In Douluo Dalu, I Get Swindled Out of My Inheritance from the Start?

There is nothing left to write about the theme of Laojiao Dou Yi, and there are still many themes to be developed in Dou Er. Write another Dou Er. Learn from the lessons learned from the last time you wrote Dou Er. Don't have anything to do with the guests anymore, especially the evil crazy woman who collects shit beetles. Heart, can't you write about Huo Mie Tang, a shithole, and provide a few themes, 1. Angels walking on the Star Luo Line (the Heavenly Soul fights against the Soul Beetle and he can't go there, and the Sun and Moon Evil Spirit Master's base camp can't go), 2. The Soul Beast Line in the Dragon Valley, turned into a dragon egg, and was investigated by the Dragon God After reading the memories, he and Jialin hatched and were born in advance, and got the inheritance of the Dragon God. In the 3rd Sun and Moon Royal Line, he set up the inheritance of Zihuang, the ancestor of the Yalong, in the Secret Realm of Destroying the Sky Dragon. The protagonist just needs to be named Xu Tiance. In 4th line, he became the grandson of Zhang Peng, the Dark Demon. The evil tiger spirit uses a living carving knife to attract Electrolux and disguises itself as a bright white tiger. The 5-father, loving-son and filial path is first reincarnated into Xu Yunhan, and then by accident, he returns to Huogou to get Tianmeng. If you get Electrolux, the second martial spirit must be Frostmourne.

The protagonist is someone else's golden finger, right? Most of the content is about improving other people's talents. Douluo will die quickly if he writes a group portrait.

Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Dugu Yan, and Ye Lingling will not follow the same old path again. Recruited by Qian Renxue, the hero saves the beauty, Zhu Zhuqing, the fairy grass code, Dugu Yan, and a nanny Ye Lingling. If you follow the above routine again, reading this way will be very tiring, and you will feel like you are going back to the previous books. Better change it. And there are so many female protagonists, let's add Shui Bing, Huo Wu, and Zhu Zhuyun too. One more is never too much.

Why did Dou Yiyi choose Zhu Zhuqing basically as a cup?

I hope there will be severe revenge on Bibi Dong and Hu Liena later on ❤️ 😍😁

The content is quite procrastinating. A few chapters or even a dozen chapters should be written for the trivial matter of giving Qian Renxue a massage. Du Buhui can also write four or five chapters for studying the original martial spirit. Does anyone really want to read four or five chapters for studying the original martial spirit in a fan who is anti-Tang San? The overall plot rhythm feels far worse than the previous books, at most it is worse than the one that hugs the thigh. It is recommended to speed up the pace and write as early as possible until the competition starts, torturing Tang San, torturing Yu, Xiaogang, to Bibi Dong, tormenting Hu Liena. Stop studying martial arts theory from there, and don't train teammates from there. Write to the point where you feel better earlier, and then write the funnier plot in detail, and try to finish the next Dou Er book. The previous Dou Er book was good at the beginning, but it ended hastily with the clones at the end, which is a pity. The most important point: it is enough to focus the plot on the protagonists, Tang San, Yu Xiaogang, Bibi Dong and Hu Liena. Tang Hao and others can also write about them when they are needed for fun, but really don't write about those useless supporting characters. There is really no desire to see anything about massage or body martial arts. Don't deviate from what readers want to see. In fact, in the last book Dou Er, the author committed the problem of weakening the main character role that most readers want to see in the middle and late stages. The focus was on the "doppelgänger" and other characters. Needless to say, the result was that the writing was very good at the beginning but ended hastily. I originally thought that the author would change it after learning his lesson, but in the end, this book has become even worse 😅

As title

Angel God, Qian Renxue

Why is this book labeled as a genius stream? Isn't this a waste stream?

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong's Q picture for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan in Picture A, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!