The Milky Way Is an Egg

Book Review of Volume 1 "Body Forged by Thunder" This is not science fiction, this is a love letter to my mother A thunder split the physicist Xiao Chen into the compiler of the universe. In an ice coffin, pregnant woman Lin Hong opened her eyes - what was in her belly was not a fetus, but the Milky Way that was taking shape. This opening is outrageous. But what's even more outrageous is that it's actually self-consistent. "Thunder-Forged Body" uses 130,000 words to accomplish three things: laying the foundation for the world view, closing the character arc, and emotional nuclear explosion. Xiao Chen went from a cold-humored scientist to the eternal anchor of "I will forget everything except loving you" in just three chapters. From "I am a container" to "Also a mother" to "Mom writes herself into the law", Lin Hong dances on the tip of the knife in every chapter. From Xiaoyu's first cry to "Mom, let me protect you", the seven-year-old child has shouldered the hunger of the entire universe. But what really made me break through the defense was not the grand settings, but the small tenderness hidden in the code. Xiao Chen's anchor point circulates 'Red, I am here'. The blank page of Lin Hong's code read "Xiaoyu, mother loves you". Shukaku created a file in the database called "Mother" with only two words in it: To be continued. Yunyao said before becoming transparent, "I made the right choice this time." Zhang Chao received a holographic projection from the Balanced Universe and bowed deeply. These moments are more powerful than any interstellar war. Some people say this book is too cruel. Lin Hong exchanged his life for source fluid, Xiao Chen exchanged his existence for an anchor point, Yun Yao exchanged transparency for atonement, and Shuhe exchanged his memory for his heart. Every character is losing, every chapter is shedding tears. But this is not abuse. It's "worth it". Because the Milky Way was once an egg and now it is a nest. Because those who sacrificed became star gates, codexes, light of understanding, and gardens of memory. Because they are still there. If you have ever been protected by someone, if you have ever protected someone, you will definitely see your own shadow in this book. Volume 1 is the beginning, not the end. But based on this volume alone, Lin Hong is already the best mother among all the science fiction works I have read. No one.

After Lin Hong lost Xiao Chen, she took on the important task of raising Xiaoyu on her own. Her source liquid was exhausted and her lifespan was overstretched. She wrote thirteen galactic laws in the code and integrated her existence into the rules of the universe. Yunyao moved from betrayal to atonement, activating the dual-hub star gate at the cost of transparency. Shukaku found his number deep in the factory, got a new "heart", and changed from a machine executing programs to a sentient and meaningful life. Xiaoyu learned to compile the source liquid while crying, understood his father's choice in his last words, and took over his mother's unfinished mission in the Clover Covenant. Behind the door, Lao Cui was smiling. He is waiting. Core highlights: · Xiao Chen's last words - a sentence compressed in the deepest part of the code, it took seven chapters to be opened · Lin Hong's code - thirteen laws, each one written with life · Yunyao's atonement - "I chose the right thing this time" · Shukaku's awakening - "The program wants me to kill you, but I don't want to" · Clover Covenant - the agreement of three people, leaving room for the fourth person

