Building an Immortal Clan from a Humble Family Tree

Spring: Spring (beginning of spring, rain) Struggle for spring (Jingzhe, vernal equinox) Tibetan spring (Qingming, Guyu) Summer: Ming summer (beginning of summer, Xiaoman) Severe summer (awnzhong, summer solstice) Long summer (slight heat, great heat) Autumn: Chengqiu (beginning of autumn, end of heat) Golden autumn (white dew, autumnal equinox) Suqiu (cold dew, frost) Winter: Long winter (beginning of winter, light snow) Silent winter (heavy snow, winter solstice) Dead winter (slight cold, severe cold)

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This book is well written. The advantage is the setting, and the disadvantage is also the setting. If I look at it purely from a reader's perspective, using solar terms should not have anything to do with the five virtues of Xuanjian. I know that yours is a text similar to Xuanjian, and it must be related to the system of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but you have obviously created a new setting. If you have a setting you want to write, it is best not to associate it with the five virtues and five manifestations of Xuanjian. Such a setting system is too huge, and the solar terms are already complicated enough. If it is related to the five virtues and five manifestations of Xuanjian, it will be impossible to control it. Moreover, Xuanjian's systems will look better if they are combined with various heroes. Your character creation is obviously a bit bland. My suggestion is that at most it should be linked to the heavenly stems and the earthly branches, and just briefly introduce which solar terms belong to Dinghuo, Guishui and so on. And the author, if you want to write a group portrait, don't write it like 🐔. The most important problem now is that your characters are not established. I have read the last chapter before charging. If you just read it as a fresh setting article, it is still It's good, but readers have much less desire to subscribe. You'd better not write about what happened to those who returned to their hometowns. Instead, write about your solar terms. Which solar terms have pitfalls, which one is in jail, which one's founder has the kind of character that Liang Zhuang has? It's also best not to change perspectives or characters frequently. The part where Xu Xuan appears at the beginning of Da Chi Xian Sect and recalls his master taking him in is very well written, especially the plot after Da Chi Xian Sect's Purple Mansion is also very good. If you want to refer to it, I think the best way to write it is to refer to the story after Da Chi Xian Sect's Purple Mansion. I haven't watched Qingwu Immortal Clan. There is also someone who started from predicting death and became a Taoist by slaying dragons at the same time as you. Compared with yours, this book has the advantage of not being a group portrait and having a fixed perspective. Moreover, this book has a lot of problems in the early stage. It was written before chapter 30. It was very stream-of-consciousness. If you are not a person who likes to read slow books, it will be very confusing. I gave up at that time. However, the author later changed the way of writing, especially after chapter 30, his big plot unfolded, the shaping of characters and the reversal of the plot made people want to continue reading. If you want to learn from Da Chi, don't learn from his beginning. You can learn from his plot writing after the Purple Mansion. If you want to learn from Beheading Jiao to Become Dao, then learn from his characterization and writing. The characterization method of 🐔 is difficult to learn. It is better to learn from the authors of the same period. The two books I mentioned are both mystical essays. You can also look at other fairy tale writing methods. If you can write something of your own, one more suggestion is that you should not borrow the content of Xuanjian when it comes to your chapter names, especially today's water falls and thunder rises. This in Xuanjian is related to the offline of Dongfang Yu, which involves a lot of subsequent plots and foreshadowings, and raises the expectations of people who have read it too much. Your chapter title is too big, but the content is very bland. People who have read Xuanjian don't want to subscribe to this chapter. I will continue to follow you and order your subsequent chapters to see if any of them stand out. If so, I will order them all. Come on

After Xuanjian, all the works of the family cultivating immortals were compared with Xuanjian. What was copied here and what was borrowed there. I was watching "Xian Jiao" at the same time. It was not a family cultivating immortality, but the system almost copied Xuan Jian. Of course, that doesn't stop it from being a good work. Although this genealogy of a poor family is about family cultivation, the "reference" to Xuanjian in terms of the cultivation system is far less than that of "Immortal Jiao". What's even more amazing is that the author's writing style can be called "wen Congzi shun", which makes reading like a spring breeze. Perhaps in terms of overall writing ability, the author is not as good as a chicken for the time being. But in terms of writing skills, I think the author is better than a chicken!

The green rain on the mulberry trees urges the people to return, and the mysterious female crosses the lonely boat before the wind. The white gravel smoke gives birth to spring, and the faith is gone, and the golden thread locks the lotus in autumn.

I feel that level improvement is not the main thing. Since I have learned from Xuanjian and promoted the foundation building, Zifu is holding me down, and I have been promoted to Zifu with Jindan at the top, I am still struggling no matter what. The main thing is to stir up the mood every once in a while, whether it is a simple matter or a so-called refreshing one. If you are too slow, you may lose some readers. The author still has to be careful. After all, there is only one mysterious book. Scholars live and die.

Every Tuesday is for catching up on reading pk. If you want to keep reading, I hope you can come back every Tuesday to read it. This way you won't be addicted to new books. Thank you very much 😭

Who are you? The owl actually did your voiceover🙂

The Jiang family is obviously being watched by the Zifu. At this time, Yuhe's cultivation suddenly jumped from the early stage of Qi training to the late stage. If I were this Zifu, if I were this Zifu, I would follow suit and come to visit the Li family at night. If the Jiang family didn't 🐢🐢, then they would have to be exterminated.

For new books, do not switch scenes frequently. Quantum Reading has a lot of readers, and changing the perspective frequently will dissuade many people. In addition, changing the perspective will affect the reading experience. Some readers will save books, but this is a new book that is not popular. If many people save books, it will affect the performance. Moreover, many people forget about it after saving it, and it may be left on the bookshelf for several years without touching it. In addition, it is a genealogical fairy weapon that is basically similar to the family, which is different from Xuanjian; there is really no need to create an illusory fairy palace and fabricate heavenly soldiers and generals; since you want to write your own things, you can just learn from part of the Xuanjian system. If you create a vain fairy palace, Xuanjian readers will be tired of it.