Witch Hunt Rhapsody

? Is this right? After writing so many books, I am still LV1

Apart from Qidian. Com, I am the second person to post. If you follow the author, I will become a veteran. I will not support each other.

Great advice to the author It can be seen that the author has perseverance and enterprising spirit. After all, there are several million-word books You can open more books and watch some videos to learn something.

The title and introduction of this book hooked me right away, invincible

I think the author's creativity is indeed interesting. The setting gives me a feeling of epic revenge like "The Count of Monte Cristo" or "Frankenstein". But as one commentator said, the writing style is very deliberate. However, to be honest, although the results of this book are not good, I think the author has something, but he has not found a right way yet.

What kind of pig-footed character is this? In a fantasy world setting, ordinary people hunt extraordinary groups, not groups against groups, but individuals against groups. It would be fine if the extraordinary group were a group of anti-human beings, but the other party was not, then why did Pigfoot kill them? If only some extraordinary individual caused harm to him, then revenge would be valid, but it would not be the reason for his harm to other people. Looking at Pig's Feet in the first one or two chapters, Pig's Feet may have been a human being before he became a crime knight, but later on, he was unscrupulous in using innocent people to kill. We can swing a knife at the strong, but we cannot implicate the innocent and weak, not to mention that there is no fundamental conflict between the two. I don't know what point the author wants to express, is it self-salvation after the fall? Or show the ugliness of human nature? However, the first few chapters did not see the multi-faceted nature of pig's feet at all. Instead, they deliberately created conflicts and lacked the logic and readability of the story. "Gu Zhenren" also had physical problems when it first started. I didn't read it in the end, but at least it followed the objective sequence of cause and effect, and this book is not satisfactory. A good novel is like a river, with a source, a course and an end. You can refer to the platinum writers of Qidian, such as "The Lord of Mysteries", "The Strange Immortal", "The Son-in-law" and other works. As an old bookworm for more than ten years, I suggest that the author re-polishes the outline and organizes his thoughts. It does not require that the new work will become famous in one go, but it must also reflect the glory of human nature. People can be evil and good, but they cannot regard evil as evil and good as good. Finally, I hope that the author's writing style will continue to improve and make further progress 🙏.

Otherwise, those scumbags who commit murder and arson and do all kinds of evil in online fantasy novels should have died long ago.

I'm here to see if there are any good books about young people. I'm very picky. Readers can find it in my library, which is guaranteed to be interesting 🤓

Can I ask you what are your tips for writing a book? Why do you feel like you code so quickly? No bottlenecks at all

The writing style is too deliberate, some things don't need to be imitated so deliberately