Douluo Dalu: No Martial Soul from the Start

The most vicious thing about this author is that he always lets Tang San discover his secrets and makes Tang San too strong. This makes me sick.

Let's break down the cp thing. I don't know whether the author wants to break it up or not. The current plot is that Tang San likes Xiao Wu, Xiao Wu likes the protagonist, and the protagonist has no ideas about men and women. If you don't want to break it up, you shouldn't write that Xiao Wu likes the protagonist from the beginning. If it is to be broken down, when the Titan Giant Ape appears later, I hope it will not be a trick where Tang San is desperate for his own safety, the protagonist is careless, and in the end Xiao Wu chooses Tang San or continues to be entangled. Readers can accept the unpleasantness of the journey, but they certainly cannot accept the disgusting plot.

It can be said that Noumenon Sect is the force that is most in line with the core values ​​of socialism. In Dou 2, if Noumenon Sect wants to absorb more Noumenon soul masters, it must promote policies with positive impact, such as popularizing free martial soul awakening, free basic education in the first and second rings, and a stable and fair social order. Increase the civilian base and increase per capita GDP. From this point of view, the Noumenon Sect is more like an interest group that starts out as common people, has ordinary talents, has unlimited potential, has different qualifications, is supported by teachers, has knowledge ties, and can break through desperate situations. I hope to rewrite the development direction of Noumenon Sect and avoid repeating the same mistakes. Don't completely fall to Tianhun or any country. The Noumenon Sect should build its own power, absorb the Noumenon Martial Spirits of various countries, deeply study the essence of Martial Souls and soul guides, and then represent the interests of the most advanced knowledge and technology of the human race. Tianhun Xingluo is an alliance of big nobles. It advocates suppressing civilian soul masters, collecting taxes on the awakening of martial souls - if you don't have enough money, you will sell yourself, and invisible taxes on various highly sticky consumer goods during the cultivation process - buying raw materials from civilians at low prices and selling finished products at high prices to earn a large proportion of technical processing fees. On the other hand, in order to develop technology-soul guides, Sun and Moon need to vigorously recruit civilian geniuses, popularize basic education, free martial soul awakening fees, and make junior soul master colleges almost free, and build grassroots political power. Therefore, the higher-ups will know about the soul masters awakened by Sun and Moon Danfan almost immediately. Comparing the sun and the moon with the Heavenly Soul Star Luo Xiang, the fundamental interests of the sun and the moon are closer to the Noumenon Sect. The marriage between Tianhun and Vina is more like selling one's butt. Vina's first interest is still the royal rule of Tianhun. For this purpose, the main body can be sent up and down to fill in the lines. After the backbone of the main body died in the battle and could no longer bring benefits to Tianhun, he turned to the next generation of leaders of Shrek, hoping to repeat the previous routine against the main body sect: Wei Na sacrificed his life in exchange for the opponent's life to fill the battle line.       ，，， At first glance, this seems to be a lot easier to cooperate with one country to find the ontology, but at the same time, it is difficult to cooperate with other countries to find newly awakened people of the ontology. With the emergence of the top combat power of the Noumenon Sect, those who have awakened the new Noumenon martial soul will be hidden, suppressed, eliminated, and studied privately by the nobles, royal families, and soul master families. Based on this, the Noumenon Sect should not move closer to Tianhun Xingluo, at least openly neutral. Otherwise, if the Heavenly Soul Sun and Moon start a war, what will happen to the original soul master who was born in the noble family of the Sun and Moon in the original sect, and the original son fights against the father of the soul master? Instead, they can start preliminary cooperation with Sun and Moon. Sun and Moon hire Noumenon Sect to help hunt souls and output refining medicine and soul guidance tools. The main body sect collects the main body soul masters, food system, and auxiliary system through the sun and moon. Then use the ice marrow from Dilongmen to contact the Snow Emperor, and exchange half for friendship and half for soul bones. The two extremes of Poisonous Snow Emperor are just right enough to go to the Sun and Moon Arsenal to steal equipment. The most important thing is that you can use the top soul master resources