even if you write about physical cultivation, you can finally fly into the sky and escape from the earth, or that the diamond is indestructible, it is better than writing about idealism. All tm is fake and empty. What nonsense. What can you do? Isn't it good to cultivate the soul by palming the law? You have to be fake. Can't stand it anymore