Mortal: I Am the Young Master of Qianhuan Sect

When I saw Chapter 5, I almost died from poison. I was close to my parents in the late stage of Nascent Soul, a sect with abundant resources, and qualifications comparable to Tianlinggen. I had to travel thousands of miles to get to know Xin Ruyin, a great monk in the Qi Refining Stage 😂😂😂

This book is not on topic. As a young sect master, his life is more casual than a casual cultivator. He is no different from a lonely person. A young sect master knows no one except his parents and a senior brother. The author keeps saying that there is an outline, but it gives people the impression that he has not written anything. Either there is no outline or the plot arrangement is really poor. There is basically no horizontal description of the environment, and the description of family love is even more pale and tasteless. The mother only appears in three chapters and then closes it.

It is unrealistic to want to exchange Golden Thunder Bamboo with model workers. He is too stubborn. The original work didn't even include Nangong Wan, a beautiful woman in palace attire who was admitted to him. What's more, the protagonist is a man. It's better to find a way to go into his cave and hunt rabbits. Anyway, he will stay in Tianxing City for decades. It is more than enough to study the formations of his cave in advance. Or simply use golden fingers to create a treasure that spans the formation. There are a lot of elixirs and resources in his cave. During the twenty years he opened Qingzhu Xiaoxuan, he matured six of them. You can do it while he is being nurtured to seventeen or eighteen years old. Make a fortune 😏

I don't understand. The devil is in charge of you, and fists are the truth. You are not the young master of the devil at all, and you have no competition at all. Even if you like Yan Ruyan, you can just rob her.

This book will be ruined because of a thunder bamboo

This copy is not finished, right? With such good conditions, if you don't quickly advance to Nascent Soul, you will at least have to reach the peak of the Golden Core before you go out to wander around. As a time traveler, the protagonist must know the cruelty of the world of mortals cultivating immortals. The author has arranged such a big cheat for the protagonist. You don't have to be slow to develop, but at least you have to be a little bit competent. In the past, I tried to show off to the protagonist in various ways, but when Wang Chan pulled her crotch once, did you think the lesson was not enough? Your golden elixir stage has been banned by Yuanying. Although the author used a plug-in to get it back, the standard has been dropped all over the floor. You don't go back honestly, and you still want to continue to download the dungeon? Author! If you want to write a character with a strong character, then write it in a character style. If you want to write an original adventure and download a dungeon, don't arrange such a big plug-in for the protagonist in all kinds of thrills! There is a demon refining pot! Instead of arranging for the protagonist to quickly improve his cultivation and then come out with all kinds of pretense and slap in the face, an original copy will make the protagonist injured and in danger, and all the cool points in the previous dozens of chapters will be lost. When I look at the recently updated chapters, I feel that they are very fragmented! ! ! Do you know what this behavior is? You are wasting your golden time! ! ! After it was put on the shelf, a lot of time was spent on reading it, but it was all wasted by your copy! The author will talk about the most basic logic, the parents of the twin souls, the powerful sect, various plug-ins, and then come out to experience and be tortured in various ways! Author, although you can come back with the results, the process of downloading the copy is really terrible! Author, you wrote the protagonist as a buffoon supporting role like Wang Chan, did you know? Think about it, what is the difference between the protagonist and Wang Chan in the process of this copy? Overestimating one's abilities and being obsessed with narcissism! The plug-in you arranged has no effect at all! Then why did you need to describe the tree-cutting chapters in such detail? One more thing! Author, you have already arranged cheats for the protagonist, and you are still worried about Jin Lei Bamboo? When I saw that, I laughed out loud! If you have the time to write an original copy, why not arrange a few opportunities for the protagonist? No need to use plug-ins! Original copy cannot be written! The protagonist was written as a clown by you! And the protagonist is so greedy? Golden Thunder Bamboo? Is Jinleizhu a piece of shit? Don't use the golden thunder bamboo to restrain the devil as an excuse. Can't plug-ins provide a way to restrain the devil? Can't the opportunity of an original copy provide a way to overcome the evil ways? Do you have to keep an eye on Han Li? Bringing two golden elixirs in the foundation building stage, calling two Taoist friends in the Qi training stage? Author, I've finished all the hard work for you. When I saw Xin Ruyin's part, I almost thought it was a female channel work! I didn't expect that there would be a female channel among the mortal cultivators and demonic forces! Author, should you be more logical in this book? No need for the demon refining pot? Is there a bottleneck in the practice of double clone plug-ins? Do you have to have all kinds of waves in the early stage of Jindan? Wave into a lump? Look at the original work, Wen Juren, and look at your Su Nu video! Please be worthy of my monthly ticket! ! !

Hidden cuckold article, readers who like cuckolds can read it, it really disgusted me

Forget it, I won't read it anymore. It's such a big cheat. It has to do with Golden Thunder Bamboo and Nangong Que. Dog-licking. In this era, male dog-licking videos all have no results.

A truly comfortable way to write a fan, without relying on Han Li for any protection at all: The core principle of the world of cultivating immortals is that the strong are respected, and those with good luck and virtue live there. Time and space cause and effect are never rigid shackles. The protagonist travels in advance, independently develops ancient secret realms, holds the best offensive and defensive magic weapons, and has the ability to rewrite the world line. Han Li is just an ordinary monk in the big world. Whoever grabs the Sky Bottle and various spiritual materials belongs to him. There is no need to deliberately give in or actively please the other party because of his future achievements. Han Li's fate can be directly rewritten because of the appearance of the protagonist, and it is completely reasonable for the original plot to be canceled. There is no need for the author to forcefully renew the original protagonist.

No, what you wrote about the Ghost Spirit Sect is extremely temperamental. You dared to intimidate the young master of the Qianhuan Sect in a public competition. You really don't understand your own status. Those who don't know think that your Ghost Spirit Sect is the number one sect of the Six Demonic Sects. Wang Chan is also out of his mind. Originally, the Ghost Spirit Sect's position in the Six Demonic Sects was not guaranteed, and he publicly offended the Qianhuan Sect. The name can be changed to "Mortal: The Rise of the Ghost Spirit Sect"

Isn't it cool to fly to the immortal with a sword if you are a good celestial being? Does it have to be written as a dragon? The style of painting has changed as I write. If a good young sect leader doesn't do anything, he has to become a monster or be a slave of a monster.

Don't worry about Han Li, don't you want this Golden Thunder Bamboo?

Recommended protagonists: Dragon Yuan and Phoenix Blood and Dragon Turtle Essence and Qilin Blood and Qilin Essence and Divine Stone and Qinglong Yanyue Sword and Blood Bodhi and Wutian Fudou from Hong Kong Comics: One of the martial arts created by the leader of Wutian Purgatory Sect. The sword intention is passed down from generation to generation, and through the practice of "Red Fire Sword Intention", only the sword fire can never be extinguished and the sword intention will never end. An immortal sword intent. Get the amazing sword power. Endowed with peerless sword intent. The strength of martial arts is unprecedented. The human turned into a sword, and the sword moved at will, and the changes were strange. The sword's will is as strong as a soft sword. The moves are: 1'Lingchi Jianjue': The sword's intention is like a sharp edge, surging like a tide from all directions. 2'Tianluo Jianjue': The flames of the sword energy form a circular air shield to protect the whole body 360 degrees, blocking water and making it impossible to invade. 3 'Fire Sword Lian Jue': The fire of the sword is as strong as a sword, and the flames of the sword are as powerful as breaking. The hidden fire sword intent led down, overwhelming from all directions. 4 'Sky Fire Starts a Prairie Fire': The flames form countless figures, using high temperature and heat to control the extremely evil power of the poor brother. 5 'Hokage Zongheng': A sword that combines sword, energy and flames. It is extremely fast, powerful and overbearing, and can wipe out everything. Red Fire Divine Art: This "Red Fire Divine Art" is a supreme inner strength treasure that was transformed by the great master of martial arts more than a hundred years ago, the Red Fire Originator, based on the Japanese swordsman Yagyu Wuji's unparalleled secret art - "Wuji Three Skills" - "Tianluo Fire Way", integrating his own top martial arts in the Central Plains, and using his rich experience and martial arts talent. He spent countless years and energy to transform it. But what is different from the original version of "Tianluo Fire Dao" is that "Tianluo Fire Dao" was originally "heart-based", and all fires will be generated by the movement of the heart. However, after the "Red Fire Divine Art" was finally completed by the ancestor of the Chi family - the ancestor of the Chi Huo, and the genius of the Chi family a hundred years later - Chi Jue, its core became to stimulate the potential hidden in the practitioner's body, that is, "based on fire". Therefore, in terms of power alone, the "Red Fire Divine Art" is far more powerful than the original "Tianluo Fire Dao". But everything has its own gains and losses, and every advantage must have a disadvantage! Since the latent fire generated by this "Red Fire Magic Art" is "based on fire" is difficult to control by the mind, it will constantly backfire on its user. This is undoubtedly like carrying a nuclear bomb, which is extremely dangerous. The genius head of the Chi family, Chi Jue, was born once in a century. Just when the "Red Fire Divine Art" was completed, he was burned to death. In the end, he was "wiped into ashes" and only the martial arts spirit remained! "Red Fire Divine Art" has been developed twice: the first time, the ancestor of the Red Fire was taught the inner martial arts by Yagyu Wuji, the Japanese swordsman, and transformed it to create "Red Fire Divine Art". The second time was when Chi Jue, a descendant of the Chi family, competed with Wu Wudi, a top ten warrior, and taught martial arts to each other. Chi Jue incorporated the essence of Wu Wudi's unique skill [Xuanwu True Kung Fu] to reach the pinnacle of the Red Fire Divine Kung Fu. After that, Chi Jue absorbed Tianming Kendo, one of Wu Wudi's top ten martial arts, and combined it with the characteristics of his own red fire magic skill, internal and external, to create a peerless kendo that controls all things with sword intent that shocked the past and the present - [Refining Fire Sword Jue]! The red fire magical skill is divided into nine steps, and each three steps is one step. Take three or three steps to combine the energy of the nine heavens. They are the first path: Blue Flame, the middle path: Red Flame, and the ultimate path: Qing Feng. These three kung fu techniques are each more powerful than the last, and each is more dangerous than the last, until they finally reach the level of perfection. The Red Fire Divine Skill can continuously unlock the [potential] contained in the human body. Those who practice the Red Fire Divine Skill will evolve special abilities based on their individual needs. When you reach the eighth step of "Red Fire Divine Art", you can already be mentally immortal (Sword Intent)! It just can't stop the destruction of the physical body! Because the sword intention is transformed into the void, it can always exist on the earth. Only in this way can the red fire magic skill be endless and avoid disappearing from the world with the death of the practitioner's body. The Red Fire Divine Skill is divided into three levels. At the beginning of each level, there is an important trick. The three-step Kung Fu of the Blue Flame Realm in the First Dao is to unleash your potential, heal your wounds and strengthen your foundation, and strengthen your muscles and bones. It is actually the foundation of the Red Fire Divine Kung Fu that cannot be ignored. If the Blue Flame Realm is achieved, it will be like laying a solid foundation for a tall building. Even if there is no Chi Lie Realm left in the future, the practice method of the Qing Feng Realm can be used to learn any other martial arts, and it will be done with half the effort. If you practice this initial Tao to a high level, you will be able to cultivate a blue aura that is like fire but not fire, and like air but not air. It can strengthen the foundation internally and kill enemies externally. It can be described as miraculous! In the final volume of the secret secret of the red fire magic skill, it is recorded that the magic skill is at its ultimate, the red fire is ruthless, and the fire is perfect. Once it reaches the highest level, everything will be burned. Red Fire Divine Art Formula: The First Tao Formula: The way of heaven ends and begins again. Those who stick to this direction are where heaven ends and begins. It is the combination of yin and yang. There are five elements in the sky. Fire is used as a vine, so the fire is nourished by Taiji. The fire is nourished by Yang. Fire is born from earth, and earth is gold. Fire does not move, and it is poor to nourish the spirit. Red Fire Magical Formula: Red Fire is transformed into words, Yang Qi is used for things, Xia Yan ascends, and all things change. The pulse Qi is moving and is born when it touches the ground. The Wangji Qi is filled with fire. The attack of heaven and earth transforms yin and yang, the essence becomes the four seasons, and the fire is hidden in the body. Strong and sharp Yang fire is driven by accumulated heat, which is filled with excess and vacuity, and then ends again and again. The formula for the final volume: Things are mixed together, the enemy is in darkness and we are clear, the red flame is ruthless, and the fire is perfect. ' 'Hundred ton is an object. Once it unfolds, the light will be so bright that others can't reach it. The flame will reach green, and the jade will burn together. ' There are three tips in total, which can be summarized as follows: The ultimate magical skill, singing and mourning the phoenix Burning the body with fire, and being reborn in nine turns. Heaven and earth have no phase, and there is no distinction between life and death. Sacrifice one's body and forget one's soul, and rule the roost with absolute will. The general idea is that to achieve the highest level of the Red Fire Divine Art, you must give up your body. However, burning your body is undoubtedly self-destruction, so almost no one is willing to do this. Lian Chengzhi, who had lost his true love and had no hope for life, decided to fight to the death and took this step, finally achieving the highest state of the red fire magic [Nine Transformations of Rebirth]. And another person who has achieved the highest level of the Red Fire Divine Art is Xiao Wu. Shameless flames: The combination of the highest state of the red fire magic skill and the non-seeking and easy decision is a self-created magic skill after the success of Lianchengzhi magic power Using thought to control fire, there is no gap. You can transform your body into flames to avoid attacks, or you can turn the flames into entities You can also escape into the realm of "nothing". It can refine all things into essence. Lianchengzhi killed the great demon and refined his essence into several essence pills. God seizes the seven empties": One of the three miraculous powers of Wutian Purgatory The intention of the god seizing the seven empties is to use the killing thoughts of the seven empties to swallow the sky and destroy the earth The so-called seven empties are to empty out the seven emotions and forget about them. Abandoning love is the most outrageous killing move in the world After the seven emptinesses are exhausted, only one hatred is left, which is the essence of the spirit to seize the seven emptinesses The four unique skills of the Huntian": The peerless magical skill created by the strange man Xiao Sanxiao. His son, the Great Demon God, is proud of the warriors in the world because of this skill. The Emperor of Japan also used Lian Cheng Zhi. This overbearing and unparalleled external skill is mainly based on unparalleled power. It can absorb the natural power of the heaven and earth, the sun and the moon, and elevate the power to an unprecedented level. This martial art can use the sun and moon as media to draw on the four mutually restraining forces of wind, thunder, fire and rain for its own use Under the fusion of these four forces, not only yin and yang complement each other, but also life and death are endless Its majesty has long [crossed the boundaries of human beings] Only the following three types have been used: Fire: Mingyi Sky Fire → Sky Fire Starts a Prairie Thunder: Zhe Lei Fist → Comes across the sky like lightning Overlord Thunder Five Thunders Strike the Top Wind: Nine Heavens Mysterious Wind Rain: Unknown Wandao Senluo: It is one of the most exquisite martial arts in the master's life. Created by Xiao Sanxiao, it can accommodate various different and even mutually exclusive martial arts for one's own use. Later, it was passed down to his disciple Hayato Tengakure. The master can even use Wandaosunluo to guess the opponent's heart and give him an advantage in the battle. All four are evil: one of the many martial arts of the great leader. According to what the great leader said, if Wandao Senluo is the power that embraces heaven and earth, then the four elements are all evil, which is the complete opposite of Yi Di, water, fire, and wind. The four elements are self-destruction against heaven. It is the nemesis of Wan Dao Senluo. The great master once passed down this martial arts to Blood Thirteen. But in terms of skill and cultivation, the master's own four evil elements are far stronger than Blood Thirteen. Heart Sword/Consciousness Only Sword Intention: It is one of the master's other unique skills. Used during another duel with Hayato Amagakure. It seems that he can turn his mind into a sword with a thought in his heart. It was so powerful that it completely destroyed Hayato Amagakure's right arm with just one move. And Hayato Amagakure's fighting spirit was wiped out in just one move. And it can be formed with intention, and the sword of the heart can rise anywhere, trapping the enemy's retreat. Sacred Heart Jue: It comes from "Wind and Cloud (Part 2)" by Hong Kong cartoonist Ma Wing-shing. Emperor Shitian [Xu Fu] spent thousands of years gathering the martial arts of thousands of families and the characteristics of phoenix blood to create the supreme magical power. It can make its owner immortal and resurrect the dead. It also contains several weird attack moves, including the Four Tribulations of the Sacred Heart. The Divine Mother once used the Little Saint Heart Technique to resurrect Huai Kong. It is a supreme magical skill created by Emperor Shitianhua who spent thousands of years integrating the martial arts of thousands of families and the characteristics of phoenix blood. It can make its owner immortal, stay young forever, and resurrect the dead. It also contains several weird attack moves, including the Four Tribulations of the Sacred Heart. The Divine Mother once used the Little Saint Heart Technique to resurrect Huai Kong. The first appearance of Xu Fu's Oral Sacred Heart Jue was created by his disciple Emperor Shitian. After the Sacred Heart Technique was first completed, life expectancy increased greatly. It would take at least a thousand years to practice the Sacred Heart Technique step by step to reach the peak state of Dacheng. Unlike Xu Fu, Emperor Shitian did not have the magical power of immortality. Therefore, Emperor Shitian, who was afraid of death, created the Sacred Heart Technique to extend his life and hid it in the Nine Layers of Ice Prison to delay aging. In fact, if you practice the Sacred Heart Art to the peak level of Dacheng, you can gain many supernatural powers: immortality, eternal youth, no aging, and the ability to become an indestructible body. The deeper you practice, the more supernatural powers you have and the stronger you are. Sacred Heart Jue Qinggong: The peerless Qinggong "Ascending Immortal Steps". When walking, it looks like you are walking in a leisurely manner, and others don't think it is very fast. In fact, it is as if you have shrunk to an inch, even faster than the speed of sound. It is just that the whole body is surrounded by true energy and the air is pushed away, so there will be no sound barrier or even strong wind. Sacred Heart Jue has the Nahai Sacred Heart Mantra. This heart method is based on the inner strength of the Sacred Heart Jue. Whether it is other internal strength of one's own or the internal strength absorbed from others, it can be turned into part of one's own heart method. The essence of the "Nahai Sacred Heart Curse" is to devour, but its method is not to devour, but to assimilate. To be more detailed, this method will first convert part of the internal force of the Sacred Heart Jue into innate energy similar to the target, integrate it into it, and then control it from the inside. Finally, it will transform it into a part of the Sacred Heart Jue with the target, while still maintaining the essence and rareness of the original innate energy. The Holy Heart Jue has the "Phantom of the Heavenly Palace", which can attract people's hearts with spiritual power, create a false fairyland-like world in their hearts, and trap people in it. This phantom world can integrate people's fantasies and sublimate them. It comes from the human heart, but is higher than the human heart. It makes people feel that it is the fairyland in their dreams, but it is so beautiful that they cannot even imagine it in their dreams. The Four Jue of the Sacred Heart: "Han Tian Jue": Releases earth-shattering cold air. The icebergs in Tianmen are caused by Han Tian Jue. "Xuan Bing Jue": Create a body of black ice that lasts for more than a thousand years. "Wan Ren Chuan Yun" turns ice into a blade, shoots straight into the sky, and can penetrate the clouds. "Emperor's Crazy Thunder" turns ice into thunder, attacks the enemy, and explodes like thunder. The Four Tribulations of the Sacred Heart: Eyes "Shocking Tribulations" capture the soul with icy cold gaze. Using the power of his eyes, he can kill his apprentice Ice King instantly with just one look. Blood "Evil Blood Tribulation" draws blood with blood, causing the opponent to bleed out and die. Not reflected in the original work. Heart "Heaven's Heart Tribulation" uses your own heart to lead the enemy's heart, causing the opponent's heart to burst. Di Shitian used this trick to easily contain all the righteous people in Wuhuang Mountain, trying to torture everyone to death. Bu Jingyun was determined to die together and died together, which only caused a moment of pain to Emperor Shitian. The god "God-killing Tribulation" uses the soul as a weapon, which is the strongest form among the four tribulations. Ending: Emperor Shitian was hit by the Five Thunder Transformation Hands before he could use it, and his thousand-year-old skill was destroyed in one blow. He never used it until he was killed by Duan Lang. The Sacred Heart Jue has seven inexhaustible states: it can turn the body into particles and reorganize anywhere, which can be called the nemesis of most martial arts! Iron Hand: Iron Sect only teaches the master's martial arts, one of the ten most difficult and miraculous skills in the world. Tie Shen once went to Tianmen to ask Emperor Shitian for help, but because he could not bear the pain of broken veins, he later carved it on his fingernails, and then was killed by Tie Kuang. Formula: Fire can generate anger, Qi can generate strength, strength and strength are mutually reinforcing, boiling iron melts gold, and the fire that boils iron can dissolve gold, but if the heart is not molded, it will burn itself. It is divided into five layers of metal, wood, water, fire and earth Gold - the Yuan Jue of Transforming Gold. The Iron Smelting Hand is the highest level. It can boil iron and dissolve it into gold, and melt gold and iron into different weapons. It is incredible Wood - Juemu Gan Gang. Both palms contain infinite heat, any tree that touches the palm will be burned to coke, and it is invincible Water - extinguishing water and empty flames. Water and fire are in conflict with each other, and where the fire palm passes, it can evaporate the blood in the opponent's body, leaving only the body. Fire - controlling fire and swallowing the sky. Like fire attracts each other, uses fire to ignite fire, controls fire to attack the enemy, and is endlessly changeable Earth - Earth-breaking thunder. The fierce force instantly burns the ground into cracks, leaving no grass growing, and attacking the enemy unprepared Five Thunder Transformation Hands: It is a god-level martial arts that appears in the second part of the comic. Its creator and user is Furious Thunder. According to the comics, Furious Thunder has been weak and sick since childhood. , His father buried him underground in order to save him, and used the Five Elements technique to help him strengthen his body. Due to a strange combination of circumstances, Furious Thunder achieved a unique Five Elements physique, and the Five Thunder Transformation Spells was a martial art developed by Furious Thunder based on the particularity of the Five Elements physique. The Five Thunder Transformation Hands in the comics can use the power of the five elements to decompose all things in the world. Whether it is a peerless magic weapon or a thousand-year-old skill, it will be completely transformed. Moreover, this martial arts itself is extremely domineering and extremely powerful. With the help of this martial arts, Fury Wind Lei can even defeat Bu Jingyun who possesses Dragon Yuan. If he also takes a Dragon Yuan, he may be able to easily defeat Bu Jingyun if his skills are equal. The Karmic Transformation Technique: Many people think that the Karmic Transformation Technique is a martial art that only appeared in the third comic book. In fact, this is not the case. It appeared as early as the first comic book. The people who used this martial art at that time were true. Monk, in the comics, Monk Fuxu uses the two great Buddhist magical skills, Karma and Karma Transformation Technique and Wan Dao Bui to face off against Po Jun's Sha Po Lang. In the end, he is defeated miserably. Therefore, Karma and Karma Transformation Technique is considered by many netizens to be a second-rate martial arts that is not worth mentioning. However, as the plot develops, we discover that Karma and Karma is a truly god-level martial arts. The reason for defeat to Shapolang is that the user is too weak. In the third part of the comic, a selfless little monk who has never practiced martial arts can bounce back all the attacks of the Great Sun Sect with a few words of Karma and Karma. With such a martial art, do you think it is a second-rate martial arts? According to the comics, Karma Transformation can not only rebound the enemy's attacks, but can even transfer karma when practiced to a high level. This kind of martial arts has far exceeded the scope of martial arts and is a true god-level martial arts. It is a pity that the selfless little monk died trying to resolve the Qianqiu catastrophe, and Karma Transformation has disappeared because of this. However, its practice method should still be preserved in Miyin Temple. Feixian Sword Dao: Feixian is like a hermit, not stagnant in things, but also able to move with the world. It is the ultimate in time and space. It is the natural way of Taoism, a free state, and one can do whatever one wants. For example, Ideology Sword Body Dafa, Shushan Immortal Sword Sect, Qionghua Sect, Tianyong City's Sword Controlling Technique, Sword Light Sword Controlling Technique in "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman", Ba Sword Way in "Sword Overlord" and Void Condensing Sword Way in "Void Condensing Swordsmanship" and the Sword Immortal Picture Book in "Heaven and Earth Domineering Technique". [Sword Demon Kendo]: The Sword Demon is ruthless, both good and evil, affectionate and righteous, true to himself, and judge of good and evil. For example, [Demon Tribulation Kendo] and the Six-Destroying Sword Twenty-Three in "Wind and Cloud". [Heavenly Sword Kendo]: The metaphysical sword has no one in ancient times. Ten thousand swords respect it and worship it like the sky. It is the heavenly sword. The sword of heaven and earth is as cunning as it is clumsy, returning to its original nature. The sword of heaven is invincible to the emperor, and all swords surrender. The Heavenly Sword represents unyielding resistance and pride. For example, the nameless Supreme Swordsmanship and Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Sect in "The Wind and Cloud". [Inexplicable Sword Technique]: The Great Sword Master's [Inexplicable Sword Technique] was originally derived from the first sword technique born in this world, and it can be said to be the ancestor of all swords! It is said that if a person with a natural "sword affinity" obtains the sword technique, he will be able to figure out the opponent's sword technique in an instant when facing the enemy. He can also fully understand the essence of the opponent's sword technique in one fell swoop, and then deduce the subsequent progress of the opponent's sword technique! If the opponent has nine sword techniques, [Inexplicable Sword Technique] can penetrate the essence of his sword technique and deduce a tenth sword that is stronger and more ruthless than the original nine sword techniques!

Is it difficult to add plug-ins to cultivate the ability of spiritual plants? You can definitely write Tongtian Jianmu to obtain plug-ins, strange fires and techniques from other worlds. You can write about the male protagonist getting the heat of strange fire creatures to ripen elixirs and protect the body. The Qing Emperor Wood Emperor Skill in the Great Five Elements can also cultivate spiritual plants.

Qing Yuanzi is so smart that he has not become a true immortal. In the world of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", it is difficult to become a true immortal by just being smart. He needs a lot of external resources to obtain or cultivate a large number of elixirs.

Let me share some thoughts: First, since we are mortals, we should follow some of the value systems of the original work. If we don't reach new highs, we shouldn't go too far. Second, there is nothing wrong with intercepting opportunities and trading again, but don't lick it, go to the Holy Mother, and be a nanny. It would be better to create some new passages about opportunities. The original work certainly cannot cover all the opportunities. Of course, this also depends on the author's writing ability. It would also be good to design a small blind box. The third is to adopt a daughter. It is good to keep a vase like Yan Ruyan in the same sect. The one who can really accompany her is Yuan Yao. People who have not been seen for dozens or hundreds of years will see you next time. Good guy. Only those who have their own talents and opportunities can be the heroines. If the author designs that the protagonist will lead a large group of people in the end, please inform him in advance, and he will not accompany you. Finally, there is the section of the Great Elder of the Hidden Moon Sect designed by the author. Imagine being with a woman who is your own mother or even older than who knows how many generations... There is really a conflict of views here. This is a personal opinion and not for discussion.

Keep describing your inner activities? Treasure introduction? There is no need to be too verbose about things and details that are not important!

The first time I met a sissy male protagonist

Relatively speaking, this fanfic is already very good. The atmosphere of the Qianhuan Sect in the early stage is indeed not like the Demonic Way, but the protagonist is a high-level person, and readers naturally cannot see the lives of the lower-level disciples. Later, the Ghost Spirit Sect Gathering writes about the six sects, and it feels like the author is patching it up. Qian Huanzong, and when we met Qi Yunxiao later, he pointed out that he liked Xin Ruyin, and the protagonist also encouraged him, and it was a bit like giving away the girl. And since the formation bug of Xin Ruyin was written, I happily accepted it, so that the readers are happy; and the current plot of Yanjiabao is okay now. It would be better if there are less romance plots. If the writing style does not decline after it is released, I feel that it should be a high-quality product.

Don't be too opinionated, author! The male protagonist should not tell Han Li that he will obtain the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo in the next hundred years. The male protagonist should have obtained the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo decades in advance and used a plug-in to cultivate the Thousand-Year Golden Thunder Bamboo. In the future, you can also use the roots of Heavenly Thunder Bamboo or Golden Thunder Bamboo to trade rare items or techniques with Han Li to earn his favor. How the male protagonist obtains the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo does not depend on how the author writes it! Many fan fiction writers have written that the male protagonist obtained the Thunder Bamboo decades earlier than Han Li! Don't count on Han Li.

The plug-in is quite powerful. It's barely considered half an invincible novel. Overall watery. There are too many useless descriptions of environments, characters, mental activities, and actions. The style of pig's feet is also a bit strange. When it's time to be steady, it's time to be ruthless, and when it's time to improve your cultivation, it's also time to be rogue. Too many original copies. I like to be a bitch when I meet female characters. And the related descriptions are quite embarrassing. I don't care much about the popular female characters in the original work and anime, but I care too much about the insignificant female characters. It was even more shocking to see the Dao number taken from two hundred photos. The overall writing style and pig's feet style are not suitable for ordinary people's fan style. Sometimes I think the protagonist is very witty. Sometimes pig's feet feel like a clown. Looking at the first two hundred and five chapters, as a whole, the author has obviously committed a lot of problems that make readers unhappy in online articles. Some parts have been changed, but there are still many flaws. Considering that it is a fanfic, most of the authors are young and new. The content and settings of the original work are also considered very sophisticated. If you rate it among mortal fans, you can give it a passing grade. I wish the author better and better as he writes. But I'll take a look first. If there is any improvement, please continue to check. If the problem persists, to be honest, I don't want to pursue it anymore.

The water is so powerful, there are not too many updates every day, but there is almost no progress. The new scene must describe the environment in detail, including pavilions and pavilions. There are also plots that are of no use, such as the one updated today, where I wrote a chapter about Jin Qing. Just wait until you finish updating this dungeon and skip to read it. It's really tiring to chase.

You can write four chapters about having a baby. That's awesome.

The fighting scenes are a bit long-winded. As a swordsman, a few or two swords should solve the problem. Clean, simple, direct and over-level killing is what a swordsman should be like.

Seeing the level of hydrology in Chapter 212 made me feel like I used AI. The author always likes to describe the environment, psychology, action, original plot, and then what about the protagonist. A batch of water. But even though there are many flaws, this is one of the few mortals who made me continue to follow up after watching it. Nowadays, nine out of ten books written by mortals cannot be read and thrown into the trash can. This one at least has a score of seven or eight and can be read. The update is okay, I'll give you two months of tickets to encourage you.

After seeing Chapter 140, I want to ask where Yuan Yao and Yan Li went.

The demon cultivator who transcends the thunder tribulation of transformation has the emperor's liquid, is it gone?

The author can strengthen the arc of the character, either like Han Li, who always protects her teammates in front of her, has a bottom line in doing things but is cautious to save her life; or is extremely domineering, in the world of immortality, there are people who can only kill all things, and some people use all things to prove the only one, and I am the only one; There are too many good plug-ins, and they are not systematic. It feels like they are just forcibly blended together, which is almost meaningless.

Don't forget that there seems to be a inheritance in the Bloody Forbidden Land. The demon species can also be given to Dayan's remnant soul. After all, Dayan is considered a talent.

The author writes very well, but it's just a bit overdone.