Cultivation Begins with an Ice Harvester

Since when has it become popular to start a story by suppressing the protagonist's cowardice, with clenched fists and expressions of dissatisfaction? Garbage.

Also, the ice harvester's story feels a bit ambiguous and not very appealing. The author might consider adding some tags and changing the book title.

Write well, add more details, and write me to the spirit world. I want to see the shadows of Zhao Shoushou and Sun Mingsheng.

The sentences are incoherent and full of grammatical errors.

Two chapters to kill a monster? Do you think this book will become a hit if you write it like this?

You're really something... Level 4 Qi Refining and you're eyeing Level 7 stuff... Bro, you're not even at Level 6. It takes you years to go from Level 4 to Level 6, can you even protect it? Speechless. No wonder hardly anyone watches this.

It's tiring to watch; there's too much psychological description; the extortion scene at the beginning is unrealistic; weak.

A single Thunder Pearl costing 50 spirit stones wiped out three mid-stage players. All three possessed spirit weapons worth over 100 spirit stones each, yet none had any defensive capabilities. When fighting Boss Liu, he had a superior defensive spirit weapon and didn't need to rely solely on spirit talismans for defense. The protagonist also prioritized offense over defense.

I haven't watched it yet. I have a question: since you're cultivating immortality, why do you still need to collect ice for a living? Can't you just create ice easily with water-based cultivation techniques? If you're saying water spiritual roots aren't ice spiritual roots, then disregard what I said. But since you're cultivating immortality, can't you at least develop some temperature control abilities? 🙂

Is being verbose a sign of illogical thinking or a lack of self-confidence?