Douluo Dalu: This Soul Master Has a Hearty Appetite

As soon as I joined Shrek, I got used to Ning Rongrong's eldest temper, Dai Mubai's provocation, Ma Hongjun's bad mouth, etc. The protagonist has a good temper and doesn't say any harsh words. He competes with Dai Mubai and gently advises Ning Rongrong, but Ma Hongjun doesn't pay attention to it. I want to see a river of blood! Rather than a gentle and polite protagonist

I don't understand why I went to Shrek, it was useless, and I was stared at by Tang Hao. Wouldn't it be better to go directly to Tiandou City? If you cut off Dugu Yan, there will be immortal grass.

Don't you cry to death after not hearing anything from Jack for five years? After leaving the Star Forest, there should be an over-the-top plot to flesh out the character. Directly arranging Shrek is very stiff and gives people the impression that you are rushing to the schedule. Don't be so anxious and write it in detail according to the outline. The advantage of fan fiction is that you don't need to portray the personality of the supporting characters, you should portray your own protagonist.

If you are a civilian genius, your best choice is to join the Spirit Hall. Or hook up with Ning Rongrong. Without any background, you defy the rules of an empire. Even if Dai Mubai is given up, he must be monitored by people from the Star Luo Empire before the victory is over with Davis. When you want to destroy the relationship between the two of you, you will only die. So how is it possible that this protagonist is still alive?

The poison is amplified at the beginning, the twin spirits and the main body are not even at level one even if they are eliminated.

How can twin martial souls have level one soul power? How can you try to awaken twin martial souls at level one? It is impossible for a powerful martial soul to have a soul power that is too low, otherwise it will degrade.

The potential of the twin martial arts has been known to Tang Hao. In addition, you have conflicts with Tang Sanyu and Xiaogang. It is already a big threat. Don't think that Tang Hao will keep you, and Qibao will not destroy you. The normal and real world is 100% dead, unless it is written without brains.

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity. The main body martial spirit plus weapon martial spirit is a very good subject matter, but it is very confusing. Since you want to rebel against the Tang Dynasty, you should stick to this position. But, I don't understand what you wrote. In fact, it started when you took Tang Hao to the Ice and Fire Lianyi Eye Opener. From the beginning, I knew you were bad at writing. Tang Hao is not a fool. He can definitely tell the difference between a good thing and a bad thing. You dig up the fairy grass, and after finishing the fairy grass catalog, it is still Tang San's. It's so confusing Judging from your attitude towards Yu and Tang San, you undoubtedly want to leave Tang San. Opposite, but looking at your plot, I am very confused, not to mention it is for the fairy grass, everyone knows that the fairy grass can just go to Dugubo and tell Dugubo the password The author had better explain this split plot as soon as possible, otherwise it will affect the score 😟 As an old bookworm, I rarely post long comments, but I am really optimistic about the theme of the body and the stick I hope this book will get better and better.

Don't avoid the little Yakuza when it's weak in the early stage. Anyone who jumped in front of him would either be killed by a hidden weapon or crushed to death by a mouse. In the early stage, the protagonist, a grassroots character, would be smarter to avoid the little brat. Mindless jumping is simply putting life and death in a mouse's thoughts.

It is natural for the time traveler to be hostile to Tang San. Unless they never interact with them, they are bound to be hostile. Once they interact, who knows when they offend Tang San, they will be killed. If you accidentally hurt Xiao Wu who likes to rush in the front during a spirit fight or competition, you will definitely be retaliated by Tang San. If you inadvertently reveal your evaluation of Yu Xiaogang's theory, Tang San will definitely turn against you and make you apologize. Unless like the other six monsters, they have lost their personality and become Tang San's pendant. He is the leader.