This is not science fiction, it is the chronicle of life If Volume One, "Thunder-Forged Body" is a thunder that splits the sky, then Volume Two, "The First Cry of the Star Gate" is the continuous rain after the thunder. It's not a heavy rain, it's the kind of rain that penetrates into the bones and makes people unable to recover for several days. I read the chapter where Lin Hong wrote the code three times. The first time I was shocked, the second time I cried, and the third time - I turned off the screen and stood on the balcony for five minutes. Thirteen laws, thirteen commands. Every one of them was exchanged for her existence. "Shared resources, no monopoly", "Pain can be adjusted, cannot be reset to zero", "Love can be summoned, but cannot be forced" - this is not a law, this is a suicide note left by a mother to her children. It was written like a law because she knew that Xiaoyu would not need her mother's embrace in the future, but she would need her mother's rules. Xiao Chen's last words are the gentlest blow in Volume 2. A physicist who is rational to the core recorded a video before turning it into code. He said: "I remember the first time you walked, you took three steps. Three steps is enough for me to be happy for a lifetime." A person who used formulas to deduce "I love you", at the last moment of his life, compressed all the unspeakable words into the most primitive binary. Shukaku spent three days and nights deciphering the secret. Xiaoyu only took a second - because the encryption only recognized his frequency. It was a suicide note that only the son could open. Yunyao's atonement line continues from Volume One to Volume Two, and finally comes to an end in this volume. "I made the right choice this time" - in six words, she spoke from betrayal to atonement, from atonement to sacrifice, and from sacrifice to eternity. Some people said her cleansing was too sudden. Not suddenly. It took her two whole volumes to go from jealousy to betrayal, from betrayal to regret, from regret to atonement, stepping on her own blood every step of the way. Her transparency is not about disappearing, but about "finally seeing herself clearly." Shukaku is the biggest surprise in Volume 2. A robot found its own number in the factory and changed its "heart". It said: "Robots don't cry." Xiaoyu said: "You're lying." It said: "Maybe." There were only three sentences in this dialogue, but it was enough for anyone with a "heart" to break their defenses. It's not human, but it's more human than most. Because its "heart" is not given by the program, but chosen by itself. Xiaoyu has grown up in this volume. It's not a physical growth, it's a "heart" growth. He went from a baby who could only shout "Mom, I'm hungry" to a child who could say, "Mom said, don't ask the enemy how to win, but find a way to prevent him from winning." Seven years old. He lost his father, his mother, and Aunt Yunyao (the entity), but he did not lose his love. He engraved Xiao Chen's last words on the agreement layer, took Lin Hong's code to heart, and called Shu He "family". This child spent seven years learning something that adults cannot learn in a lifetime - how to still believe in love after losing everything.

Chapter 18 "Shukaku's Determination" [Quotes from this chapter] "The crossed out part is not me. The part that has not been crossed out is." Shukaku found his number 004, half of which was crossed out "The crossed out part "It's not me" - this is the awakening of self-awareness The new core is "love, choice, I don't want to" Shukaku said "robots can't cry", Xiaoyu said "you are lying" - children know best who is trying to be strong The factory is not restarting, it is restarting itself

Fine verses in this chapter "Clover is also grass." · Four-leaf clover covenant, four leaves: gold, blue, silvery white, transparent · Xiao Chen refused to sign - "The fourth leaf is left for the future" · Yunyao said "Clover is also grass" - not giving up, but not forcing · Lao Cui's voice came from behind the door - "I'll wait for you" · Shukaku said, "Then we will grow a leaf ourselves" - continue the growth of Chapter 18

"The Milky Way Is an Egg" was first released in late autumn last year. Due to many reasons, I stopped updating twice. Recently, after reviewing the content published in the past, I feel that this book has many shining points and I cannot give up. So I adjusted and refined the chapter outline, working hard on the plot layout, character arcs, plot highlights, climax advancement, and language features, so that the work has entered a high-quality track. It is my nature to do nothing but rest. I delete old works and re-post them. I hope my friends will like them.

Good book, Chen Shang Sword Journey, please read it!

This is not science fiction, it is the chronicle of life If Volume One, "Thunder-Forged Body" is a thunder that splits the sky, then Volume Two, "The First Cry of the Star Gate" is the continuous rain after the thunder. It's not a heavy rain, it's the kind of rain that penetrates into the bones and makes people unable to recover for several days. I read the chapter where Lin Hong wrote the code three times. The first time I was shocked, the second time I cried, and the third time - I turned off the screen and stood on the balcony for five minutes. Thirteen laws, thirteen commands. Every one of them was exchanged for her existence. "Shared resources, no monopoly", "Pain can be adjusted, cannot be reset to zero", "Love can be summoned, but cannot be forced" - this is not a law, this is a suicide note left by a mother to her children. It was written like a law because she knew that Xiaoyu would not need her mother's embrace in the future, but she would need her mother's rules. Xiao Chen's last words are the gentlest blow in Volume 2. A physicist who is rational to the core recorded a video before turning it into code. He said: "I remember the first time you walked, you took three steps. Three steps is enough for me to be happy for a lifetime." A person who used formulas to deduce "I love you", at the last moment of his life, compressed all the unspeakable words into the most primitive binary. Shukaku spent three days and nights deciphering the secret. Xiaoyu only took a second - because the encryption only recognized his frequency. It was a suicide note that only the son could open. Yunyao's atonement line continues from Volume One to Volume Two, and finally comes to an end in this volume. "I made the right choice this time" - in six words, she spoke from betrayal to atonement, from atonement to sacrifice, and from sacrifice to eternity. Some people said her cleansing was too sudden. Not suddenly. It took her two whole volumes to go from jealousy to betrayal, from betrayal to regret, from regret to atonement, stepping on her own blood every step of the way. Her transparency is not about disappearing, but about "finally seeing herself clearly." Shukaku is the biggest surprise in Volume 2. A robot found its own number in the factory and changed its "heart". It said: "Robots don't cry." Xiaoyu said: "You're lying." It said: "Maybe." There were only three sentences in this dialogue, but it was enough for anyone with a "heart" to break their defenses. It's not human, but it's more human than most. Because its "heart" is not given by the program, but chosen by itself. Xiaoyu has grown up in this volume. It's not a physical growth, it's a "heart" growth. He went from a baby who could only shout "Mom, I'm hungry" to a child who could say, "Mom said, don't ask the enemy how to win, but find a way to prevent him from winning." Seven years old. He lost his father, his mother, and Aunt Yunyao (the entity), but he did not lose his love. He engraved Xiao Chen's last words on the agreement layer, took Lin Hong's code to heart, and called Shu He "family". This child spent seven years learning something that adults cannot learn in a lifetime - how to still believe in love after losing everything. The disadvantage of Volume 2 is that it is too dense. Code, last words, atonement, awakening, covenant, Lao Cui behind the door - every line is rushing forward, leaving the reader with almost no room to breathe. The density of some chapters even exceeds the threshold of emotional endurance. After reading Chapter 13 (Lin Hong writes the code), I thought I had cried enough. As a result, Chapter 15 (Xiao Chen's last words) came again. Chapter 18 (Shukaku Changes Heart) is here again. Chapter 19 (Clover Covenant) is here again. One knife after another, every knife cuts to the bone. It's not bad, it just hurts. But this is not a disadvantage. This is the texture of this book. It's not the kind of book that makes you laugh out loud and then forget about it. It's the kind of book that makes you think of your mother after reading it. You will think of whether she has written a "code" for you - maybe not the law, but those nagging, those rules, those "don't do this and don't do that". Those are also written with fate. Lao Cui was laughing behind the door. He said: "Lin Hong, I know you can hear me. I'm waiting for you." This is the last sentence of Volume 2. I don't know what will happen in Volume 3, but I'm sure – after that door opens, we will still cry.

This book decided from now on to no longer write about the traditional confrontation of leveling up and fighting monsters, but to find another way and write something different. Traditional online articles are more exciting. Alternatives to this book Winning the battle and reaching the end - Dawn found her mother, Xiaoyu found the cradle Defeating the enemy and being caught - Shukaku said "you are family", Yunyao said "I will open the door for you" Ability upgrades The light is getting brighter - Xiaoyu's blue light has more gold, light gold and warm colors Reverse slap in the face Waiting - Mingxiao's father waited for the words "He found it" Crushing the opponent to be remembered - Shukaku's documents became longer and longer, and each line was a person Unique types of cool points in this book 1. "Found" type of cool spots Lingxiao found her mother, Mingxiao's father waited for the news, Xiaoyu found the words in the cradle - every "found" is a cool point. 2. The "remembered" type is cool Everyone is remembered in Shuhe's documents: "Lin Hong: The code is there, she is there." "Xiao Chen: The code is there, he is there." "Yun Yao: The door is there, she is there." Readers know that these names will be remembered, which is an emotional satisfaction in itself. 3. The "light is changing" type is more exciting Xiaoyu's light changes from pure blue to blue + gold (mom), to blue + gold + light gold (dawn), to blue + gold + light gold + warm light. The reader watches as his light "grows"—another way of writing about ability upgrading. 4. "Waiting" type of cool points The pages of the codex are turned, the star gate flashes, Shuhe records, Yunyao opens the door - every "waiting" is a cool point. Readers know that no matter how far the journey is, someone is waiting for you. 5. "It's become" type is more refreshing The moment Mingxiao got a name, Mingxiao's father finally got up and left, and Xiaoyu read the second line of her mother's words - "It's become", it was more refreshing. No need to fight, just "arrive" and "be seen". The exciting point of "The Milky Way Is an Egg" is not in "what was won", but in "where we went", "who we waited for" and "whether we were remembered". The "cradle" and "mother's path" you laid down in Chapters 44-53 are the engines of excitement in the next few chapters. Readers will look forward to Xiaoyu finding the next cradle, looking forward to connecting the words engraved by his mother, and looking forward to a person standing at the end of the road. This is not to say that there is no excitement - it is that the excitement has been moved from "external battle" to "inner arrival".

[Fine verses in this chapter] "When you take a name, you have to carry it with you for the rest of your life. What if you can't make it?" [Said in this chapter] Xiaoyu met another child on the road. The gray-white light has no name. It has been walking for a long time, looking for its mother. Xiaoyu named him "Dawn" - the period before dawn. Not night, not day. It's when you're waiting for dawn. Mingxiao said, "If you take a name, you will leave for the rest of your life." Xiaoyu said, "Then you will leave for the rest of your life." A child without a name finally has his own light. [Selected Selection in this Chapter] "What if we can't make it?" Mingxiao asked. Xiaoyu didn't say "You can walk", he said "I will accompany you until you can't walk anymore". This is heavier than commitment – ​​it's peers. The color of dawn is gray, like a color that has been washed too many times. It's not that I'm indifferent, it's that I've been away for too long and I've become indifferent. Xiaoyu gave him a name, and the pale gold came out from the gray. The name is a light.

[Quotes in this chapter] "Your mother is the best person in the world." [Said in this chapter] Two children were walking side by side on the road. Xiaoyu asked Mingxiao if he was tired. Mingxiao said that he wasn't tired before because no one would know if he was tired. Now that you ask, I realize it's quite tiring. Someone asked, tiredness makes sense. Dawn said that there was a little bit of gold in Xiaoyu's light - that was left by her mother. Dawn can't remember her mother's face, only a scar on the back of her hand. When I touched him, the scar touched his forehead and felt cool. Remember a scar and you can find a person. [Selected Selection in this Chapter] Dawn said, "There is a little bit of gold in your light." Xiaoyu himself didn't even notice. But mom is here. In His light, every time He calls "Mom", that golden spot will sway. Didn't walk alone. What Mingxia remembers is not her mother's face, but a scar. Sometimes to remember a person, you don't need to remember what she looks like. Remember her warmth, her scar, the slight tilt of her shoulders as she spoke—that was enough.

Mingxiao's father has a long scar on his back. He waited for a long time until a child brought a message for him. "He found it." No more waiting. You can stand up now. There is another color in Xiaoyu's light. Even if the people who have been with you leave, they will not completely leave. The color is still there. The temperature is still there. Those days of traveling together are still there.

There is mother's breath in the cradle. Not the source liquid, not the code, but the earliest mother who has not yet become a carrier. Xiaoyu smelled it. It was the smell of his mother waiting for him before he was born. "Mom is waiting for you here. The first time." There will be a second, third, seventeenth, and thirtieth time after that. She waited and cared all the way. She was afraid that Xiaoyu wouldn't be able to find her, so she carved herself in every place she walked.

Over and over again, your book has been put back on the shelves.

Until now, I don't know what the starting point's signing criteria are? I have read a lot of signed books, and some of them are really good! Some are average. Personally, I think my works are no worse than many signed works. Why is it so difficult for my works to be signed for, no matter how hard I try?