Dark Cultivation

The author should not write about the bloody plot about the family. He should not write about the family earlier. It would be great if the protagonist is an orphan.

In this genre, it feels better to replace the system flow with the protagonist's top talent, but the panel flow is a bit too much!

Thank you everyone😁

170,000 Words are still on the third level of Qi Refining. Does the author really not consider speeding up the practice? If this continues, the pace will be very fast if it is to be completed later.

The progress is too slow. It's already chapter 30. I've been promoted to level 1 since the beginning. Now I'm still on the second level of Qi training. I'll probably reach the fourth level of Qi training when it's released.

The hang-up does not match the progress. Qi training is so grinding. Is it also called hang-up?

This novel is still readable, and there is nothing poisonous about it, but the writing is not enjoyable enough. It's a bit overwhelming, and the cultivation progress is too slow. The author probably wants to improve the word count. But if you do, your results won't be much better. Because I didn't write it to give readers the pleasure they wanted, I naturally didn't give you anything back.

The author is frantically pressing the schedule. These days, when novels about cultivating immortals are released, they are basically building the foundation, and the protagonist has only reached the fourth level of Qi training.

I suggest changing the name to Mist Cultivating Immortal. If the apocalypse really happens, I think everyone will just want to survive and not be so disunited, so it is better to call Mist Cultivating Immortal. It is just that there is a crisis but there is still civil war, which proves that the pressure is not great.

Are there any authors who can beat the competition now? Haha, that's very reasonable.

This cultivation progress is a bit too slow.

Why not strengthen your cultivation talents? , This way, cultivation will be faster if the bottleneck is gone

Moreover, the world view has not been developed yet. We are just changing the maps of the outer camps, aristocratic families, sects, forces, various social classes, and weirdness (in the early stage, weirdness can kill people. After the protagonist changes the camp, the subsequent storyline will basically not be weird at night. If the weirdness in the outer area is so easy to be resisted, then I feel that weirdness is just a filter for the poor and the rich), how the weirdness is generated, why there is black fog, and there is currently no clear and clear main line (if you add some main lines, there will be).

The author of this new book wants to read it, but the words are too few and he wants to read it. The author wants to read it, but he doesn't want to read it. So it's best for the author to be more enthusiastic

It's on the shelves. It's not yet the fourth floor of Qi training. You must be pressing too hard. The next door must be at least the eighth or ninth floor of Qi training.

I'm really not happy about writing this kind of dark story. The protagonist has only been in a new environment for a short time, and he is so moved by a small favor. Otherwise, don't write this kind of dark story. It's an environment where people cannibalize people. It's so childishly written. All primary school students know that it is necessary to be on guard against others. It is better to write about traditional genres than to cultivate immortality in the dark. It's like playing house. What the hell are you writing about? The problem is that there are still people who can really watch it.

Forget it, keep it up first, I want to see how many words are used to build the foundation

I think the protagonist should simply give up the attribute point of martial arts and specialize in spellcasting, soul, and physique. These three are enough. Otherwise, it may be suspected of suppressing combat power/lowering intelligence.

The pressure is too harsh, and there is no interest in watching it Either you don't give it, or if you do, don't press it randomly! !

"Traveling through the strange world of immortality, I become stronger by selling Kun to add more points"

No, how do ordinary people in this world live?

Xinfeng has recovered from the dead and has won the resurrection match The guy who wrote about One Punch Mage, averaged 100,000 words and still hasn't given up, and there is no such person The old eunuch who wrote about Warhammer Wizard, the books are excellent, every book is missing, and he has disappeared (visually there are already more than a dozen titles) Written about the eunuch who died of the Lord God and also changed his ways. Although there are not many words, the story is complete and it is also a high-quality book History tells the story of the big eunuch who later moved to another star field or became a clone The guy who picked up attribute points should have escaped to the outer world. Taibaishuijun is a high-quality character and is not a prisoner. His character guarantees that he will be sought after by thousands of people if he can separate good corpses. I have said so much just to tell the author that one copy of Eunuch will leave half of the people, and two copies of Eunuch will make your account useless (there is no follow-up reading at all)

Why don't you find a treasure pill that improves your qualifications? If it's too expensive and the grade isn't that high, as long as it has this effect, then add more. After taking it, your cultivation will be accelerated by n times. Cheating and practicing so slowly

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Well written and exciting, keep it up

It's a pity, the results are indeed not very good

I think it's okay? If your grades are not good, you should pay too little attention to it. It would be better if you give it less water. Write that every day.

Seventy or eighty of them can only be used to practice the third or fourth level of Qi. It's too watery, otherwise it's still okay.

It's pretty good. Except for the slow upgrade, it's like a eunuch.

The first two books ended haphazardly, and now it's Eunuch. I am a fully subscribed reader, and I will reward some of them, but I probably won't follow the next one.