Sorry, I'm the Old Six

To be honest, I didn't explain the background clearly, the crystal energy battlefield, and the world environment halfway through watching it. Instead, I went straight into the plot. It's very strange. I'm used to this kind of unclear situation.

What the author wrote has the same feeling as Wang Linkai's concert speech, Thai pants are spicy.

It's too licking, it's like Lin Hua's style has changed.

This novel has been greatly revised. Chapter 6 [Li Ze immediately recalled the content of a page in the booklet Sevi gave him] Sevi appeared very suddenly here. I didn't know who it was. I went to the Internet and searched it before I understood it. The author did not change it well. Chapter 9 [The beating of Li Yingran the day before yesterday made Li Ze happily accept this pride] Here it is mentioned that the protagonist beat Li Yingran, and Li Yingran appeared very suddenly. Chapter 15 ["Do you know why you fell into the hands of that boy?"] Here it is described that Li Yingran suffered a loss in front of the protagonist. Then in Chapter 18, Li Yingran visited the protagonist, and then in Chapter 20, the protagonist beat Li Yingran. Time is disordered. The author didn't change it.

The writing is okay but I personally feel that there is a problem with the setting. The chicken-fighting setting does not match the warrior setting. In the later period, when the average combat power of the characters is increased, it will probably be written as an eternal disaster. The few scenes where the protagonist actually plays against the spy do not fit the setting of Lao Liu, and there are only a few scenes of eating chicken, which are also limited by Lao Liu.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but no one seems to be reading it.

Personal evaluation: The plot is good, but some details cannot withstand scrutiny.

Personally, I think it's good. The title may not be very good, and the actual content is different from the title.

It's pretty cool, and there aren't any riddles.

{"NickName":"Feng Sui Liuyun Writer","UserId":315432132} Today is Wednesday, so I have finished reading it for now. I have some thoughts about the people in the book, and some expectations for the characters, just like yy's hopes, but it's not about sex but other things that are more difficult to express, but to say it directly is a bit like a troll, so tomorrow is KFC Crazy Thursday V. I am 50 and will tell you the follow-up