at hand, skip the whole body without looking for the official political power, and secretly look for the 79th and 89th level soul masters who are approaching their end, to help them break through the Soul Saint Soul Douluo and extend their life for fifty years. The soul masters of 7989 were unable to break through due to insufficient martial soul potential, so they actively or passively turned to researching soul guidance devices. They have been immersed in them all year round, and their soul guidance knowledge and skills are definitely among the best at their level. To rescue them at this time is just like reselling state-owned enterprises back then, and it's all for nothing. Cultivate a group of rare and guardian soul beasts, and build a high-quality soul beast forest nearby. Form an alliance of your own/origin and win over humanoid spirits, such as Titan Spirit, Healing Angel Spirit, and Holy Angel Spirit. During the Soul Master Competition, it can be considered that some of the young soul masters of the main body will not participate in the name of the main body, but will join other teams during the competition period in the form of mercenary bidding. The first is to make money, the second is to make friends, the third is to obtain information, and the fourth is to find the soul master conveniently. There is no analogy between the civilians of Douluo and the civilians of real society. The civilian class in real society is the main source of soldiers for the army and the main source of force for the army. The main source of force for Douluo's army is Titled Douluo and ninth-level soul masters and the soul guides they make. The main source of troops is 4567 ring soul masters. Therefore, the civilians in Douluo do not include those without soul rings. It can be said that ordinary people in Dou 2 have no bargaining power, but Dou 3 is slightly more respectable. What can really be counted are children before awakening their martial souls at the age of six, and 123 ring soul masters. These are the common people in Douluo. I will make some arrangements, please note it down, author First, use your power to collect as many body souls as possible, such as Nether Nana's family of three (mother and daughter's soul souls), exert influence on the body soul owners, and increase the sense of identity and belonging to the protagonist. After most of the second level martial souls join the Noumenal Sect after a thousand years, they will seek the right to speak or influence based on their numbers (merits). Strive to change the ending of Dou Er's original text. Second, cultivate an organic soul master to research and create an echelon, recruit people, and build a team. Looking for the soul master whose 7989 deadline is approaching. Research new soul tools that forge metal and use physics knowledge. Third, hunt at sea and collect cultivation resources. Qi-blood shrimp, Qi-blood bread. Cultivate food-based soul masters. Refining various types of elixirs for cultivation, foundation building, and limit breaking. Fourth, find ways to increase the soul bone explosion rate. Fifth, avoid facing the sun and the moon directly. After the linked soul guide comes out, you will never be able to win.

It's like copying the original text, so what role does your protagonist have? After reading so many chapters, I don't see the role of your protagonist.

The protagonist is a modern time traveler who has never seen Douluo. In this kind of world of cultivation, a sect comes to invite him but he actually refuses. Moreover, he is recommended to the protagonist to go to Wuhun Academy. In the end, the protagonist goes to Shrek to learn how to move rocks.

It's too similar to the original work. I might as well read the original work.

The more I write, the more I have some problems. For example, Xiao Wu, if you want to tear down the original CP, you have to be decisive to feel better. Now the writing is indecisive, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

I don't quite understand this kind of fan fiction that doesn't understand the original text. You also designed the timeline to be the same as the protagonist of the original work. Or is it a world like Douluo with 0 scientific research, 0 culture and 0 development, and it all depends on the author's skill to make the protagonist think and do things? What I thought was true is that the biggest flaw is that the whole world is thinking about the protagonist, soul ring selection, development direction, etc. Of course, the funniest thing is being stabbed in the back and then not being ready to trust anyone. Then you shouldn't stay in human society, because the author doesn't even understand the most basic social structure.

When it was released, it kept following the plot of the original work, so it became unreadable.

Author, is there Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine?