American Comics: Hero Killer, Slaying Iron Man from the Start

I hope you pay attention to controlling your combat power this time. Every time your combat power suddenly expands, you can no longer control it.

I read the player's book before, and the one that impressed me the most was Wallon. His appearance in the New York battle was so handsome. Wallon is very handsome, the trio is very handsome, and Ah Fu is very handsome. Wallon is the absolute protagonist in the first few volumes, but the big scenes in the subsequent volumes are not as good as the first time. However, there are too many and too complex characters in the back, and everyone's screen time is too little. Instead, everyone becomes a supporting role. It's better to enrich the content of an event, highlight the protagonist in the event, and make the characters fuller. Don't just start a big fight, which is too dry.

It looks interesting, but there are too few of them at the moment. The author should try not to make the same old habit again. You can write in separate scenes and only design a few characters for one scene. If necessary, you can also arrange for the characters to be offline.

It's messier than the previous one, but it still has a familiar smell. I don't know what's burning. I just know that the avenue has been wiped out again. It looks really good.

Speaking of which, I really fell in love with Mephisto in the last book It is rare to see an author write a super oppressive, ambitious and villainous villain Boss, who is also a pure evil devil king. The part about sacrificing all the broken hells to become holy really made my blood boil Nowadays, most villains like to bring a little bit of youth and mission, otherwise they just have lofty ideals. The protagonists are generally hot-blooded and brainless, and I am really speechless after watching them. The light novels in Japan started a few years ago, and most of the stories have become toilet paper. I don't want to read them, so the nonsensical and funny works are acceptable I hope this one can also have a villain boss of that level, and I hope there will be more of them in daily life. Although it's fun to watch the fast-paced story with constant climaxes, it's also easy to get tired. Ww

File records of troublemakers who have broken into the Marvel world~

This name change smells like an assembly line

Come on, author🙂. Oh, by the way, don't let the Eastern system appear here, roll call, or anything like the King of Hell.

I would like to call Lucky Snake a fan, and he will trick Iron Man at the beginning of every book.

The combat power is expanding too fast. You can write more about daily life.