Golden Magic: The Magic Academy's Strongest New Student

Fantasy originality is a dead end. The poor results in the early stage will scare you to death. It is impossible to reach a million words in a single game.

It's okay, but this magic system is really confusing. You only need to imagine to cast magic. You can even make up spells at will. In Chapter 18, the protagonist made up a spell by himself, and the protagonist is a bit too holy. How can others insult you, and you still go out to save others, when it is not safe to go to school?

Why not just move the third chapter to the first chapter? It wouldn't be good to directly have the protagonist travel through time, so I have to insert a narrative.

What does it mean? The person who has been mocking the protagonist has disappeared. The protagonist can only compare the relationship with him, and then he becomes the culprit 🙂

Let's not mention other settings. You are a newbie who has just entered school and hasn't learned anything yet. Isn't the density of things happening a bit too high?

Your willpower setting is too bad. Literally, it should be related to life experience. If you want to improve it, the easiest and most difficult thing is to experience life and death. It is normal to have a low level at the beginning. How can you have a strong will without experiencing the world?

My suggestion is to delete all chapters 2 to 11, or readers who see my comments can skip it by themselves, so that it is basically barrier-free to read.

What she said makes sense. This was the case in a book I read before.

It's less than thirty chapters and I can't see anything yet. But I'm somewhat interested in a magic system that's different from the same. The biggest worry is that the events come in a little too fast. On average, there are 1 clue of a huge conspiracy in 9 chapters. This is a pace that requires growing up in countless events. It is not conducive to the smooth development of learning and research from the perspective of magic.

The title of the book looks like a wizard's chronicle, but after reading it, I found out that it is actually a fairy grass seedling. Have you ever considered changing the name to something that reflects the temperament of this book? Otherwise, many people might just leave after seeing the title...