The Deep Blue of Game of Thrones

With blue scales on his face and pointed elf ears, are you sure this appearance will not be regarded as a collection specimen in Game of Thrones?

After looking at it, I found that the protagonist, as a time-traveler with an unpredictable future, has too little experience in being a magician and a prophet. Magic sticks and prophecies are the characteristics of the world of ice and fire. The protagonist's spoiler behavior directly created the lowest sewer standards in history for the magic sticks. As a magician, your prophecies should be concise and concise. To put it bluntly, while being the Riddler, you should also be impressive, touching people's hearts, and have far-reaching implications. What you say must not be explained again, or you will just pretend to be cool and run away. Just talking about some possible plot directions will only make the original characters confused. Some people think you are an information dealer, and those who don't know you think you are a liar. As a prophet, you should describe the scenes and events you see about the future in extremely detailed and conclusive terms. Anyway, you want to show that whether you believe it or not, what I say is absolutely true, so that even people who don't believe in ghosts and gods will still murmur in their hearts. Then complete the psychological breakdown of the spoiler character through a true prophecy that can shake people's perspective. Next, even if you are a nonsense and have seen a spaceship falling in the future, they will believe it. When you are a magician, you need to rely on nine false predictions and one true prediction to cast a wide net to deceive people. When you are a prophet, you need to rely on nine true and one false predictions to deceive people in a targeted manner.

How could Joffrey, a tyrannical man, be so obedient? He had never seen charm useful to anyone in the royal family! People have seen so many beautiful things and destroyed so many charming people or things. According to the descriptions in novels and movies, it is Joffrey's character to give you a sword on the spot or call people to surround you and kill you.

What are you writing? The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. Even if you remove the protagonist, I may not be able to detect it. The protagonist disappears at every turn Also, does your book have no outline? A hammer in the east and a hammer in the west

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is good but the plot is very poisonous. First of all, the protagonist starts to intervene in the plot inexplicably at the beginning, and then directly begins to spoil the characters in the plot. The key is that there is no reason. Then Game of Thrones is in the Middle Ages. You, a refugee with no identity, who gave you the courage to talk in front of the nobles? Are you really talking about class as a joke? How many of the characters in Game of Thrones are not nobles? Why do you, an undocumented refugee, stand in front of people and talk?

So what is the protagonist going to do? Now it seems to me that the protagonist is doing completely meaningless things. He has a hand in everything, but nothing benefits the protagonist. This book doesn't look like a hegemony novel to me, so why does the protagonist interfere in the plot? There is no goal, but it is just to intervene. It feels like the protagonist is completely manipulated by the author and forced into the plot. However, everything is of no use to the protagonist and has no purpose. I find it very baffling.

I feel like the protagonist's role is less than that of the corrugated steel dagger.

The setting is not bad, but I was persuaded to quit in the second chapter. He jumped out inexplicably, flattered and rescued people inexplicably, and then lectured Alia inexplicably. No, I don't understand it. You just traveled through time and immediately adapted to the status quo. I won't tell you. Although you know the plot, in the end you are still strangers. Are you an enthusiastic citizen? Where did you get the confidence to convince Joffrey when you just came to this world? Moreover, you are only at the first level, and you are not invincible. Don't you think about the consequences if you fail to convince Joffrey? Wouldn't you create trouble for yourself? Moreover, you have such a strange appearance that it is difficult to hide it if you are wanted. Others can recognize you at a glance. When the author writes, he usually slaps his forehead and writes, which is too natural.

The first chapter is actually very well written, making people want to read it slowly and calmly. Then you suddenly jump out and want to save the child. Well, just treat this as a kind-hearted person. Later, he had a long discussion with Aria making assumptions and reasoning, which was really baffling. As attractive as the first chapter is, the second chapter will dissuade you.

The author thinks that the Lion family is too strong. No matter what, the strongest one is the Lu family. Otherwise, why is it that the deer family is the king, and the lion beat the wolf from beginning to end, adding half a fish, and still won by tricking. Dorne didn't move much. The Rose House and the Stormlands combined a hundred thousand troops. Lan En returned to the Lion as soon as he died, because Joffrey was the king of the Baratheon House. Now Joffrey is not the king. To be honest, if the fat king said a word, the old lion would take the initiative to kill his daughter and grandson to make amends.