The Deep Blue of Game of Thrones

With blue scales on its face and pointed elf ears, are you sure this appearance wouldn't be considered a collectible specimen in Game of Thrones?

After taking a look, I realized that the protagonist, as a transmigrator with the ability to predict the future, has very little experience in being a charlatan and a prophet. Charlatans and prophecies are a hallmark of the world of A Song of Ice and Fire, and the protagonist's spoilers have created the lowest possible standard for charlatans in history.

Joffrey, a tyrannical man, how could he possibly be so obedient? He's never seen charm work on royalty before! He's seen countless beautiful things and destroyed countless charming people and objects. According to the novels and movies, he'd either stab you on the spot or send people to surround and kill you—that's Joffrey's character.

What are you writing? The main character has absolutely no presence. I might not even notice him if you removed the main character. He just disappears all the time. Also, does your book lack an outline? Starting with one hammer and ending with another

I've read a few chapters and the writing is quite good, but the plot is extremely toxic. First, the protagonist inexplicably starts interfering in the plot right from the beginning, and later even directly spoils the story with the characters, all without any reason. Then Game of Thrones is set in the Middle Ages.

So what exactly is the protagonist trying to do? It seems to me that the protagonist is doing completely meaningless things, meddling in everything but gaining nothing from it. This book doesn't seem like a power struggle novel, so why is the protagonist interfering in the plot? There's no goal, it's just like he's meddling for the sake of meddling.

It feels like the main character has less screen time than that steel dagger.

The premise is decent, but the second chapter was off-putting. He inexplicably pops up, inexplicably flatters and saves people, and then inexplicably lectures Arya. Seriously, I don't understand. You just transmigrated and immediately adapted to the situation, which is one thing, but even though you know the plot, you're still strangers. Are you some kind of concerned citizen?

The first chapter was quite good, making you want to settle down and read it slowly. Then suddenly, it jumps in to save the children—okay, let's assume that's because you're kind-hearted. Later, it goes on and on with Arya, making assumptions and reasoning—it's all so inexplicable. The more engaging the first chapter, the more off-putting the second becomes.

The author overestimates House Lannister's strength; House Baratheon is undoubtedly the strongest. Otherwise, why would House Baratheon be king when House Lannister only fought one wolf and half a fish, and even that was through cunning? Dorne barely moved, and the combined army of House Rose and Stormlands, numbering 100,000, fell to the Lannisters after Lannister's death, simply because Joffrey…